有亮点的高考作文句子【一】
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
有亮点的高考作文句子【二】
这本书花了我300元。
I spent 300 yuan on the book.
I paid 300 yuan for the book.
The price of the book is 300 yuan.
It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.
我不懂什么英语,李明也不懂。
I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.
I know no more English than Li Ming does.
I know as little English as Li Ming does.
一到家,我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。
On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
有亮点的高考作文句子【三】
当你在沙漠中跋涉,火辣的太阳就在你的头顶。此时,你最需要的是什么?—是一股清泉。那么这股清泉就是生命的亮点。
当你受到挫折,独自躲在房间默默流泪,自暴自弃。此时,你最需要的是什么?—是家人的理解。那么理解就是生命的亮点。
我想谁也不会忘记发生在20xx年年底印度洋的那场让人触目惊心的天灾人祸吧!当突如其来的海浪冲垮了正在海边嬉戏的游客和海岸的建筑时,如果你是一名受难者,那时的你最需要的是什么?—是他人的帮助。此时帮助就是生命的亮点,是全人类的亮点,是世界的亮点。
面对这场灾难,全人类都感到震惊、悲哀,但更多的是伸出援助之手,燃起了生命的亮点。小说个人、学校,大至省市乃至国家,捐钱捐物成了社会的潮流,让每一个人在这个初冬的.季节感到一股暖流流过,每个人用自己炽热的心与受难者一起重建家园,这次灾难造成了无数伤,破坏了无数幸福的家庭,对此家人们悄然泪下,痛不欲生,唯一感到欣慰的是,他们得到了无数的援助和关怀。现在,印度洋周边国家都开始重建家园,不久的将来,我们又将看见一个个幸福的家庭,一张张充满希望的笑脸,看见那片美丽的大海,我不禁想起了人们常挂在嘴边的一句话:只要人人都献出一份爱,世界将变成美好的人间。
世界大体如此,需要的是人与人的关爱与帮助,正如一首歌中所唱:我们同欢乐,我们同忍受,我们怀着同样的期待;我们共风雨,我们共追求,我们珍存同一样的爱。无论你我可曾相识,无论在眼前在天边,真心的为你祝愿,祝愿你幸福平安!
有人说灾难可以看出一个人的意志,确实如此,但依我看,灾难更多的看出了整个世界的团结,看出了人类之间的互助,看出了国与国之间的友谊,这些都是生命的亮点,是全人类的亮点,是世界的亮点。
有亮点的高考作文句子【四】
一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.