东北中考英语几篇作文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
东北中考英语几篇作文【二】
这个寒假，我们一家去东北旅游，度过了难忘而有意义的七天。
东北的平均气温为-20摄氏度，而室内温度却达20度！正所谓冰火两重天，那么现在，我就带大家去见识一下吧！
哈尔滨是我们北国之行的第一站，它的特色，莫过于冰天雪地了，而马迭尔冰棍更是特色中的特色，它不需包装纸，更不用藏进冰箱，室外的温度足以使它冰冻，还会结起一层甜霜。
睡火炕则是旅途中一大囧事，用一个比喻，那就是“韩式烧烤”。我们如一片片牛肉和鱿鱼，在“烤炉”喜欢系姆······到下半夜，“烤炉”熄火，我们一下子被丢进冰冷的调料中，被人食用······噩梦终于结束了。
第二天，我们就将穿越东升雪山，我们一行中共有４个小孩，我们享受了特权：坐一辆马车到山脚，再徒步上山，大人们可要全程徒步呢！一路上，我们风景看尽，笑话说翻，这才到达山脚。爬坡途中，我耐不住大人们的慢性子，一马当先，那玉树银花与我擦肩而过，向我身后退去，显出朦胧之美。脚下的奇特干雪如澳洲黄金海岸的金沙一般，又如四月的绿草地，踩起来棉柔舒服，但一捏，却又清凉无比。在团队中，我第一个到达山顶。眺望远方，整个雪乡银装素裹，分外妖娆。我在雪地上唱啊跳啊滚啊，妈妈用相机记录下了那些美妙的瞬间。下山时我重新归队一路上边走边滑，因为雪被铲雪车铲出两道小路，只要稍一用力，就可自己顺着山路滑，毫不费力。
东北之行的趣事不止这些，待我向你慢慢道来。
东北中考英语几篇作文【三】
今天，我和爸爸妈妈还有姐姐他们来到东北旅游。
经过20分钟的车程我们来到万达度假村里度假，只见度假村里的雪山白茫茫一片，爸爸给我买里一个雪橇，我飞快的跑带雪地里在雪地里打滚、打雪仗或者是坐着雪橇滑下山。
我由于是第一次在雪山上滑雪橇不会滑，所以刚刚滑下去就摔了个狗坑泥，而姐姐还要在上面给我用雪做好的被子盖上去，冷得我直打喷嚏到姐姐滑下来的时候，姐姐跟我一样只不过比我熟练多了，不过也更我一样，只不过她被妈妈接住了，要不是被妈妈接住下场还不是跟我一样，我于是又开始反反复复地练，终于又一次我滑了下山，而且还是很平稳的滑下去了，我开心的直蹦，只不过姐姐的撞车又把我撞下去了，姐姐还跟我玩起了打雪仗，我一直像机关枪打过去，打的姐姐只好束手就擒，玩雪橇我斗不过你可是玩打雪仗我就比你强，怎么样。
第二天，我还是在雪山玩可这时天空下起了雪，我们在雪地里打滚，打雪仗可开心了可是到了中午，就下起了鹅毛大雪，我回到房间换了一套衣服，准备出去吃午饭，吃完午饭以后我和姐姐去看了一场电影，这部电影是很火的《爸爸去哪儿》大电影。看完电影，我就老老实实的回去睡午觉了，愉快的时间总是那么短暂，睡完午觉，我就跑山雪山玩了。
玩了三天，我们该去下一个地方了。
