五年级小朋友第一次写英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级小朋友第一次写英语作文【二】
暑假天气炎热，我们来到了磐安，虽然比义乌凉快，但大太阳还是毫不留情的照射了下来。知了也拼命的叫着，“好热啊，好热啊。
外面这么热又不能出去玩，好无聊啊，这时爸爸提议：“我们和你的朋友去漂流吧。“好耶!好耶!我顿时高兴的手舞足蹈。
我们一行人坐着车，翻山越岭来到了龙溪漂流区，那里人来人往，好不热闹。山顶上的`云朵如同仙境一般，太阳照射在水面，像在和细细的波浪挑逗。水边，放着许多皮划艇，一旁古木苍天，树顶上晃晃悠悠的绿流了下来，像几条充满生机与希望的瀑布，一直流到石头缝里。
我们穿好了救生衣，坐着游览车，到了漂流的起点，这里有一条溪，一直往下流。我和爸爸和两个好朋友坐一条皮划艇，每条皮划艇配两支船桨。我们刚坐上皮划艇，就顺着水流开走了，没想到，一开始就有一条小水瀑。“唰——一下，我们差点飞出去，皮划艇把水花翻起，形成了一道水帘。“哗——水花过去后，我们已经全身湿了。稍稍平稳了以后，这时轮到我们用桨划了，我和爸爸划起了船，可船不是转圈就是歪歪扭扭的前进。
顺着水流的方向，我们的船向河流中间的几块石头冲去。不好，要撞上了，爸爸使劲调转方向，终于才没有被撞上石头。这时我们迎面而来的又是一条很陡的水瀑，我和同伴如同见了猫的老鼠，尖叫起来。这条水瀑大约有两米多高，我抓住一根竹子，想把船拉回来，可是来不及了，我们连同竹子一起冲了下去。更可怕的事情发生了，我们前面是一块巨石，我们又尖叫起来，但我们的船撞上了巨石爸爸的帽子，被这突如其来的撞击给震了下去，我们赶快划出这块岩石区域去抓爸爸的帽子，帽子却像个顽皮的小孩，忽上忽下，我们也不甘示弱，特别是爸爸生龙活虎，差点跳下水去抓帽子了。我们看见爸爸的帽子就在眼前了，我们几个小孩都伸手去抓都没抓到，最后还是爸爸用船桨把帽子给勾了回来。一路漂流下来，遇到了好多险境，都被我们一一化解。
最后我们是团队中第二个到达终点的，总路程3500米，我们用了近两个小时，这也是一个不错的成绩好了。第一次漂流的感受就是——刺激，特别刺激。
五年级小朋友第一次写英语作文【三】
你们好！
我是来自祖国大陆的小朋友，你们可知道，1997年7月1日香港回到了祖国的怀抱，可是，我们就相隔一条小小的海峡，却只能隔海相望，不能团聚！我相信你也期盼祖国统一。我也一样，我多么希望咱们能早日团聚呀
这几年，祖国的变化可大啦！到处都是欣欣向荣的景象。
我的家乡在蒙自，这里的变化真是太大了，以前的小土房已经变成了高楼大厦，商店的'商品琳琅满目，使人眼花缭乱。花坛里种着各种花草，散发出阵阵清香，路两旁种着郁郁葱葱的树木。人们家里都换上了液晶电视机，电冰箱，微波炉，电脑闲着的时候，青年人去唱卡拉OK，老年人侧散散步，下下棋，聊聊天。我们的日子真像芝麻开花——节节高。
每当想起祖国这些欣欣向荣的景象，我总会想起台湾什么时候才能回到祖国的怀抱。台湾的小朋友，让我们建起心理之桥，一起为祖国的大业袖手共进，共同创造美好的明天！我坚信沟通两岸的和平之桥一定会建成功！到那时候，让我们手拉手有长城，肩并肩观日月潭我坚信，那一天很快就会到来的！
祝
幸福快乐，学习进步！
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五年级:洪瑜晨
