五年级英语作文公园怎么写【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文公园怎么写【二】
星期天上午，我来到街心公园,一进门就闻到一阵扑鼻的香味（“香”是公园独特的特点）。我顺着花香飘来的方向，走道公园的一角。
我静静地站在喷水池旁。只见喷水池里的水清澈见底，时时吹来一阵风，平静的水面漾起美丽的波纹，真是碧波荡漾，银光闪闪。湖中央有一座石雕仙鹤，黑色的眼珠，褐色的嘴巴，白色的羽毛，两只细长的腿一缩一立。站着的那条腿踏在一朵粉红色的石雕莲花上，嘴里吐出晶莹透亮的水珠，宛如无数颗珍珠，钻石，真是栩栩如生。（把水珠比作珍珠，钻石，形象，贴切。）
喷水池虽然美，但池旁的牡丹花更美。绿色的叶子青翠欲滴，衬着朵朵红的，白的牡丹花。牡丹花有的含苞待放，有的在争芳斗艳，真是繁花似锦。美丽的“舞蹈家”蝴蝶在花丛中飞来飞去，跳着欢乐的舞。勤劳的小蜜蜂在牡丹花丛里采花蜜。（静态的花，动态的蝴蝶，互相衬托，生机勃勃）
喷水池旁的假石山奇形怪状。山上有草，有花。山顶有一座亭子，顶着蓝色的瓦，瓦片上雕刻着精美的图案。亭子里坐满了人，有的在下象棋，有的谈笑风生……好热闹！（犹如人在画中。）
喷水池有一条走廊，里面的老人在打太极拳，有的在谈天，议论天下事……长廊旁边有片绿茵茵的草地。天真的少年和幼稚的儿童在草地上尽情娱乐。
亭子后面有几棵婆纱的柳树。柳树长长的枝条，像姑娘的秀发。远远望去，又像几位亭亭玉立的少女，楚楚动人。红棉树像一位威武的将军，巍然屹立。朵朵红棉花如颗颗红星，点缀在小枝桠上，（把柳树比作少女，把红棉树比作将军，既形象，又符合树性特点。）耀眼夺目。
我虽然有半年时间没到街心公园玩了，但那美丽的景色依然深深地印在我的脑海里。
五年级英语作文公园怎么写【三】
今天，我们一家人一起去了河东新区的五彩缤纷路上玩。但现在的五彩路可和以前的大不一样了——它建立了一个“湿地公园”！
说它是“湿地公园”,到不如说它是“湿地乐园”。这里的湿地或大或小，这里的沼泽的含水量或多或少，一大片一大片的青苔，一大群一大群的鱼儿，养育了许许多多的白鹭，生机勃勃，好不美丽。
在这一片沼泽上，有一架长长的走廊，一路上都只有沼泽相伴，显得异常幽静。偶尔有几个人与你擦肩而过，这才有了世上还有别人的感觉。路边每隔几米就有一棵树挺立在那儿。经常会有几只白鹭在树上举着它那长长的脖子向四周张望，似乎在观察有没有人入侵了它的领地，但它又是那么地胆小。我们稍微一靠近，它立马就“一扇翅膀上青天”了。路两旁时不时就会出现几块石头，如果走累了，把石头擦一擦一坐就可以休息了。
湿地公园的喇叭也是很有意思的，走在路上，突然听到一支悠扬的乐曲，四下搜寻，没有发现音箱。仔细一找，终于发现那音乐是从一只青蛙的嘴里冒出来的。走了一段路，忽然又听见了音乐，但却没有发现先前看到的青蛙音箱，仔细又找，终于发现了一朵小蘑菇，原来青蛙音箱转眼化妆成何蘑菇音箱。在已知没有青蛙和蘑菇的情况下听见音乐，你会认为它是从哪儿发出来的呢？我可是找了好久才把那个伪装成树桩的音箱“揪”出来。
阳春三月，百花齐放。在这生机勃勃的湿地公园里，自然也少不了花的影子。瞧，迎春花笑眯眯的地望着太阳公公；桃花涨红了脸，好像在说：别看我，我害羞；玉兰花那大大的喇叭状花朵好像在向世间万物宣布：春天来了，大家别睡了！
现在我再为大家说说现代化的吧！湿地公园里，我觉得最现代化的是什么呢？当然是喷泉啦！湿地公园的喷泉，有的不及我的膝盖高，有的不知比我高多少，有的……
湿地公园是我们遂宁人们休闲的美好乐园，也是我遂宁的一个标志性建筑，我爱遂宁，我爱我的家乡！
五年级英语作文公园怎么写【四】
