考研英语二作文评分标准对照表【一】
A lion once fell in love with a beautiful girl, so he went to her parents and asked them to marry her to him.
The old parents did not know what to say.
They did not like the idea of giving their daughter to the lion, but they did not want to enrage the king of beasts.
At last the father said, "We are glad to marry our daughter to you, but we fear that you might possibly hurt her. So if you remove your claws and teeth, we will give her to you."
The lion loved the girl very much, so he trimmed his claws and took out his big teeth. When he came to the parents again, they simply laughed in his face, and beat him out of their house.
恋爱中的狮子
●一只狮子爱上了一位美丽的女孩儿，便找到她的父母向她求婚。
●女孩儿的父亲不知道该如何回答，他不忍将女儿许配给野兽，但又害怕激怒这兽中之王。
●于是父亲说：“我们很乐意将女儿嫁给你，但又怕你不小心伤害她，如果你拔去牙齿，剁掉利爪，我们就将女儿嫁给你。”
●狮子非常爱这个女孩儿，于是他修剪了爪子，拔掉了尖牙后又去找女孩的父母。可是这时，他们嘲笑他，并把他赶了出去。
寓意: 有些人轻易相信别人的话，抛弃自己的长处，结果轻而易举地被原来害怕他们的人击败了。
考研英语二作文评分标准对照表【二】
“我不喜欢弟弟或妹妹，因为那样爸爸妈妈就不会再爱我……”最近上网总能看到类似于二胎这样的话题。这个政策是去年新颁布的，瞬间引起了社会各界的更关注，它已成为我们备考高考作文的话题之一。
此政策在网络和微信上引发了热议(become a sensation on the Internet and We Chat。不少网友认为"00后"(children born after 2000太自私，即使是同意父母生二胎的`孩子，在有了弟弟妹妹后脾气也会变坏。但也有不少人认为，这仅仅是教育方式的问题而已(the problem lies in education。如青岛一所小学的一群四年级学生日前成立了"反弟弟妹妹联盟"，说服父母不要生二胎。(A group of fourth-graders at an elementary school in Qingdao formed an "anti-siblings alliance" in an effort to persuade their parents not to have a second child.该校一名老师最近发现，班里有八个孩子常聚在一起窃窃私语，讨论这件事(hold secret meetings to discuss the issue。这些学生担心弟弟妹妹会分走自己独享的父母宠爱(steal their parents' exclusive love。
有话题就会有相关词汇，这就要求大家在平常的学习中多多积累，这样到用了时候心中自然就有丘壑。同时也可以扩充相关词汇，如：流动人口mobile population;独生子女家庭only child family;生育时间表birth time schedule;备孕plan for pregnancy。
二胎政策实施过程中，也给社会带来了一定的影响。这一部分探讨也可以作为作文的写作素材。如全面二孩政策(universal two-child policy出台后，中国内地主要城市三居室或四居室的大户型房子(large three or four-bedroom homes销量攀升。北京和上海等城市的很多夫妇正在搜寻居住环境更佳的大房子(hunt for larger homes with a better environment，为家里添丁加口早做准备。据估计，新的生育政策将使未来5年内多增加1700万新生儿(extra 17m babies being born within the next five years。
考研英语二作文评分标准对照表【三】
在家乡 My Hometown’>我的.家乡有一个小湖，那是我最喜欢的地方之一。我总是和我的朋友一起去湖边，我们经常游泳、玩耍。有时我们会去划船，享受安静的时刻。现在的湖因为污染已经不那么干净了。我意识到保护环境的重要性。
考研英语二作文评分标准对照表【四】
China is a great country with the largest population in the world. In order to solve the population problem, our government decides to implemented one-child policy. When it is carried out for some time, many people not only see its advantages but also disadvantages. Thus, people argue that two-child policy should be put into effect. In my opinion, two-child policy should be carried out.
中国是一个人口大国。为了解决人口问题，我国政府决定实施独生子女政策。执行一段时间后，许多人不仅看到了这个政策的优点还有缺点。因此，人们开始推崇二胎政策。在我看来，二胎政策是应该实施的。作文
First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child. For some families, maybe the parents are only child and they also can have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples. Usually, a young couple looking after an old couple is a little difficult; if the pressure increasing twice, how can they stand it. But if their parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better.
