保定中考近几年英语作文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
保定中考近几年英语作文【二】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
保定中考近几年英语作文【三】
三月的风是那么活泼、可爱，送来了春天的请柬，让暖暖的风吹得蠢蠢欲动的我们都心动不已。今天，风淡云轻，万里无云，是个出游的好日子。我们一家三口简单地收拾了一下包后，就欢笑着走出了门。
不知不觉，在欢声笑语中，我们就到了目的地——保定植物园。我兴致勃勃地向梅花展览区大步跑过去，把跟在后面的爸爸妈妈一下子抛得好远。然后，我发现自己置身于一片花海之中，这片花海很美很美，每株花树都喷霞吐艳，共同把春天的植物园打扮成一个美丽的世界，勾勒出一幅绚丽的画卷。我一边催着爸爸妈妈快来给我拍照，一边轻轻地抚摸着身边的花树的那蟠龙似的枝干和枝干上精致、玲珑的花朵。你看，这每一朵梅花都是大自然鬼斧神工的杰出作品！它们的花瓣是那么柔软、娇嫩和透明，层层重叠在一起，就像穿上了一件件做工考究、花纹华美的裙子。那一层层的花瓣，拍得错落有致，再加上中间几根纤长的花蕊，就构成了一朵小小的梅花。梅花的颜色有很多，有的是淡粉色的，像那新生儿的脸蛋；有的是深粉色的，像那天边绚烂的云霞；有的是淡绿色的，像那未经雕琢的翡翠和碧玉；有的是浅白色的，像那至地上好的珍珠的白色……粉，粉得娇艳；绿，绿得淡雅；白，白得纯洁。大自然呵，你这位杰出的画家，竟能调制出如此不浓不淡、恰到好处的缤纷颜色！我陶醉在这美丽的春景中，就坐在梅树下的绿草如茵的地上，欣赏着梅花的娇姿，无论哪种颜色，哪种角度，它们的颜色都显得那样润泽，那样透明，那样纯净，令人赏心悦目。这时，一阵稍大的春风掠过，一片片花瓣落了下来，地上落英缤纷，隐隐还有淡淡的香味，我不禁吟诵起才女林黛玉写的《葬花吟》：“花谢花飞花满天，红消香断有谁怜？游丝软系飘春榭，落絮轻沾扑绣帘。闺中女儿惜春暮，愁绪满怀无释处，手把花锄出绣闺，忍踏落花来复去……”
保定中考近几年英语作文【四】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
保定中考近几年英语作文【五】
今天，爸爸妈妈带我去了植物园。
保定植物园位于保定市区的北部，总占地110公顷，全园以植物造景为主，主要展示各种植物姿态和多种植物相互搭配的自然野趣。至今引进各种植物500余种。
我经过南门前的广场，看见门口巨大石头上写着：保定植物园。抬头看见几棵高大的人工树木造景互相缠绕。进入园内首先看到第一组景观：花园大道，长315米，宽40米，主景为中间22米的绿色景观区。花园大道东侧是春花园，西侧是秋色园，此园一年四季彩叶缤纷，在秋高气爽只时，漫步园中，那红彤彤、黄橙橙的秋叶秋果更是美不胜收。
秋色园的正北方向是尧园，尧园面积138亩，其中水面面积59亩，并与竹园水系形成统一水系，展示唐尧文化，也是目前河北省最大的岩生园景竹园水系区。园内规划有各式桥梁9座，设有水榭、木亭、木栈台、花架等建筑小品，并建有尧母洞、先祖洞，洞内有展示我国神话传说的壁画。尧洞东侧是树木园，它包括竹园、忍冬园、木樨园、槐香园、蔷薇园……
我们顺路游览到了植物园的北边，我给大家介绍植物园，希望大家有时间去那里呼吸一下新鲜空气。
