五年级英语作文写公园【一】
今天是放假得第一天，我早早得就起了床，准备着和爸妈一块商量去哪里玩（确切得说是踏青），我们也想挑一些离家比较近得地方，于是就选择了和平公园，但是我可是去过得哦！到了那，就给人一种很好得印象，树叶郁郁葱葱，地上很干净，并且还有一条湖衬托着，真是美极了！我们先围着公园绕了一圈之后，就开始坐船了，我们坐上了一条有顶棚得小船，船是要自己驾驶得，于是我就发挥出我得“开船”技术，开起了船，一路上我一边观赏者风景，一边小心翼翼得驾驶，不过有时还是会发生点小意外，我们三人在船上说说笑笑，别提有多开心啦！还有一次，我想玩点大幅度得，就在转弯得时候靠岸近一点再转弯，可是，靠得太近了，就被停留在了岸边，最后我们还是想尽一切办法把船给弄了出来，我看见旁边都有人在看我们，顿时感到好害羞哦。
中午了，我们去吃了离和平公园较近得一家餐馆——棒！约翰。
活动还没结束呢，我们吃了公园里一种自制得12生肖得糖，很好吃得哦。还去玩了勇敢者道路，爸妈原本说：这种游戏是小孩子玩得，不适合你玩！：”但是，等到他们自己也来凑热闹得时候，却发现一点也不好玩，都坐着一副愁眉苦脸得样子，尤其是老妈，有时还会版一脚，甩一个大跟头，样子别提有多滑稽了！我还和老爸在梅花桩上拳打脚踢，我们不分上下，但最终还是我甘拜下风。我几乎把所有得东西都玩遍了，这可是累得我满头大汗啊，爸妈却在悠闲地看自己带得小平板电脑！
不知不觉得，就到了五点多钟，就这样，我们依依不舍得回家了。
五年级英语作文写公园【二】
春天来了，大地上已经春暖花开了，公园一角又变了一种生机勃勃的景象，那里空气新鲜，景色美，是个好去处。
首先展现在眼前的是一个圆形的喷水池。池正中，有一朵大而白的“荷花”，“荷花”上站着一只昂首东望的仙鹤，它好像朝着金灿灿的太阳高唱着春天赞歌。时不时的从仙鹤里冒出一些小水珠，小水珠一个个排着几条整齐稠密的队伍，形成一条线，它们在空中跳跃起来，然后又回到池里。池里的水清澈见底，可以看见池底的沙石和小鱼，水把仙鹤的影子映到里面，仿佛仙鹤真的站在水里。一阵风拂来，水面泛起鱼鳞似的波纹。
喷水池稍远处，是一个在绿树中的长廊，长廊又长又宽，里面摆挂着许多工艺品和一些书法绘画作品，使人看了眼花缭乱。
近处，一个大花坛里种着许多美丽的花，最引人注目的要算色彩鲜艳的牡丹，有的全张开了，有的只开了一半，有的还是含苞未放的花骨朵，它们散发出阵阵的香会传出很远。
花坛前面是通向凉亭的石子路。路两旁有许多假山，有的像巴巴爸爸，有的像大狗熊，有的像山羊，连数字“6”也来凑热闹。最大的那座假山真像一个男人抱着两个小孩，这个男人就是牛lang（郎），他好像在想念千里之外的织女。这座假山又像一个小猴爬到老猴背上抓虱子。假山上摆着几盆月季花引来许多蜜蜂。
石子路一直通向凉亭。凉亭四面是几个粗大的红柱子撑着向上翘起的屋顶。顶是金黄色，在阳光的照耀下闪着金光。亭子里摆着蓝色的桌登，供人休息。屋顶的里面则是一条接一条的彩条，非常好看。
凉亭的后面是一个小树林，树林里有挺拔的松树，笔直的杨树，翠绿的柳树。
游人们被这般景象陶醉了，纷纷赞叹着：“这真美啊！”
五年级英语作文写公园【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文写公园【四】
星期天上午，我来到街心公园,一进门就闻到一阵扑鼻的香味（“香”是公园独特的特点）。我顺着花香飘来的方向，走道公园的一角。
我静静地站在喷水池旁。只见喷水池里的水清澈见底，时时吹来一阵风，平静的水面漾起美丽的波纹，真是碧波荡漾，银光闪闪。湖中央有一座石雕仙鹤，黑色的眼珠，褐色的嘴巴，白色的羽毛，两只细长的腿一缩一立。站着的那条腿踏在一朵粉红色的石雕莲花上，嘴里吐出晶莹透亮的水珠，宛如无数颗珍珠，钻石，真是栩栩如生。（把水珠比作珍珠，钻石，形象，贴切。）
喷水池虽然美，但池旁的牡丹花更美。绿色的叶子青翠欲滴，衬着朵朵红的，白的牡丹花。牡丹花有的含苞待放，有的在争芳斗艳，真是繁花似锦。美丽的“舞蹈家”蝴蝶在花丛中飞来飞去，跳着欢乐的舞。勤劳的小蜜蜂在牡丹花丛里采花蜜。（静态的花，动态的蝴蝶，互相衬托，生机勃勃）
喷水池旁的假石山奇形怪状。山上有草，有花。山顶有一座亭子，顶着蓝色的瓦，瓦片上雕刻着精美的图案。亭子里坐满了人，有的在下象棋，有的谈笑风生……好热闹！（犹如人在画中。）
喷水池有一条走廊，里面的老人在打太极拳，有的在谈天，议论天下事……长廊旁边有片绿茵茵的草地。天真的少年和幼稚的儿童在草地上尽情娱乐。
亭子后面有几棵婆纱的柳树。柳树长长的枝条，像姑娘的秀发。远远望去，又像几位亭亭玉立的少女，楚楚动人。红棉树像一位威武的将军，巍然屹立。朵朵红棉花如颗颗红星，点缀在小枝桠上，（把柳树比作少女，把红棉树比作将军，既形象，又符合树性特点。）耀眼夺目。
我虽然有半年时间没到街心公园玩了，但那美丽的景色依然深深地印在我的脑海里。
