五年级英语作文作息时间【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文作息时间【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语作文作息时间【三】
俗话说：生命是以时间为单位的。浪费别人的时间，等于谋财害命。浪费自己的时间，等于慢性自。没错，生命的确是以时间为单位的。因为浪费自己的时间，等于慢性自。
童年的时光，已不会再复还；少年的时光，也一去不再复还；过去的一分一秒，一样不能复还。我曾听过一个故事，现在给大家讲一讲：鲁迅12岁在绍兴城“三味书屋”读私塾的时候，父亲正患着重病，两个弟弟年幼，鲁迅不仅经常上当铺，跑药店，还得帮助母亲干家务劳动。有一天，鲁迅在家里帮助妈妈多做了一点事，结果上学迟到了，严厉的寿镜吾老师狠狠地责备了鲁迅一顿。鲁迅挨了训以后，并不因为自己受了委屈而埋怨老师和家庭，他反而诚恳接受批评，决心做好精确的时间安排，再也不会因为做家务而迟到了。于是，他用小刀在书桌的右下角，正正方方地刻了一个“早”字，以便提醒和鞭策自己珍惜时间，发愤读书。
大家看了这个故事，一定想：鲁迅是个这么有名的`伟大的文学家、思想家和革命家，一向是珍惜时间，怎么会浪费时间呢？对呀！一定不会浪费时间的。“圣人都有错”。这句话我没说错吧！鲁迅，一个这么伟大的文学家、思想家和革命家，因为在家里帮助妈妈多做了一点事，结果上学迟到了。受到寿镜吾老师狠狠地责备了一顿。后来为了珍惜时间，珍惜一分一秒，用小刀在书桌的右下角下，正正方方地刻了一个“早”字，鼓励自己珍惜时间。
醒悟吧！朋友们！珍惜时间，珍惜一分一秒。别让时间白白流失。记住，生命是以时间为单位的！
五年级英语作文作息时间【四】
假如时间可以倒流，我想回到我童年的时候，去和我亲爱的外公一起聊天，玩耍。在我九岁那年，外公走了，带着他对亲人与世间无限地眷恋走了。他的离去，让我无法证实这突如其来的一切。我的脑海里浮现出当年的画面来：在我还未上幼儿园时，外公外婆就像父母似的精心照顾我，喂我喝奶、哄我睡觉、带我玩耍……然而，我却不懂事，老是惹外公生气。小时候，我因为调皮而不小心打烂了外公最心爱的\'古董，一直没有勇气告诉外公。外公知道后，他也没有责备我，他一声不吭。我知道，外公一定很伤心……现在想起来，我真后悔！泪水已朦胧了我的双眼。我还记得，在我摔倒时，外公一次又一次，用他那厚实的大手扶我起来；我还记得，在我惹外公生气时，他从没埋怨过一句。他那亲切的语言无法在我脑海里消失。但是，这太迟了！外公已离我们而去，我再也没有一个疼我的外公了！假如时间可以倒流，我再也不会惹外公生气了，再也不会了！假如时间可以倒流，我会珍惜那段时间，我会拿许多好吃的，逗外公开心；假如时间可以倒流，我一定会对外公说一声：“谢谢您！”假如时间可以倒流……
可惜的是，时间就像流水一样，有去无回。遗憾永远是遗憾，再也不能弥补……
