英语作文写作万能模板五年级【一】
您好！
您知道吗？每当我走过语音室时，总会透过明净的玻璃窗去看看里面的设备，语音室里的一切对于我来说都是那么新奇，那么吸引人。跟着您，在高科技设备装配的语音室里学英语，是我当时最大的愿望。可是，自语音室建好以来，您从未带同学们进去参观过，更没带同学们进去上过一节课，这使得我的愿望变得那样渺茫。
王老师，记得您每次在我们教室里上课时，起码有三分之一的同学在小声说笑，因此，教室里总是乱哄哄的`，可您却很少制止。王老师，维持课堂秩序是您的职责呀，您为什么不去制止他们？还有，您每次提问学生时，一旦同学回答不上来，您总会露出一副不耐烦的神情，为此，许多同学感到很伤心，好多同学也不喜欢上您的课。
王老师，学校培育了我五年，我希望学校越办越好，希望老师能教得开心，我们也能学得开心。因此，我诚心诚意地给您提几条建议，希望您能采纳。
一、每周带同学们到语音室上一次英语课。
二、您不要不管那些上课小声说笑的同学。作为一名教师，您有责任对他们进行批评和教育。
三、今后，请您对那些回答不上问题的同学多一些宽容和理解，并耐心地讲解，这些同学会非常感激您的，他们也会越来越喜欢您的。
王老师，如果您能采纳我的建议，我将十分开心。我坚信您一定会成为我们心中的好老师！
祝您工作顺利！
您的学生：张辉君
3月26日
英语作文写作万能模板五年级【二】
1：Peoples views onvary from person to person. Some hold thatHowever, others believe that
2：People may have different opinions on
3：Attitudes towards vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards
4：There are different opinions among people as to
英语作文写作万能模板五年级【三】
1 No one can deny the fact that ...
2 The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3 Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
英语作文写作万能模板五年级【四】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文写作万能模板五年级【五】
“万能汽车 ”的外观十分漂亮，功能更是妙不可言：首先，它的方向盘旁边有一个精美无比的屏幕，屏幕上面有许多食物图片，你想吃哪一种食物就点一下它的图片，那种食物就会从屏幕里飞出来，你就可以吃了，这就是点餐功能。
它还有飞行功能呢！只要按下开门手柄旁边的一个按纽，“万能汽车”就能快速地在天空中自由自在地飞行，如果你再在心中说出目的地，它不用听也能瞬间到达那个地方，这样，如果你有急事，就能立刻到达目的地，不迟到了。
这么好的.汽车，一定会有人来偷的，别急别急，它还有一个自动识别主人的功能呢！它有一个超级红外线扫描眼，如果你是它的主人，它就会对你说：“主人，您好！”如果你不是它的主人，它就会立刻让自己变成普通汽车，直到坏人走远了，它才会变回“万能汽车”。
我发明的“万能汽车”不错吧，我相信，只要我好好读书，努力学习，以后这种汽车一定会出现，吸引人们的目光。
