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英语作文为什么得分少(为什么英语作文不可能有满分)

英语作文为什么得分少(为什么英语作文不可能有满分)

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英语作文为什么得分少(为什么英语作文不可能有满分)

英语作文为什么得分少【一】

——题记

早上,利江睁开朦胧的睡眼,他做了一个很美丽的梦,可是他记不真切了,只依稀记得梦里是彩色的。望了望昏昏暗暗的房间,他觉得少了些什么。

妈妈戴上苍白色的口罩对利江说了句“不要乱跑出去。”便拿着挎包,皱皱眉头走进了烟尘滚滚的世界。利江的目光透过窗,模模糊糊看到川流不息的大马路,还有建筑物隐隐约约的轮廓,还有灰白色山冈般厚的云,还有什么呢。利江踮起脚尖,睁大眼睛,想看得更清晰些,可不知是窗太久没擦,还是云太多,他除了这些就再也没看见别的了。

利江觉得好可惜,他多想跑出去看个够,要知道妈妈很少让他出去呢。他还没看过古画上的山水,没看过高耸入云的苍天大树,哗啦啦的小溪,......他有“十万个没看过”,一幅幅画面浮现在他脑海引着他一步一步走向门口。没错,他决定偷偷跑出去瞧瞧,这主意想想都令他感到无比开心,听奶奶说世界很美呢,他傻傻地笑了。

利江站在大街上眼前一片模糊,好像在迷雾重重中,他自言自语:“我怎么近视了?”

“咳咳,不,那是雾霾啊,孩子。”苍老的声音在他响起。一位老人佝偻着身子慢慢走近,又慢慢的将口罩摘下,给利江戴上。

“孩子,回家去吧,这里很脏会生病的。”老人话音刚落开始不停的咳嗽,脸色更苍白了。

“不要,我要好好看这地方,这里不是那样的。”利江倔强的说着,把口罩换给老人,跑了,奶奶可说过世界很美,这里怎么会脏呢,老人的身影愈来愈远,模糊,然后隐没在灰白的雾霾中。一路上利江撞了不少人,他抬头看见大人们白色的口罩,白色的脸,紧皱的'黑色眉头,还有黑头发,他觉得大人们少了些什么。

“哗啦啦......”他听见圣神流水声音,奶奶说过水里会有各种各样的鱼,水两岸会有鲜艳的红花绽放,红花边有青草,草附近有绿树,树的枝头上有会飞翔的鸟......利江心里燃起无限向往,心扑通扑通的跳,像怀里揣了个小兔子再跳迪斯科,但在他停下脚步瞬间,他失望了,那里只有黑黑的污水排出,那哗啦啦的水声变得邪恶,一旁工厂烟囱冒出滚滚黑烟,像恶魔的样子,他闻到臭哄哄的垃圾味道。此时,利江仿佛听见玻璃破碎的声音,那是他的幻想破碎了,就像玻璃那样——“哐啷”的,没了。

在白茫茫,灰暗暗的世界里,利江眼眶里溢出泪水,一步两步慢吞吞走回家,他回忆着看到的一切,总觉得少了些什么,到底少了些什么呢?

利江站在家门口不停的抽泣,还夹带着咳嗽“原来奶奶是骗人的,呜呜。”之后他眼前一片黑,隐隐听见妈妈担心的声音“怎么昏了?”

利江又做梦了,梦见火红的太阳,青色的小草,鲜红的花,绿色的大树,对了还有纯洁的蓝色天空......他梦见了好多好多五颜六色的事物,还听见了水声,笑声,鸟声......梦里他突然想起昨晚他也做了同一个梦呢,梦里他傻傻地笑了,像绽开的花。

他醒了,又看见了黑的,白的,灰的世界,好像陈旧的黑白电影,单调压抑,没有阳光。

他忽想起奶奶的话“世界很美丽。”那不是骗人的,只是他忘了奶奶说的另两个字“曾经”,是的“曾经,世界很美丽。”奶奶是这样感慨地说。

利江还知道到底少了什么,是色彩,它被埋没在灰霾的世界;是笑声,它被隐藏在口罩下;是生机,在了黑色的烟尘中......他像大人那样无奈的摇了摇头,无奈他活在这单调失色的世界中。

有些东西少了,你看不到它了......

英语作文为什么得分少【二】

我不知道什么时候,“好说话”变成了一种贬义词,难道我为你开了方便之门,你反倒要回过头来嘲笑我?

难道善意的援助,在别人眼里反倒会成为好欺负的标志?