今天是星期六，天高云谈，秋风瑟瑟，是个值得爬山的好日子，爸爸、妈妈、我和妹妹一起去峙山公园爬山，“嘟嘟”随着汽车喇叭的声音，我们来到了峙山公园停车场，于是爸爸停好车，妈妈抱好妹妹，我背好包出发了。一走进去，两排笔直的石柱子，矗立在门口，好象两排战士站在门口向我们打招呼呢！再走进去一点，是一个圆形的池塘，池塘里的金鱼可真是千奇百怪。有的浮出水面，有的沉入水底，有的正靠在墙壁上，那是在休息，还有的正在冲破水面，在呼吸新鲜空气呢！再走进去点，就是爬山的入口了，入口的东边是儿童乐园（这次主要的目的是爬山，所以我们没去那儿游玩）我们开始爬山了，我一边爬一边往两边看，看着看着，一个小池子进入眼帘，池子里面还有一只乌龟，只见那只乌龟浮在水面上，仰望着爬山的入口，乌龟的身后有块石板，石板上写着“寿池”两个字，我不解地问妈妈：“妈妈，为什么乌龟的身后有块石板，石板上为什么还写着”寿池“两个字？”
“具体我也不知道，只知道乌龟的寿命很长，所以我们会叫“千年乌龟”，大概这里也是祈福的地方吧！希望我们的寿命也像乌龟一样长命百岁。”妈妈回答说。
哦，那我也要祈个福，希望爷爷奶奶外公外婆长命百岁，这样可以永远陪伴我和妹妹。我心里想着，可我没告诉爸妈。
接着，我们继续往前爬，山路两边琳琅满目的竹子，这里的竹子在我眼里一点也不比安吉竹博园的竹子逊色，本来还想去竹林看看，可是妹妹闹了，于是我们只好往回走了。
可惜的是我没有爬完全程，也没好好观察竹子，但是我很满足，我感觉我很幸福，有爸爸妈妈妹妹的陪伴，下次再找个秋高气爽的日子继续前进。
五年级英语作文公园怎么写【五】
本周是国庆节，是全国欢庆的一天。国庆节那天，我和父母去参观赣州中央公园。
公园很热闹。有的游客带着孩子来这里重温童年的快乐，有的则在家陪老人放松，享受亲人的温暖。他们来自四面八方，风、笑声和歌声汇成了欢乐的海洋。我沿着中央公园的'小路漫步，闻着已经盛开的桂花。然而，桂花兼有两者的特点。它芳香四溢，有一种甜甜的香味，总能把人带到一个美好的世界。
在草地的边缘，有一条用鹅卵石搭建的人工小径。它们铺成各种形状，有的像爱情，有的像天上的星星闪烁，很美。我走了进去，里面的风景让我如痴如醉，青山碧波环绕，宛如天堂。在小路的两边，有五颜六色的花，包括红色、黄色、粉色和紫色.当我全神贯注地欣赏花朵时。突然，一群野鸭从桥下跳了出来。它们像箭一样在水上滑行，翅膀有规律地跳动，身后留下长长的水痕，就像柳姐姐的长辫子。有的野鸭在水里找鱼虾；有的在水上嬉戏玩耍；有些在天空中自由飞翔。我被眼前的风景惊呆了，完全陶醉在湖光水色的乐趣中。
中央公园虽然不如那些景点，但它新奇独特的美深深吸引着我，让我陶醉。它风景优美，环境清新，真是度假的好地方！
五年级英语作文公园怎么写【六】
春天到了，百花盛开。我随着拥挤的人群，来到了公园的一角。
我先来到了长廊，长廊红的砖，绿的瓦，十分气派。坐在椅子上，放眼望去，有几只青蛙“呱呱”地叫着，好像在唱贝多芬的“欢乐颂”，令人心情愉悦。走过石拱桥，就来到了奇形怪状的假山中。那么多的假山，它们有的像少女那样亭亭玉立，有的像白兔那样温顺乖巧，有的像那芳香的玫瑰……“滴答，滴答”的声音 传来，原来，下起了小雨。抬头一看，细雨蒙蒙，一棵棵柳树有的仰起头，仿佛在用雨水冲洗着自己的“秀发”，有的在欢快地跳着优美的舞蹈，攀枝欢跳；有的紧 挨在一起，仿佛在说悄悄话呢！低头一瞧，原本水平如镜的河面，霎时变得波光粼粼，好像有千百条闪亮的鱼鳞在波动！湖底的几条小金鱼游到上面，探头探脑似 的，那样子真逗！
雨停了，风静了。太阳出来了，原本活泼的垂柳也安静下来了，她们弯下腰，低下头，看着河水，仿佛在对着眼前的镜子梳理秀发。金灿灿的阳光照射在柳树 上，树上的露珠闪烁着耀眼的光芒；顺着柳树的长发慢慢流下来，在阳光的照射下，枝叶的颜色变化多端，有翠绿、墨绿、嫩绿……我坐着小船，来到了河中央。 “哗啦哗啦”，一只仙鹤扇着双翅，头部的红宝石似的丹顶闪耀着红色的光，它优雅、大方地吐着水，一只脚站立着，脚下是一朵五彩的莲花，让我感觉好像在人间 仙境。玫瑰的芳香与含苞欲放的百合争奇斗艳，各不相让。来到了石拱桥下，一声声回升激情荡漾着。
这一切，就好像一幅画 ，这真是“舟行碧波上，人在画中游”。
