五年级英语关于交通作文怎么写【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语关于交通作文怎么写【二】
生命，就如同那烟花，瞬间灿烂，瞬间消逝。这可贵的`生命难道不值得我们珍惜吗？这动人的生命难道不值得我们保护好吗？可是，你们知道吗，据统计，我国每年因车祸亡的人数超过10万，居世界之首。每天于交通事故的人数约300人左右。其中每小时有一个孩子葬身于车底或造成终身残疾，这是多么惊人的数字呀！可以说，交通事故已成为威胁我们中小学生人身安全的头号手。
关于一些交通事故，想必大家也知道不少，那我就不多说了。在这里，我想重点告诉大家，对于交通安全该如何防范。
交通事故的成因离不开三个因素：人、车、路。在人这一方面，最常见的就是“闯红灯”。也许你们一次顺利通关，“闯”过马路自以为帅得不得了，说不定哪天再冲时，突然冲来一辆车，后果是不堪设想呀！在这里，我要提醒大家：行人过马路切不可闯红灯，要走斑马线内，司机开车不可喝酒，并要养足精神。
车这一方面，也不可忽视，司机或是私家车主，平日里一定要注意对车的保养。像横拉杆、车胎、灯光都是重要部位，车的制动装置是降低车速、停止车辆的控制与安全机构，也是车安全性能的核心部分，广大车主一定要时常检查。不查则酿大错呀！
这路也很重要，我国有10%的交通事故与道路的各种原因有关。例如：单调的通车环境会让驾驶员产生疲劳，打瞌睡现象；突如其来的大雾和雾多不均，时有时无的大雾易引发二次事故；由于高速公路上交通流量急剧加大，行车荷载日趋严重，以及道路使用期限的延长或基础设计施工不妥，维护不当、不及时，而导致路面病害更易发生。希望有关部门能做好这一方面的工作，让马路更加安全，成为人们心中欢快的溪流。
“天干物燥，小心火烛，咚”——以前总有人为大家敲响提防火灾的警锣。那么，现在，让我们为大家敲一次警锣“交通安全很重要”，大家一定切记呀！
五年级英语关于交通作文怎么写【三】
多媒体墙上有影片，先播了一则令我感触最深的一个片段：在一个公司的领奖台上，主持人说：“XXX奖的获得主是XXX!”大家都鼓起掌来，一位穿着西装的男人站起来，自豪的`接过奖。领奖会结束后，他和同事去酒店吃饭，男人买了好多的酒，和同事干杯，就这样干完一杯接一杯，等最后一瓶酒的酒瓶空了，大家也都醉熏熏地散了。男人眯着眼睛开车回家，由于喝了太多的酒，还没有看清路就撞到了杆子，被送去医院急诊。男人的妻子和女儿也赶到医院，女儿在门前大声叫喊：“爸爸，爸爸，我要爸爸!爸爸，爸爸，你快和我一起回家!爸爸!……”
看了之后，我真替那个小女孩伤心，又生气这个“酒鬼”爸爸，人们总是说“开车不饮酒，饮酒不开车。”可是真正做到酒后不开车的司机有有几个呢?如果换个话题：行人闯红灯、“勇敢”穿马路、壮胆冲过去……这一桩桩灾祸，都是人类自己的行为而造成的，养成良好的习惯，小事;违反交通规则，大事!
一场场交通事故，不时在吹牛，不是在特技表演，一切都是真实的，什么事都有可能发生。让我们手拉着手，一起来遵守交通规则，我们的家园回更美好!
五年级英语关于交通作文怎么写【四】
人世间生命最为可贵，如果没有了金钱，可以去再赚，没有了工作，可以去拼搏，没有了学业，可以去学习，可一旦没有了生命，一切都是空谈。
生命有时极端脆弱，不经意间就失去了，在剥夺人类生命的恶魔中，有的是病毒，有的是灾害，可多数是车祸。病毒无法抗拒，灾害不能避免，但车祸是人祸，不是天灾。所以，我们可以控制，可以防范的。
随着经济的日益发展，人们的生活条件也飞速发展，马路上川流不息的景象随处可见。然而，却由于有些人对交通安全意识的淡薄，不遵守交通规则，在车水马龙的公路上上演了一幕幕不可挽回的悲剧。例如：20xx年4月4日，在纳雍县老凹坝乡以那河大桥，因司机违规进入乡村水泥路，操作不当，一辆中型客车侧翻，造成21人亡，3人受伤。
同学们，这些令人心痛的画面，曾使多少个家庭妻离子散，家破人亡，又使多少颗甜蜜之心在一刹那间被打碎。那一起起淋淋的交通事故，又夺去了多少人仅有的生命啊！同学们，当你看到一个个鲜活的生命中消失在车轮底下，当你发现一阵阵欢声笑语湮没在汽笛声中，当你面对那触目惊心的场面时，你难道不感到痛心疾首吗？然而，这种种不幸的“头号手”都是因不遵守交通规则而酿成的。
交通安全，必不可少！交通安全，至关重要！据了解，上个世纪，全世界因交通事故而亡的.共有1585万人，2585万人啊！难道这个世纪我们还要重蹈覆辙吗？不！不能啊！同学们，我们是新世纪的接班人，让我们共同携起友谊之手，遵守交通规则。遵章守纪，就是尊重生命，尊重自我。重视交通规则，不仅是我们每个人的义务，更是我们的责任。同学们，让我们携起
手来把平安的种子撒进心间，一起来呵护这文明的生命之花。让安全与我们同行，让安全永驻我们心间，让我们的青春之花开得更加绚丽多彩！
五年级英语关于交通作文怎么写【五】
如今,据统计,每年人类因交通事故亡达到77万人,也就是说每5分钟都有人离开.中小学生的亡也达到了33万.多么惊人的数字!竟有那么多人时时刻刻都在离开.中小学生盲视交通守则而发生惨剧的事例,在我们周围也经常发生.某中学生骑着自行车“疾驰”在放学路上,红灯亮了,在他眼里根本不存在.他飞速横穿马路,还在车上不断摆着各种姿势,甚至有时两手离开车头地骑车.这时,前面正有一辆大货车驶来,由于车速快而来不及刹车,这个学生“嘭”的一声迎面撞上了货车.从后面刚上来的.一辆小汽车接着又撞上了货车,造成了三车连环撞得悲惨局面.后来这个学生被送往医院抢救无效亡.真是一时放纵,忽视交通安全,才断送了可贵的生命!
人的生命只有一次,遵守交通规则的警钟正在敲响.从一件件的事实中我们到：过马路时,应 按交通灯的指示,走人行横道,注意车辆,靠右行走,不应在马路上追逐玩耍或横穿马路.
作为中学生,我们应该珍惜生命,重视交通安全,学习交通法规,更要自觉遵守交通规则.让交通安全的警钟在我们身边常鸣,让青春和交通灯一同闪光!
