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中考英语作文写人叙事(6篇英语写人记事满分作文中考)

中考英语作文写人叙事(6篇英语写人记事满分作文中考)

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中考英语作文写人叙事(6篇英语写人记事满分作文中考)

中考英语作文写人叙事【一】

你最珍贵友谊是一缕和熙的阳光,照耀着我们的心灵。友谊是一束绚烂的花儿,装点着我们的世界。友谊是一剂良药,能治愈顽劣的心灵。那是一个周末,我去报刊亭买了一份我期待已久的《少年科技画报》。我一回到家就迫不及待地翻开了封面。不一会儿,我便被这本书中的内容给深深地迷住了,看得津津有味,连吃饭都忘了。用妈妈的话来说,我就是书迷心窍,被“魔”附了身。

这时,xxx来我家问学习上的问题了。而当他看见这本书的时候,也完全被吸引了。他苦苦哀求我,让我借给他看。一开始我不答应,但看在好朋友的份上,才借给了他。在他走后,我饭吃不好,觉也睡不香,一直惦记着我那本心爱的书写人叙事的中考满分作文作文。之所谓老虎喂猪——不放心,但我还是忍住了。第二天,我迫不及待地的来到他家,拿回了我的书

当我看到第17页的时候,突然发现第19页和第20页不翼而飞了!当然书页不可能会飞的,所以,我把怀疑的目光转向了他。于是,我一见xxx就不分青红皂白地对着他破口大骂道:“没想到你会这样,把我的,请保留此标记书撕下一页!还亏我看在朋友的份上借你看!”

“我,我没有,我真的没有撕过你的书!”“哼,水仙花不开——装蒜!,不是你,还能是谁?”只见他噙着泪水,欲言又止……又过了一天,我看见书包里有一个十分熟悉的纸团,打开一看,原来就是《少年科技画报》的19页和第20页!这时我才记得我前天一不小心,把那页给撕了下来,随手扔到书包里了我顿时傻眼了,我真后悔我之前的所作所为。这时,我想也不想地跑到她家,惭愧得对她说:“对不起,我不该……”“没关系,我想你也是太心爱那本书了,忘了这件事吧,我们永远是朋友……”

我还没说完,她就微笑着对我说。我感激的看着他,心里默默地想着:我们永远是朋友?

是的,我们永远是朋友……我永远会珍惜这份珍贵的友谊…它会,地久天长!花香而不久,塑花久而无香友谊如同一朵美丽的小花,无论生长在荒野,还是闹市,它都散发出幽香。只要我们用真心和纯洁去培育,友谊之花一定会永远散发幽香。珍惜属于自己的每一份友谊吧!

中考英语作文写人叙事【二】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

中考英语作文写人叙事【三】

导入:

第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文:

第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论:

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