首先，二胎政策对于一些独生子女来说是天赐的礼物。对于一些家庭来说，也许父母都是独生子女，而他们也只生一个孩子。抛开孩子的孤独不说，当他们的孩子长大了，而他们也变老了，他们的孩子又和一个独生子女结婚，这样的话,压在他们孩子和孩子妻子肩上的压力是不可想象的。他们的孩子和他的妻子不得不照顾两对老人。通常，一对年轻的夫妇照顾一对老人就有点难了;如果压力增加了一倍，他们怎么能忍受呢。但是如果他们的父母有两个孩子，他们就能分享照顾父母的压力。这样会比较好。
Secondly, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population. As the widely spread of one-child policy, some people have changed their conception about giving birth. If they firmly believe one-child policy, there will be more and more the dink. After several decades, our country will famous for lack of population.
其次，二胎政策可以确保中国的人口数量。由于广泛宣传独生子女政策，有些人已经改变了他们的生育观念。如果他们认同独生子女政策，就会有越老越多的丁克族。几十年后，我国就会以人口短缺而著名了。
In conclusion, one-child policy has out of date. And tow-child policy is needed and necessary. It can solve the problem of nowadays and the future.
总之，独生子女政策已经过时了。二胎政策是必要和必须的。这可以解决当前和未来的问题。
考研英语二作文评分标准对照表【五】
The hare was once boasting of his speed before the other animals. "I have never been beaten," he said, "when I run at full speed, no one is faster than me."
The tortoise said quietly, "I will race with you." "That is a good joke," said the hare. "I could dance around you the whole way."
The race started. The hare darted almost out of sight at once. He soon stopped and lay down to have a nap.
The tortoise plodded on and on. When the hare awoke from his nap, he saw the tortoise was near the finish line, and that he had lost the race.
龟兔赛跑
●兔子向动物们夸耀他的速度，“我从来没有失败过，”他说，“当我奔跑时，没有人比我更快。”
●乌龟平静地说：“我要与你比赛。”“真是笑话，我可以边玩边和你赛跑。”兔子说。
●比赛开始了，一眨眼工夫，兔子已经跑得不见了踪影，但是他觉得自己跑得快，对比赛掉以轻心，躺在路边睡着了。
●乌龟慢腾腾地却持续不停地走，当兔子一觉醒来，他看到乌龟已经快到终点线了。兔子输了比赛。
寓意: 骄兵必败；只有持之以恒，才能实现目标。
考研英语二作文评分标准对照表【六】
一是“源波讨源”、“依文论文”。“源波讨源”即要求阅卷老师要充分明白手头的作文，是考生在特殊场合和有限时间里写的“急就章”，且中学生阅历有限，因此阅卷老师应根据中学生的实际情况来评阅，按照中学生的思路来理解，不能按成人的标准来进行评价。“依文论文”就是，阅卷老师要按照文章的体裁来充分理解文章，是什么体裁（议论、说明或记叙）就按什么体裁标准来评价，不能有个人的好恶。
二是“立足给分，不立足扣分”。刘教授说，一般老师往往喜欢对学生的文章“找问题”，但考虑到考生写的是“急就章”，所以阅卷老师应立足于尽量发现考生的“闪光点”，今年作文强调感情真挚，内容充实，文体符合。此外还鼓励考生的个性发展，“个性”就是“闪光点”，因此在发展等级分方面，只要涉及标答中的一点，就可给分，直至满10分。
三是“以宽容开放心态评阅”。刘教授说，今年强调老师要以宽容、开放心态评阅考生作文。凡是和话题沾边（所谓“进了门槛”）的作文，都不当作偏题处理，当然要宽严有度。此外，鼓励阅卷老师敢于给考生作文打满分，“满分作文允许有个别瑕疵存在”。
四是“通过阅卷起到一定导向作用”。刘教授说，高考作文评卷要体现导向作用，促进教育向素质教育发展。比如说，现在倡导作文应告别模式化，端正文风，内容与形式统一，摒弃华而不实的、空洞的.东西。今年作文强调是否体现了考生的独自的、真实的生活和情感体验，思维状态是否清晰、有序展现，是否有“我”在（即个性化）。刘教授还说，今年对作文十分重视“符合文体”这一点。因此，像那种追求形式华丽、文体怪异的文章，将不受欢迎，“非驴非马”（即文体不正）的文章，不可能得高分。
据刘教授介绍，今年高考语文评卷还将严格控制速度，每位老师每天只能评120份试卷，落实到每份作文上，阅卷时间平均在4．5分钟左右。以前有媒体曾报道高考作文评分“90秒钟定生”，这在我省是无稽之谈。
