留学作文课【一】
dear sir/madam:
as a teacher at xxxx school, i am writing to provide you a recommendation for miss/ so as to help you assess her/his application for acceptance into your program and consideration for financial aid.
considered a promising student with originality and sophistication in her/his thinking, (she/he was asked, in the spring semester of xxxx, to develop a subsystem of a dbms project for her , for which i was the chief leader. t
his subsystem was designed to manage the information of materials in foundry plant of dongfeng auto do the job, she/he read many books about software engineering and took some courses in database principles and management. keenly aware that the design of a dbms decides the quality of the whole software system, she did her/his utmost from the beginning of the project.(参加过什么活动. from analyzing user’s requirements to designing the whole system, from the detailed designing to the final programming, she was very level-headed and full of innovation every step of the way. taking full advantage of her ability and creativity, she firmly focused herself on her objective and gnored all distractions. she successfully reached her goal. in the final software testing, only a few bugs were found in her subsystem. my appreciation of her talelent was thus is a very personable woman, friendly and helpful, and she has always been a team player in her work.
i would greatly appreciate it if you could give her application for candidacy to your . program favorable consideration. should you need any further information in your deliberation, please do not hesitate to contact me.
留学作文课【二】
prof. dr. 0000
leiden institute of chemistry
p.o.box 9502
2300 ra leiden
the netherlands
phone:(+31
fax:(+31 0000
dear prof. dr.0000
I take great pleasure in writing a letter of recommendation for dr. 0000 to support his application for a postdoctoral position in your lab.
Dr. 00 is an outstanding graduate student working for the m.s. degree under my supervision. in my contact with him in the university, his creativity and attitude to research work gave me deep impression. he always proposed new ideas on his research and could resolve problems by himself, i was very satisfied with him.
Dr. 00 has been working on molecular luminescence research about six years. as i know, most of his researches have been concentrated on bioanalytical chemistry in his master’s work, such as protein and nucleic acids assays etc. in these fields, dr. 00 has strong background and research ability. he has and would be published several papers in international journals. i am often interested in reading his papers in publication and discussing with him. i am very appreciated of his research ability.
Dr. 00 also possesses very fine character. he is a devoted research worker. he works on weekends. he is an honest and smart, reliable and responsible person, and is very cooperative too.
Based on these qualities, i believe this young man will achieve greater academic success in his future work. therefore, i strongly support his application, and it would be greatly appreciated if you could give him your favorable consideration.
Please feel free to contact me if i can answer any additional questions about 0000. my address is as follows:
professor 0000
university
p. r. china
your sincerely
留学作文课【三】
1.看一遍申请人的个人材料或，这样你的推荐信才能和申请相吻合，而不会在内容上有所冲突或重复。
2.让申请人给你提供更多的材料，如简历等。
3.描述你把该申请人和其他申请人对比的先决条件。
我已从教20年，过去五年来，我指导过大约450名学生的独立研究项目。
五年来，我每年夏天带10名实习生，同时还以大银行集团(Big BankCorp.培训老师的身份带200多名大学生。
4.探讨你对申请人的了解程度。
我认识Doe先生是因为我每周的两次课他都上，而事实上只要求上一次。
史密斯小姐在大六会计事务所(Big Six Accounting Firm升职前两年一直直接向我报告。
5.选你所观察到的申请人的一、两个优点。
珍妮有绝佳的写作和与人交往技巧。Doe先生的特点是坚韧不拔、有分析头脑、善于与人沟通。
6.在描述这些优点的时候，举具体事例来支持你的观点，事例要尽量具体、详细。
他是我所教过的学生中唯一一名把听我所有的课当成一种不懈而最终成功掌握金融理论的努力的学生。班上只有10%的学生得了A，他是其中之一。珍妮有这样好的写作技巧，我毫不犹豫就让她写了一份报告，这份报告是我们政治行动委员会(PAC一项重要政策声明的基础。有了珍妮这20多页关于中东政治的分析，国会议员XXX用这份声明去游说，以图吸纳更多的资金。
7.力求把这名学生的能力量化，或把他和其他申请人相对比。
他是班上10%的好学生之一。在我所知的她的同龄人中，她的\'分析能力是最好的。
8.避免一般化和陈词滥调。
9.有一些很温和的批评。
就我所知，他唯一的缺点是他与世无争的性格，这种性格使得他有时隐匿了年轻人的活力和广博的兴趣。
偶尔地，她的坚韧和坚持会变成固执，但通常她都性格很好，头脑也很冷静。
10.谈谈申请人在他/她所选领域里的前景
我竭力向贵商业学校推荐Doe先生，这名成熟的学生会成为一名优秀的商人。
史密斯小姐有优异的领导、写作等才能，她会成为一名出色的战略咨询人员，会成为她所服务的商业机构的骄傲。
留学作文课【四】
dear colleagues:
ms. xxx requested a letter of reference from me to support her application for graduate studies at your university. as her research adviser when she was a graduate student in my school of science beijing university of chemical technology, i am pleased to comply with her request.
( ui have known ms. zhang since XX, when she was admitted as a master of science candidate into the school. as her research adviser, i directed her research and found her a promising youth radiating with intelligence and creativity. during her first year, she got a very good record in major courses and earnd good scores major and general gpa 3.3. she particularly enjoyed challenging areas of studies such as quantum chemistry and theory of electrochemistry.
during the following two years, ms. zhang worked on a computational theory study of inorganic functional materials project for his degree thesis “theoretical study of electronic structures of several representative metal element in the hydrotalcite slabs”. to make the theory model meet the actual materials, she faced down many practical problems, such as building reasonable module of inorganic materials, and calculation techniques. working hard and independently, she cracked the problems one by one, and came up with a thesis that was characterized by academic excellence. during her m.s. period, she had three papers published in international journals.
judging by her outstanding performance while she studied with me, i am convinced that ms. zhang has acquired the knowledge and intellectual sophistication on the basis of which she can undertake world-class training. i therefore lend her my enthusiastic support and would appreciate your favorable consideration of her application.
