写去爬山的英语五年级作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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写去爬山的英语五年级作文【二】
记得有一次，我、妈妈、姐姐一起去爬山。在山底下的时候，我就看到花海了。扑面而来的桂花香让我认为是在幻境中……“走啦，你在想什么呢？”一句话把我从幻境中叫醒了过来，原来是妈妈说的。我应了一下。
爬了大概十分钟。妈妈问我：“怎么样？累不累？”我说：“才爬多久！不累。”看到小草和花儿在一起嬉戏，真让我觉得面前要一幅画，不过应该加点别的`。
又爬了大概十来分钟。我看到风吹过的柳条，蝴蝶和蜜蜂你不让额，我不让你的抢花粉，小鸟叽叽喳喳的声音像一曲美妙的音乐。让我对这依依不舍。
我们终于爬到山顶，第一眼看到的就是高贵的紫荆花、热情的红桃花、纯洁的白桃花……它们被风一吹，各各都摆动着，像是对我招手“欢迎你来到美丽的世界，”我兴高采烈地跳了起来，我觉得我跳的比树还高。我躺在草上看着天上的云。在一片湛蓝的天空上，浮着一片孤云，像一个被丢弃的孩子。转眼间，看到另外一快天空，那里满是云朵，长长的云似一条绦带围绕着、飞扬着，看着看着，我都感觉自己飞了起来。再看远处，重重叠叠，像山恋，绵延不绝，浮着。还有散的，像是炊烟，袅袅。
“天有不测风云’没想到下雨了。我只好躲在树底下，我看雨细细的、密密的，犹如千针落下来躲都躲不了。这时让我想起一句诗——“好雨知时节，当春乃发生。随风潜入夜，润物细无声。”雨停了，也回家了，但那么美丽的景物我是不会忘的。
现在想起来，真有点流连忘返。
写去爬山的英语五年级作文【三】
终于到了超市。这个超市好大呀，虽然不如大商超市那么大，但远比它东西多。这里的东西样样齐全各式各样，看得我眼花缭乱的，来到了食品区，有很多好吃的，有水果、有饼干、有奶、糖……
忽然，我听到了一个声音，是爸爸说的`，说：“宝贝，你挑点儿吧，”天啊，这是我最感动地一次，爸爸竟然主动让我买吃的，我挑了我最爱的"好多鱼”、“3+2饼干”还有“康豆花生”，满满一大包，我好高兴啊！
买完东西，我们才依依不舍地离开了超市。
写去爬山的英语五年级作文【四】
一天晚上，我和爸爸、妈妈去游乐场溜冰。妈妈拿出卡，刷了一下，我们就进去了，进去以后，我们把鞋换成了溜冰鞋。
换好溜冰鞋，我们就进去溜冰了，爸爸牵着我的手，在那里转来转去，我非常非常的开心。
我玩累了，就在休息区休息了5分钟，又开始滑了，我们三个人大手牵小手，飞快地滑过来滑过去，滑了一会，我们都口渴了，爸爸过去买饮料喝，我选了果汁，爸爸选了红茶。我打开盖子喝了几口，就把盖子盖上了。爸爸对我说：“你先把饮料放在休息区吧！”我高兴地说：“没问题。”
我们滑了好一会儿，就不滑了。来到了游戏厅，我们选了水果跳跳侠玩，爸爸是一个玩，刚开始很紧张，不一会就结束了，爸爸觉得挺好玩的，让我玩，可是我不会玩，就让妈妈玩，妈妈玩这个可厉害了，连续过了三关，还给我赢了5个小玩具，我好开心。
玩好后，妈妈说：“时间不早了，我们回家吧！”我们依依不舍的回家了。
写去爬山的英语五年级作文【五】
开始往山上爬，一路上看到了好多个寺庙，我们来到其中一个较大的寺庙的门口，往里一瞧，看见里面人山人海，就使出铁头功挤了进去。呀！一群小和尚正在练功呢！他们的动作时而舒缓，时而迅捷。脸上的`表情时而威猛，时而陶醉。身体动作整齐划一，就像是电脑制作出来的一样，不论围观的游客如何的喝彩与鼓掌，他们都无动于衷，完全沉浸在表演里了。受到感染的我和几个小伙伴心潮澎湃，在旁边“有模有样”的比划起来，直到听见大人们善意的嘲笑声，我们才一个个灰溜溜的钻出人群，向山顶进军。
一路上山路崎岖不平，我们一边消灭着身上携带的“美食”，一边欣赏着眼前的美景，有空还和几个不期而遇的小动物游戏一番，当然最后总是在大人的催促下继续前行。
不知不觉间我们来到了山顶，伸着脖子往下一探头，哇！感觉一阵眩晕，可真高啊！赶紧往远处眺望，山峰蜿蜒起伏，像一条条巨龙在飞舞。山顶上吹起一阵阵微风，舒服极了。我禁不住朝山涧大喊了一声“呵”------，山谷里立刻回荡起我的声音，慢慢的越来越小，过了很长时间才听不见。其他几个小伙伴也跟着一起大喊起来，你一声我一嗓，欢乐的声音在山谷里久久的回响着。我看着脚下的群山，心里觉得无比的舒畅。
嵩山真是美极了！连绵起伏的群山，山脚下树木葱茏，青翠欲滴，山上云雾缭绕，高瞻远瞩，可饱览无限风光。我心里更是赞叹不已：嵩山真是大自然的杰作啊！
写去爬山的英语五年级作文【六】
以前，爸爸经常对我说：“有一个游乐场很好玩，那里有一个巨大的过山车，等你长大了一些，我就会带你去玩。”哈哈……我终于盼到了这一天，这是在暑假中一个晴朗的\'星期天下午，爸爸开着车，带着妈妈和我来到了锦江乐园。
一进游乐场，我就迫不及待地拉着爸爸妈妈冲到游乐场的位置地形图处，寻找出过山车的位置，直奔而去。终于我坐到了过山车上，系好安全杆，即期待又紧张地等待着车开动。过山车开始起动了，车子慢慢地沿着轨道向上爬，我的心一下子被拎了起来，下意识地紧紧抓住扶手。
然后车子很快地冲下来转了一圈又一圈，我闭着双眼，不断地尖叫起来，什么都顾不上了！听着耳边的风声与一起的玩伴们的尖叫声，我感觉到自已马上就要掉下去了……又过了一会儿，车子终于缓缓地停了下来，我抬起发软的腿，慢慢地走下了车子。这真是我长这么大以来最刺激的一次游玩。妈妈问我“怎么样，好玩吗，还敢再玩吗？”我兴奋地回答她，这真是太好玩了，下次我还要再来玩一次！“
