用嘴巴写一篇作文（写嘴巴作文范文）

更新时间：2023-12-06 02:03:06

用嘴巴写一篇作文【一】

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作者对于因为饮食不当，所引起身体在多方面产生的不舒服感，表现出深刻的，如晚上肚子会痛得睡不着、头晕目眩、脑筋不清楚、四肢无力等等。在针对饮食何以需要节制这个问题上，提供了充分的理由。

文字顺畅，偶有生动的描写，如“我已经鼓得跟气球差不多大了，你还继续吃”。不过，偶尔也有文意表述不清之处，如“脚也常跟我抗议，说你都不按时吃药，害他白天都没有办法工作”，这可能与作者的特殊有关，但对一般读者而言，若不经过作者的稍加解释，则可能无法读懂。再者，就书信格式这一点来说，本文尚能符合题目的特别要求，然而本文除了基本的书信格式外，就只有一大段的文字叙述，就文章要求段落分明而言，这是不够恰当的。

用嘴巴写一篇作文【二】

Dear teacher,

We'll have a class meeting this afternoon. All of us students hope that you can attend it. Please accept our sincere invitation.

In the class meeting, we will make some plans about all the subjects, including English. We do have some puzzles and we need your help. So we hope you can set some time aside to be with us in the class meeting. We will feel honored if you can come to attend our class meeting.

Looking forward to your coming.

Yours

XXX

用嘴巴写一篇作文【三】

Dear Gack

How are you? I am Mike,I am 14 yaars old and my birthday in November ,I can speak Chinese and a little Franch .I am from China. I want to be a doctor , I think it will help many people and it is very cool in a white unifrom ,I live in lin tong.

how about you?can you wrte to me soon?

　Yours,

Li Hua

用嘴巴写一篇作文【四】

Hello, we are XX tourism company, we have you and your 2 children 4 to set up tourist routes for you to choose.

From Beijing to Shanghai's tourist routes, you can go play in Shanghai Zoo, which has its own characteristics is a large-scale integrated Zoo. Then you can also go to Shanghai, Nanjing Pedestrian Street shopping, it is a shopper's paradise.

From Beijing to Changsha tourist routes, you can go play Changsha Window of the World, which is a new development in an amusement park. Then you can go take a look at Pinghu Tang and Wangfujing, one of the very many. Yuelu Mountain is you have to go to a place, from the top you can see the whole Changsha.

From Beijing to Guangzhou's tourist routes, you can go a long long amusement park to play, and that there are many excellent recreational facilities, so that you will not regret it. You can also go to Hong Kong the world's wildlife, which is currently China's largest imitation of the Wild Animal Park. Guangzhou's food is delicious, you will like.

From Beijing to Guilin tourism line, you can go to the famous Lijiang River, sitting on the boat to enjoy the beautiful scenery, and then can go to Yinzi Yan, it was China's first large cavern 4. Guilin Yang Shuo in the line of Yang Renjie shopping and you will be a good place to eat. That you will not feel the same with Chinese characteristics.

I hope you are happy to play China

Yours

XXX

用嘴巴写一篇作文【五】

您好，今天我写信来，是要告诉您，您每天一直吃，我都快不行了，您还是一直吃，但是，每当我饿时，您却不给我吃东西，我写信告诉您，在这样吃的话有什么后果。

比如：有时您吃了不干净的食物，使得我肠胃发炎，住院以后，您也是只能吃白粥，您在这样随便吃的话，后果就会很可怕，希望您能节制一点，不然只能看别人吃东西了。

如果您不想这样的话，您就别再吃不干净的食物，到头来受害者不只你啊！，希望您能其它人的感受，在我饱时，就别在吃了，到外面走走，但在我很饿时，请让我吃些东西，但是希望您不要在吃不干净的食物了！

希望您能节制一点，否则您只能看您的朋友吃着山珍海味的知道您的功用比我大，但是随便吃的话，您就会功用变得比我还小了，只要做一件事，您就能完成我的愿望，叫“节制”，节制一点好处就有非常的多，不但你可以不用只吃白粥，我也不受那么多苦头，不就得好吗？如果您想象我说的那样，只要节制一点就好了！^^

祝万事如意，心想事成。

肚子先生敬上

5.11

老师评语：

文章的开头便直截了当地点出写信的用意，由于嘴巴不能定时定量的`饮食，因而藉由书信想要提醒嘴巴将会面对什么样的后果。紧接着，就点出所可能产生的情况，如吃了不洁净食物，可能发生肠胃炎，随之而来就有不能自由自在的吃东西的痛苦。“只能吃白粥”，并且只能看着自己的朋友“吃着山珍海味”，对许多小朋友来说可能是一件非常可怕的事，在此提出，颇能收其警戒的果效。

全文主旨在于点出节制饮食的重要性，要懂得克制自己不吃不干净的食物，并且能够适时适量的饮食。不过，全文中重复的词句较多，因而破坏了文章的丰富性。

用嘴巴写一篇作文【六】

Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!

your son