我的社区作文英语五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我的社区作文英语五年级【二】
??的愿望-五年级“春蚕到丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。这句千古名句是对老师的赞美，在老师的影响下，我也想成为一名光荣的人民教师。
那天是星期四，我因病旷课了一天。星期五，我昏昏沉沉的脑袋才清醒了许多，“叮铃铃铃……清澈的铃声响起，我忙抄起电话，“你的病好多了没呀？老师温和的声音在我耳畔回荡。“下午放学时我顺道回家，在公园内帮你补补课吧。“好好，谢谢老师！我内心欣喜不已，对老师千言万语的感谢却只化作一句谢谢，挂了电话，我的内心还是暖融融的，如沐春风……下午，我准时应约来到小公园的桌凳旁，远远地便看见一个倩影，“老师－－我扯着嗓子喊，那身影回头，入目的是红润的脸庞。我忙落坐，心里像打着鼓，有些紧张地捏了捏裤脚，鼻尖沁出了细汗，不自然地拿出课本。老师似是看出了我的刻意，安慰似的拍了拍我的肩，这亲近的动作让我放松了许多。于是，便细心听起了课，老师认真细心地讲着，我沉浸其中。不知过了多久，我慢慢感到了凉意，下意识地动了动脚。老师发现我不断打着冷颤，就把她的风衣给我披在了身上，然后继续一丝不苟地辅导我。我瞬间热泪盈眶，鼻头酸酸的`，眼泪像开了闸似的，心里却如过娟娟细流，一点又一点地滋润着我干涸的心田。初秋的傍晚微微刮着冷风，夕阳在一丝丝云下似无可奈何般慢慢落下，紫红色的长天，我与老师的影子拉得长长的，透过叶隙，斑驳的点点夕阳落一地。
我金色的回忆正在慢慢褪去，有些记忆似生命过客被抛之脑后，然而我的恩师将永远烙在我的脑海中，她一丝不苟的工作态度，她平易近人的洒脱性格，都在我脑海中挥之不去，我要成为他这样的老师。
为实现这个愿望，我要在学习知识的道路上勇往直前，纵使前路满铺荆棘，我也要无畏前行！
我的社区作文英语五年级【三】
夕阳西下，忙碌了一天的社区居民们拖着疲倦的步伐回到了社区，投入到一个没有纠纷、喧嚣的世界中来。压力与辛苦溶解在亲人的一杯热茶之中，消失在点点黄晕的灯光之下。吃过晚饭后，社区里的居民们有的喜欢打一会羽毛球，有的喜欢打一场篮球，还有的喜欢打一会乒乓球。各家各户的老人们总要在棋盘上闯一次自己的“世界杯”。我则愿意呆在家中，看一看书，听一听音乐，放松一下心情。这时的社区，与星辰一起休息了。
我欣赏着发生在身边的点点滴滴，觉得它们是如此的美丽，你闻到她的馨香了吗？文明，它给我们带来了幸福，在社区这片净土上，吹绿了树，染红了花，挖开了深藏在每个人内心深处的心结，结出了互相关心之果。
