五年级英语作文我的梦想机器人【一】
假如我是机器人，我会是一个聪明绝顶的机器人。因为我拥有一颗来自美国太空总署，最先进的的科技头脑！望着散落一地的玩具，只要一启动我那“超透视红外线”电眼，就能立刻感测出所有的玩具是否有缺损，再利用极精细的\'雷达扫描，就能即时搜寻出相符合的零件，把它们修理得完好如初。然后我还会把玩具箱，一箱一箱叠得像大楼般的高耸参天，而且四平八稳，哪怕是大地震再度来袭，它们依然会稳如泰山，因为我的金头脑能准确无误的计算出最佳的角度和高度，这项优越的性能相信即使是世界上首屈一指的建筑师，也不得不对我甘拜下风呢！
假如我是机器人，我会是一个爱干净的环保尖兵。因为我有一副装备了“奈米光触媒”的鼻子，任何悬浮微粒灰尘，都逃不过我灵敏的嗅觉！就拿最令妈妈头痛的窗帘来说，只要我深呼吸一下，就能立即透析出尘蹒、灰尘的比例和数量，然后张开我那模拟“宇宙黑洞”的超磁吸盆大口，把它们全部鲸吞下肚，再透过铁胃转化成能量，让我精力充沛，浑身是劲！不需插电、不必耗油，谁说我不是最顶尖的绿色小巨人呢？
假如我是机器人，我还会是一个体贴的小可爱。因为我有一颗比真人更热忱的心，永远热情洋溢，纯真善良！我会主动四处侦查，哪里需要我，我就会及时出现，认真服务，二十四小时待命，并且全年无休。我想这就是身为机器人最优越的地方——可以不眠不休的工作，永远不嫌累！
五年级英语作文我的梦想机器人【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文我的梦想机器人【三】
别林斯基曾说过，在所有的批评中，最伟大、最正确、最天才的是时间。我知道时间永远是最公正的，它不会倒转，也不可能因为我而改变。所以，我只希望我可以抓紧我所剩无几的童年时光，让它变得充实而刻骨铭心。
同样是梦想，你要去实现它，它就是你的目标，一个在未来会实现的目标；如果你在那里口若悬河的诉说你的梦想，行动上却无动于衷，那它含金量再高也不只不过是梦想。我离我的梦想只有咫尺之遥，我不愿看它变成空头支票。我想要在父母面前多撒撒娇；和朋友们一起疯玩、胡闹；试着因为落写一个作业而心惊胆战；一边说‘辣’一边往嘴里塞辣条；把换下来的衣物扔得满天飞；和朋友一起做恶作剧……随心所欲的做事儿，无拘无束的游戏，每个星期，每一天，每一个时辰，都被快乐和喜悦充盈。我要记录下每一个让我感到记忆犹新的事情，每一天都感到幸福，不做任何违背自己想法的事儿，开心时毫无形象的大笑，尽情享用自己的童年时光。
我的梦想总是如迷雾般时散时聚，但它永远围绕着一个词汇——幸福。再过一年，我的小学生涯告终，但迎来的是我的.初中生涯；再过四年，我的儿童岁月结束，但紧接着的是我如花似月的青年时光。
我要肆意享受我现在的时间，做好准备迎接下一个人生阶段，让我的一生都幸福无悔。这，就是我的梦想，即使不及想做科学家的人的梦想伟大，不如要当医生的人的梦想高尚，没有要做老师的人的梦想无私，但它是我永恒不变的梦想——每一个人生阶段都过得幸福。
习作的开头先写出了梦想的美丽，然后笔锋一转，突出了我的梦想的特别。接着写出在这个梦想的可操作性和现实性，最后阐述了自己的梦想就是——每一个人生阶段都过得幸福。习作首尾呼应，运用对比的方式突出主题：“把握今天”是我永恒不变的梦想。
五年级英语作文我的梦想机器人【四】
蕴意多么深刻哇！而又是如此的明了易懂——要想让别人来欣赏自己，背后自己就必须付出努力！！！
一个人总梦想着在大家面前表现自己，让别人崇拜自己、欣赏自己，不付出努力又怎么行得通呢？别让梦想总在梦里实现，也别让承诺只游离于口间，一千次的`承诺也远不如事实来得明白！！！要充满信心的走自己的路，别人荒谬的评论不要去理会。是非昭昭有，不听自然无！要知道，评论者往往比行动者高明，然而评论者却往往没有行动！努力拼搏——用事实说话！
舞台上的人儿固然风光，衣饰华丽、灯火辉煌，还有舞台下那群合格fans的疯狂崇拜。他们是凭空想象就能得来的吗？——不是。梦想是高贵的，它需要泪水和汗水的沐浴；梦想是个多面人，有时可以坚强到风雨无阻，有时可以柔弱到轻受打击便支离破碎……
是努力，是勤奋，拉近了我和梦想的距离。而她却喜于捉弄人，像无际大江中的灯塔一般，忽隐忽现，使人望而却步，却又心生遗憾……
对梦想所付出的努力，可以使你忘记一切。梦想——这种神奇的东西，你看得见，你摸不着；你感觉得到，但你能做到吗……
五年级英语作文我的梦想机器人【五】
我想发明保姆机器人，因为每次看到妈妈下班回家还要辛苦地为我做饭，所以我想发明保姆机器人，替她减轻一些生活的负担。
它的样子是鸡蛋形的，每次一看到它，就好像在吃着香喷喷的`鸡蛋一样。它的头上戴着一顶黑里透白的帽子，眼睛跟个大鸭梨似的，它的嘴巴很大，像一个哈密瓜。
它的身上有一个红色按钮，要是你太冷了，保姆机器人就会马上把你送到沙漠中，享受”日光浴”。它的手上拿着一把有电的羽毛球拍，可以防止苍蝇和蚊子的”进攻”，它的脚上穿着紫一堆，青一堆的鞋子，要是一有坏人来攻击它，它就把脚放在身上踩。把坏人踩得一块青，一块紫。
它的嘴巴真厉害，可以把垃圾吞进肚子里，再消化成电。
它还要有一双能干的手，它那双手会做出我们吃不到的东西，每次我放学回家就可以看见它在做美味的佳肴了，哇！那简直可以让人直流口水了。
它的身上还有一个棕色按钮，你可别小瞧了这个按钮，只要你一按这个按钮，它就会变成大大的电影屏幕给你播放你想看的电影，让你大饱眼福。
你看，我要发明的机器人还不错吧！要是你发明了比我这个更好的机器人，那可要要让我去你家好好地享受一番哟！
