五年级英语作文一般进行时【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文一般进行时【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语作文一般进行时【三】
每当月亮下班，天色朦胧，小鸟就早已飞上枝头欢叫；每当黄昏降临，天际的云朵被映得五彩斑斓。坐在窗前，小品一杯香醇的茶，手捧一本名书，浓郁的茶香伴着书的幽香，真让人感到惬意！
梦想，如书籍一般伴随着每一个人。不同在于，书是无处不在，伸手可得的.。而梦想却忽近忽远，让人摸不透，抓不着，怎么样才能追上梦想的脚步呢？今日，让我们迎着夕阳余晖，品着香茶甜点，慢慢的切入真题吧。
梦想，相信每个人都有吧，不管他多么伟大或多么渺小。遥遥梦想路，需要的书籍不止一本。每一个职业都需要一本书，一本内心认为有用的书，一本充满名人至理、世间人情、知识丰富的书。
像我们班，每一个同学书包里都备着几本课外书，一到课间无作业时就拿出来看几页，放松一下紧张的大脑。我，可以说是标标准准的书呆子，不信，瞧！寂静的夜，房子里的灯光依旧通明，我坐在床上，手捧《爱的教育》滋滋有味地看着，不一会儿，就响起了妈妈对我这样做的不满声：“我的小祖宗啊！11点34分啦！你开着灯让人怎么睡啊？”切，言下之意就是让我别在这么晚看下去了。哼，难不倒我！我下楼跑到客厅，打开灯继续看。
由上所述，孜孜不倦的读书，天天坚持着积累。定能让你向着你的梦想前进！当然，每个职业都离不开书籍：医生需要医书；工程师需要建筑书；糕点师需要甜点书；老师需要一本教科书……这年头，就连家用电器都有一份说明书，你说，你能不读书吗？
我曾读过一首诗：“盛年不再来，一日难再晨。及时当勉励，岁月不等人。——陶渊明。”陶渊明是中国第一位田园诗人。后世称靖节先生，田园诗派第一人。他爱读书。这首诗告诫人们要珍惜时光，好好读书。连热爱田园生活的陶渊明都已告诫人们了，我们能不反省并且开始读书吗？
书，多的可以铺成一条路，为什么我们不走这条充满幽香的路，而选择另一条有许多未知数的路呢？尽管有许多人不得不选另一条，可是你们真的争取了吗？我在此种下一颗种子：请中国人民人人手持一本书，没事读一读，让中国成为“书香之国”！让上海成为“书香城市”！我希望并不是我一个人浇这颗种子，我期待它长成参天大树！
最后，让我们一齐，由书香伴着，踏向梦想之路，完成我们的梦想之旅！
