about my habits作文【一】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
about my habits作文【二】
An announcement about the land of the flight
Announcement
Ladies and gentlemen! May I have your attention pls. I have an announcement to make. Because of the terrible fog, the airport will be closed. The flight to Shanghai will be delayed for 5 hours. Now we have to change some of our plans. This afternoon we will go to a place of interest nearby. At about three a'clock, we will go to the shopping centre. You can do some shopping there. Those who want to go to other places must be back before 6:00 in the evening. Thank you.
关于飞行之地的`公告
公告
女士们，先生们！请您注意。我有一个公告。由于大雾，机场将关闭。飞往上海的航班将推迟5小时。现在我们必须改变我们的计划。今天下午我们将去附近的一个景点。在三a'clock，我们将去购物中心。你可以在那里购物。那些想去其他地方必须回来之前，晚上6:00。谢谢你。
about my habits作文【三】
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She，s very active and smart. She has tress. She，s young and pretty. She，svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He，s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
