英文作文高级句子【一】
读同学们的作文，感受最深的是两种情况：一种是“落花流水春去也”，我自飘零水自流，就事论事，空洞议论；一种是“为赋新词强说愁”，情感泛滥，抒情无着。
如果写的人心中没有炽热的感情，却想在作品中表现出什么打动人心的情感，这种可能是是极小的，要想感动别人，就首先要感动自己。但是，就算已经感动了自己，也不见得就能感动别人。这里面就有方法的问题，写作的手法显得尤为重要。
不是少年无情愁，为赋新词强说愁，而是愁在心里人自知，他人何处觅秋风。别人感受不到，那是因为写的人没有很好的表达，无关乎愁深愁浅。
有一首歌这样唱：最近有点烦，有点烦，有点烦。烦确实是烦了，主要是听的人烦了，一句话反复说，不烦才怪。但是，烦的意境有没有出来？没有。也许心绪是有了，感染力却没有，无法给人身临其境的触动。如果连音乐的曲调也没有了，那简直就成了噪音。
这种抒情法是最糟糕的，直抒情意，简单粗暴。写作是表情达意的艺术，不仅要把意思表达清楚明白，还要表达得体有情味，这样的作品才有可读性，才能在考场上拿高分。
“微凉的秋风卷起散落一地的枯叶，然后撒手而去，任凭枯叶化作一只只残蝶，而后绝望地坠。枝头那颤抖的枯叶，终是敌不过风的诱惑，挣脱开母亲的手投向了大地的怀抱。离开了的，终是回不去了吧…… ”这是同学的习作。文字有了情境，给人以画面感，笔端流露出情绪。作者虽然没有直接去抒情，却是有意地表现情意，加上最后一句“离开的了，终是回不去了吧”，便可引出下文的.回忆。
有景有情，有画面，有情境，借情抒情，不得不说，这种抒情法又上升了一个层次。
但是，如果细品，还是会感觉这样的景是被心绪扭曲了的景，并非自然，甚至因为扭曲过分而显出了虚假的成分。
最高级的抒情，是将景和情融为一体，不偏不倚，景中有情，情中有景。秦少游有一首《减字木兰花》：欲见回肠，断尽金炉小篆香。“回肠”是作者内心千回百转的感情，当然是看不见的。但是，作者又要让读者看见，怎么办？他就说了，你想看见我千回百转的感情，就去看看那个金炉中断尽的小篆香。香燃尽了，灰烬掉下来，就像是一个个小篆字一样，柔糜，缠绵，根本分不清谁是谁。
在这句词中，回肠就是小篆香，小篆香就是回肠，也就是物即情，情即物，情物一体。作者秦少游不是将自己的情感投射到燃尽的香灰上，而是将情感融入到其中，给人以丰富的联想和体验。
这是将情比物，还有将物比情的：自在飞花轻似梦，无边丝雨细如愁。如果说将情比物是为了让情感更直观地表现，那么，将物比情就是直接赋予物以人的情感了，飞花轻似梦，便是物我相融，这里的“我”也就不再是一个独立的我，而是一个能与宇宙自然融而为一的无处不在的“我”。
情不再是人的情，也是物的情，情不再是“我”的情，也是你的情，他的情，这样的抒情也就让情感更具有包容性，共情性，也就更能打动读者。
对于有心之人来说，柴米油盐酱醋茶里皆有深情；对于会表达的人来说，信手拈来，便是情感汪洋，可以漫漶整个世界。
英文作文高级句子【二】
英语改写句子练习题（适合初中生）
根据上句完成下句，使两句话的意思相同或相一致，每空一词
1. Nancy is too young to dress herself.
Nancy is not _____ _____ to dress herself.
2. My watch doesn't work well.
There is ____ _____ _______ my watch.
3. Jane doesn't go to work by bus any longer.
Jane ____ _____ _____ to work by bus.
4. It took Mary two weeks to prepare for the exam.
Mary _____two weeks____ ______ for the exam.
5. It seems that they have known each other.
They seem to _____ _____ each other.
6. "My grandpa doesn't like coffee or coke" said Bob
Bob said that _____grandpa liked _____coffee _____coke.
7. Cao Fei joined the League three years ago.
Cao Fei _____ ____ _____ the League for three years.
8. I prefer walking there to going by bus.
I prefer to walk there ____ _____ going by bus.
9. -Thank you very much. -You're welcome.
- ____ a lot. -Not at____ .
10. Kitty does well in English.
Kitty ____ ____ ____ English.
11. They realized Hainan was a beautiful place after they reached there.
They____ realize Hainan was a beautiful place_____ they reached there.
12. We will have to finish the work hardly if you don't help us. We can't finish the work _____ _____ ______
13. My dictionary isn't so thick as yours.
My dictionary is _____ than yours.
14. Could you tell me where the East Street Hospital is? Excuse me, ____ is the _____ to the East Street Hospital?
15. The book is exciting to read.
It is ____ _____ read the book.
16. Jack's mother asked him, "Have you packed your things?" Jack's mother asked him ____ he ____ packed his things.
17. She likes singing better than dancing. She ____ singing ____ dancing.
18. Remember to ring me up as soon as you get to Nanjing Make ____ to give me a ring as soon as you _____ Nanjing.
19. They couldn't catch the train because of the heavy traffic. The heital?
15. The book is exciting to read.
It is ____ _____ read the book.
16. Jack's mother asked him, "Have you packed your things?" Jack's mother asked him ____ he ____ packed his things.
17. She likes singing better than dancing. She ____ singing ____ dancing.
18. Remember to ring me up as soon as you get to Nanjing Make ____ to give me a ring as soon as you _____ Nanjing.
19. They couldn't catch the train because of the heavy traffic. The heavy traffic _____ them from _____ the train.
20. My brother has been away from home for two days.
My brother _____ home two days _____ .
21. Li Lei decided to move to Canada when he was thirty.
Li Lei made a _____ to move to Canada at the _____ of thirty.
22. Jim was too careless to pass the exam last term.
Jim was not_____ _____ to pass the exam last term.
23. If you don't hurry up, you can't catch the train.
Hurry up, _____ you may _____ the train.
24. Yang Li wei said to us, "I'm going to visit your school tomorrow. " We were all pleased.
We were all pleased when we heard Yang Li wei_____ visit_____ school the next day.
25. This is the most interesting film I have ever seen. I have ____seen _____ an interesting film before.
26. I was late for school because of the traffic accident. The traffic accident _____ me _____ getting to school on time.
