考研英语一作文评分细则【一】
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
考研英语一作文评分细则【二】
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。考研英语一作文评分细则【三】
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍，
欢迎来到中国！你写信给我找个地方给你。
我已经找到了一套公寓附近的芳草街荐新学校。它在第三层，里面有三个房间：一间卧室，一间厨房和一间浴室。卧室里有一张床，一张沙发，一张桌子和一把椅子。房子面积25平方米，每月租金500元。
也从这所房子你可以很容易地到你的学校。就在楼前的汽车站乘11路公共汽车。它只是一站。最后，请你告诉我你到达的时间吗？然后我就可以去机场接你，看到你。
最美好的祝愿！
你的
李华
考研英语一作文评分细则【四】
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。考研英语一作文评分细则【五】
Hello, today is May Day. I and My father, mother and sister went shopping. We bought, lollipops, ice creams, cornflakes, toasts, butter, orange, milk and rolls. And my mother bought toys for me. Such as: train, ball, balloon, car, doll, plane and skateboard. After that we went to zoo. I saw rabbit, tigers, snails, and lions, hamsters, budgies and zebras. My sister asked me “what do your like?” I answered “I like skipping rope. That’s very nice.” She said “Here is you prize, Sunny!” “Oh, thank you! I love it!” I shouted. We sat under a tree. After lunch we drank some milk.
Today I am very happy!
考研英语一作文评分细则【六】
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍，
这些天你怎么了？
我很高兴知道你会来我们的城市学习中文。你让我找个地方给你。现在我发现了一个我认为很不错的。这个地方是在芳草街11号附近的巴士站。它只是一个停止远离建中文学校。
有三间房间，一间厨房，一间浴室和一间卧室。虽然不是很大，只有25平方米，我觉得很适合。按方式，每月租金为500元。我希望你会喜欢它。如果没有，我会试着找另一个地方给你。
你的，
李华
