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2022英语中考作文关于学校生活的(2022广州中考英语作文模板)

2022英语中考作文关于学校生活的(2022广州中考英语作文模板)

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2022英语中考作文关于学校生活的(2022广州中考英语作文模板)

2022英语中考作文关于学校生活的【一】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

2022英语中考作文关于学校生活的【二】

光阴似箭,日月如梭。转眼间,六年的小学生活就快要结束了。我们要告别多彩的童年,告别鲜艳的红领巾,进入多梦的少年时代。但我忘不了那快乐的小学生活,那长不大的记忆停留在了母校。

回首往事,六年的小学生活历历在目,母校的一草一木,一砖一瓦都印在了我的脑海里,在那艳阳高照、桂花飘香的日子里,校园里不时传出朗朗的读书声,同学们尽情嬉闹的的笑声。

记得有一次语文测验的时候,卷子一发下来的时候,我就马不停蹄的做了起来。一个小时候,我做完了所有的题目。于是我便检查了起来。检查了一遍后,我也没接着检查下去,最后收卷的时候,我毫不犹豫的把卷交了出去。

到了下午,等老师发卷的时候,我惊奇的发现,我有一道句子改写做错了,白白失掉了2分。我再仔细一看,原来,我在改写句子的时候,把整句抄了下去。

此时,我后悔万分,自己当初为什么没有认真做题,后悔当初没有认真检查,后悔明明会做的题目居然也会做错。

这件事,仍清清楚楚的浮现在我的.脑海里,使我难以忘怀。

亲爱的同学们,在即将分离的时刻,祝你们学习进步,住敬爱的老师们身体健康,祝亲爱的母校人才辈出!

再见了亲爱的母校!虽然我离开了您,但您却留住了我长不大的记忆——————难忘的小学生活。

2022英语中考作文关于学校生活的【三】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

2022英语中考作文关于学校生活的【四】

朋友,一生中,你最难忘的是什么?2001年9月13日,申奥成功或是1999年澳门回归。而我呢?最让我难忘的是6年来,快乐而又辛酸,漫长而又短暂的小学生活。

六年来,学校里到处充满了绿色,绿色的草。绿色的树,六年来学校到处充满了花香,月季花香,紫薇花香…六年来,学校到处充满了和谐与安宁,这美丽的一草一木,鸟语花香,深深刻到了我的脑海里,怎能不使我难忘?

六年来,学校里洋溢着浓浓的师生情,多少个白天,老师为我苦口婆心的讲说,多少个黑夜,老师为我们批改作业,又有多少次,学生在节日里送给老师一张张贺卡。这温馨可人的是师生情,怎能不使我难忘?

六年来,学校到处显露出同学们的友情,你生了病,我为你送作业,补功课,你的东西忘了带,我给你借,这深厚的友谊,怎能不使我难忘?

六年来,学校到处充满了欢声笑语,下课了同学们跑出教室,把这几天的新鲜趣事,讲出来大家一同分享,这快乐这幸福,怎能不使我难忘?

六年来,学校到处洋溢着同学们的爱心,一个地方发生了特大灾害,同学们慷慨解囊,1元5角,带着同学们的同情,同学们的爱心,安慰灾区的人们,小同学患了绝症,同学们既同情又伤心,纷纷伸出自己的小手,捐款捐物,这“一方有难,八方支援”的美德,又怎能不使我难忘?

六年的小学生活,记录了我的成长轨迹,六年的小学生活,教育了我们,净化了我们的心灵。六年的小学生活,记录了我们的辛酸苦辣,六年的小学生活,怎能不使我难忘?