我不认同他们的话,但有时不得不承认,生活中总有那么几个“不知好歹”的白眼狼,一边消费你的善意,一边还要嘲笑你的“无知”。

比如我就曾遇到过这样的人。

因为当过省编的关系,很多人会来咨询我一些投稿的问题,面对大家的询问,我能解答的都会知无不言,言无不尽。

但时间久了,那些求帮忙的人反倒肆无忌惮起来,刚开始还是客客气气地发给你一篇稿子,希望你给他提点意见,到后来干脆连谢谢都没有,随便得好像两个人可以称兄道弟。

我并不是需要那一句“谢谢”,也不是要求他们给我什么“好处”,我只是希望,当我熬夜给你看稿子,把我知道的一五一十告诉你时,你要明白,不是所有人都闲得没事做才去帮你,那些在你求助时能及时回复你的'人,只是将心比心。

我们都过求人的难处,我们也理解你的心境,所以我们毫无保留地给予你帮助,让你轻而易举地得到你渴求的答复。

但往往事与愿违,我的善意却被你当做家常便饭,我的帮助变成了理所当然。那么,抱歉。我对你的帮助我收回,以前是我太善良,现在我该用那些人常用的伎俩,对你“狠”一点。

的确,当我不再那么热心时,那些求我帮忙的人,反而开始珍惜我的每一次帮助,我额外的工作量少了,大家对我的态度反而好了许多。

但我知道,每一次当我话只说一半,其余一半留给他自己去悟时,你将又要多绕一个弯;当我不再理会微信里时不时冒出的消息时,我明白,又会有几个还在奋斗路上打拼的人失望。

很残酷,很无奈,但又很现实,有时候,你走的那条路是你自己铺就的,我们给你扫掉几块石头你不乐意,那好吧,剩下的留给你自己,没有人会去帮你。

越轻易得到,就越不会珍惜,这已经成为所有人的共识。

所以恋爱讲欲擒故纵,女孩不会轻易答应男孩的求爱;所以“前辈”们讲架子,摆出一副“贵人语迟”的样子。

有人责怪是对方太清高,可惜你忘了,每个人在出生时都是一张白纸,只不过是那些不懂得珍惜的人太多,我们才不愿意再做个一味付出的“傻子”。

如果你不珍惜轻而易举打开的方便之门,那么你有何理由埋怨自己阻碍重重?

英语作文为什么得分少【三】

Long, long ago, there were two brothers, the one rich and the other poor. When Christmas Eve came, the poor one had not a bite in the house, either of meat or bread; so he went to his brother, and begged him, in God's name, to give him something for Christmas Day. It was by no means the first time that the brother had been forced to give something to him, and he was not better pleased at being asked now than he generally was.

"If you will do what I ask you, you shall have a whole ham," said he. The poor one immediately thanked him, and promised this.

"Well, here is the ham, and now you must go straight to Dead Man's Hall," said the rich brother, throwing the ham to him.

"Well, I will do what I have promised," said the other, and he took the ham and set off. He went on and on for the livelong day, and at nightfall he came to a place where there was a bright light.

"I have no doubt this is the place," thought the man with the ham.

An old man with a long white beard was standing in the outhouse, chopping Yule logs.

"Good-evening," said the man with the ham.

"Good-evening to you. Where are you going at this late hour?" said the man.

"I am going to Dead Man's Hall, if only I am on the right track," answered the poor man.

"Oh! yes, you are right enough, for it is here," said the old man. "When you get inside they will all want to buy your ham, for they don't get much meat to eat there; but you must not sell it unless you can get the hand-mill which stands behind the door for it. When you come out again I will teach you how to stop the hand-mill, which is useful for almost everything."

So the man with the ham thanked the other for his good advice, and rapped at the door.

英语作文为什么得分少【四】

Study is our student's personality.But many students will ask, why we must learn knowledge. Is knowledge so important to us?If we don't need to pass the exam, should we still need the knowledge?

As I am concerned, study is not only a personality of students, but also a personality of all people throughout their lives.People need to learn the knowledge whoever they are.If people don't learn knowledge, there will have no way to do things and become ignorant about world.Can you imagine a world that no people have knowledge?Leaving knowledge,the world would no get progress.If people don't learn knowledge, there will be no people to know how to use the computer ,how to write the news, even how to communicate with others.

So learning knowledge is a very important thing, it consists of our world.

英语作文为什么得分少【五】

Why students can't help wearing expensive things which are famous brands?

The reason why they prefer to wear expensive clothes is just for face. Some students thought the more expensive they wear, the more confident they are. Only wearing brand clothes can they become proud. Some students are afraid to looked down if they don't wear brands things. It is easy for students to compare what they wear.

As far as I am concerned, I don't agree that students pursue famous brand. Most students can't earn money by themselves. We can't waste the money to buy expensive things which are not useful. It is hard for parents to make money. Remember, the main task of the students is to study.