五年级关于姚明的英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级关于姚明的英语作文【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级关于姚明的英语作文【三】
曾经读过季羡林教授的一本《我的人生感悟》，让我对生活有了深刻的感触。生活在这个缤纷的世界里，我就是一个追梦人。梦与生活并存于我的人生当中。
生活永远是美好的，青春犹如绽放的花朵般美丽，忧愁算得了什么。在遇到生活的烦恼时，往往是理想战胜现实，微笑是最终的胜利。生活之余，喜欢幻想，幻想人生的美好未来和打算。更喜欢做梦，做梦也让生活有几分的向往和追求。
喜欢读散文。读那些名家写的人生感悟，读作者的\'思想和生平。读过余秋雨的《霜冷长河》后，再读《文化苦旅》。要感受这位天才作家的生平，就再去读《借我一生》。用他那触及到哪里哪里就会发出光芒的神笔写下的作品，让人真的感触深刻，也略懂了生活会造就一个人。
喜欢养花。记得老舍先生很爱养花，写过一篇养花的文章，乐在其中。的确，养花的乐趣远远胜过欣赏花。虽然年轻，但很耐得住烦恼，这是养花教给我的。经过自己的艰辛努力，原本毫无生气的小院全被我绿化了。夏天的静夜，坐在小院欣赏我的杰作，真有种收获的喜悦。
喜欢追梦。读过郭敬明的《梦里花落知多少》后，也有增有减。我的人生有梦让我生活得快乐和自在，我就像大海中的鲤鱼一样时时想越过龙门。但是，回到现实，却又觉距离太远，因为我的梦有点长久，要花费我更多的努力去实现。不喜欢半途而废，因为我不想成为生活的弱者。
冰心说：爱在左，情趣在右，一路走来一路阳光相伴。这就是生活，阳光下的微笑永远是灿烂和美丽的，对待生活，我有足够的勇气和把握。读散文培养了我的生活情趣，养花磨练了我的耐心和意志，追梦让我对生活有了更贴近的感悟。还有什么不满呢？唯有的就是再去感悟生活。
人生因有梦而精彩，生活因有梦而充实。我的人生就是这样，在人生边上写些我喜欢的和感悟到的，供我茶余饭后去欣赏，也提供给文学爱好者，让他们去评价一下好与坏。
五年级关于姚明的英语作文【四】
看到题目，你一定奇怪了吧！人家姚明乃堂堂大明星也，怎么会和我这个小孩子是朋友呢！其实那位姚明非这位姚明，他本名非姚明，而是明遥。因为他的.名字反过来就成了众所诸知的姚明了，所以我们全班给他取了个别致的外号，“姚明”。
说起明遥在我们班上可谓是无人不知，无人不晓。我们俩都是五年级学来的，都是貌不惊人的小个子。说起学习成绩来，明遥和我都是一级棒刚才吹牛吹大了。其实我和明遥成绩还是有那么一点差距，在此道歉，请见谅。
明遥是我们班上的图书管理员，不过因为管理权力在语文老师的手中，所以也可以说是邦助老师做管理工作。但是他一点也不在意，我们都很佩服他的为人。
明遥虽然个子矮，但是他很勤奋好学，回答问题十分的积极，所以特别深受老师的喜爱和器重；真是让人羡慕了。有一次老师带我们去四（4）上公开课。正巧那一课老师讲的是《学奕》，当时老师为了增加学习气氛，就说：“明遥，起立。”可明遥一动不动，好象没有听见一样。没有办法，老师只得又叫一声：“姚明，起立。”明遥立刻站了起来。老师本想说明遥是我们班的明日之星，可是由于明遥的这一站，害得老师弄巧成拙，却说成了姚明，结果是逗得我们哈哈大笑。那场课让我们听得开心，学的认真。结果，就是这样我们的明遥成了明星姚明。所以人，我们很少叫他明遥，都叫他姚明。让他常常感觉到好开心，好高兴。在一次我们取笑他时，他却毫不在意的说：“我是姚明，我怕谁，我是明日之星姚明也。”我们生气了，本来是笑他，却成了笑我们自己。气得我们挥拳向他打去,可是看见他那小灵精怪的样子.好比掉进灰里的豆腐吹也不是,打也不是。
明遥不但聪明，而且在他高兴时，总会把几首诗改编一下，常常使我们赞不决口。我们感觉全班就只有他最具有明星风度。记得有一次我们一起改编《春晓》：
如果夏日不洗澡，身子处处蚊子咬。害得夜来巴掌声，蚊子不知多少。
听过后，大家哈哈大笑弯诗也。
哎！明遥，你真是我们的班的“搞笑星”也。
五年级关于姚明的英语作文【五】
我喜欢吃水果，在各种各样的水果中，我尤其是喜欢吃草莓。
到了草莓上市的季节，每当走到草莓摊前，那红彤彤的草莓，闻到一股甜丝丝的香味，我就会像只馋嘴的小猫，口水忍不住“飞流直下三千尺”。
我喜欢吃草莓，因为它的颜色、形状和味道都特别惹人喜爱。草莓的.形状像颗鸡心，浑身长满了细细软软的小刺，摸上去毛茸茸的，不像仙人掌的刺会扎人。熟透了的草莓穿着红艳艳的“外衣”，头上戴着一顶绿色的“太阳帽”，样子可爱极了。取一颗熟透了的草莓放在嘴里轻轻一咬，软软的，那酸酸甜甜的红色液溢的满口都是。
我喜欢吃草莓的另一个原因，因为它没有皮和壳，吃起来特别方便，这样我就不用剥皮，吐壳了。嘻嘻，一口一个，痛快极了。
草莓不但好吃，营养也非常丰富，含有多种维生素。草莓的吃法有很多种，除了直接食用，还可以榨成汁或者腌着吃。我们家的金典吃法就是酸奶拌草莓，妈妈把刚买回来的新鲜草莓切成一块一块的放进一个大碗里，我把原味酸奶浇在上面，再拌一拌，等酸奶的颜色变得艳红艳红的，草莓就腌好了。哈哈，吃上一口酸奶草莓，更是回味无穷。
这就是美味的草莓，怎么样，听了我对草莓的介绍，你一定口水“飞流直下三千尺”了吧?保管你吃了还想吃!
