英语作文五年级朋友【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文五年级朋友【二】
狐狸做尽了坏事，小动物们都不愿和它交朋友。狐狸好孤独呀！它决定痛改前非，和小动物们交朋友。
它首先想到的上乌鸦，想当年，狐狸设计骗走了乌鸦大婶的一块肉，所以它就买了一块很大很大的一块肉，来当作当年的.赔礼。狐狸来到乌鸦大婶家，一边敲门一边说：“乌鸦大婶，我也改过自新，您大人大量，请原谅我吧！”狐狸说完后，屋内没有动静，它又说：“乌鸦大婶，不要为当年的事而生气了，瞧，为表示我的诚意，我给你买了一大块肉，多好啊！”只听屋内一阵冷笑后，乌鸦大婶说：“你这只老狐狸坏事做绝，想当年，你骗走了我的一块肉，害得我成了教科书上的大笑料。今天来，又想耍什么花招。快滚吧！”狐狸想：“自己诚心诚意悔过当初，想和它去交朋友，可为什么它却赶我出来呢？”
狐狸又去了黄狗家。但这次老黄狗接见了它，它们聊了一会儿。可能是狐狸的花言巧语退化了，说起了黄狗当年的丑事，不提还好，一提就糟。俗话说：“老伤疤揭不得。”黄狗立即把它给轰出去了。
狐狸又去找了小白兔等等小动物家。大家都不肯相信它。
狐狸垂头丧气，它碰见了老山羊博士，向它请教了这个问题，老山羊博士慢条斯理地说：“大家之所以不相信你的原因在于，你光说不做，就算是说的比唱的还好听，大家也不会信的，你要拿出点实际行动来呀。”
从此，狐狸做了许多好事：如鸡宝宝找不到妈妈，狐狸含辛茹苦地帮它去找；大树病了，它请来了啄木鸟医生，还好治疗及时，没有什么危险
每次，森林里贴“好人好事榜”，都少不了狐狸，大家都相信它了。与它成为了好朋友，狐狸不再寂寞孤独了，大家一起快乐地生活在这片绿色的土地上，直到永远
英语作文五年级朋友【三】
春节前，我和姐姐一起到湖南大剧院观看了《海洋朋友》这部电影。
电影的情节是这样的：
一个叫小奇的小朋友，他的爸爸常年在南极考察，妈妈又出差了，他跟在海洋馆工作的爷爷一起生活，每天学习游泳，潜水。他和海洋馆里的一只小海豚--旗旗成为了好朋友，只要一训练完，小奇就会跑到旗旗那里玩，他还梦见他们一起在大海里自由地游戏，捉迷藏。慢慢的，小奇竟然能够听懂旗旗的语言，原来，他们之间有了心灵感应。这真是一个奇迹。
旗旗在几年前失去了爸爸，他每天都想着和爸爸团聚，整天闷闷不乐的，不吃不喝，这让大家都很担心。同样想念爸爸妈妈的小奇很能理解旗旗的心情，他非常同情旗旗，每天都在四处打听旗旗的故乡，他决定将来送它回故乡找爸爸。小奇的精神深感动了工作人员，他们也一起想办法把旗旗送回大海，让他过自由自在的日子。最后，游泳馆给旗旗举行了最后一场隆重的表演，就派一艘大海轮把它送回大海去了。
看完这部电影，我十分感动。我明白了，动物和人一样，也是有感情的，也是害怕伤害的，也是需要朋友的，我们应该关心爱护他们，主动帮助他们，就像关心、爱护、帮助自己的朋友一样。
英语作文五年级朋友【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
