英语作文改错高中【一】
In the 21st century, the talent quality of hardworkingand dependable is no longer the only thing that the enterprise required. Infact, those two qualities are the basic constitution, now the requirement oftalent is more comprehensive. The perspective to define a talent is differentnow.
在21世纪，人才品质中的勤奋和踏实不再是企业唯一要求的品质了。事实上，这两个品质只是基本的个体素质。现在的人才要求更加全面。定义人才的视角也不一样了。
First,the enterprise prefers the one who could combine innovate and practice. Basically,the value comes from innovate, but only after combined with the innovation andpractice, can the value work the maximal effect. We can not be restricted tothe repetitive tasks. We should always keep creating new ideas.
第一，企业喜欢能把创新和实践结合起来的人。从基本上说，价值源于创新，但只有把创新与实践结合起来，价值才能发挥最大的成效。我们不能局限于重复的工作中，我们应当时时想着创造新的点子。
Second,the enterprise is more fancy the cross-domain talent. 21st century isthe century that combines different field and industry. The modern society andenterprise is no only require specializing to the professional field, but alsoto know about the relevant major and field, combine them and solved theproblems effective.
第二，企业更喜欢跨领域人才。21世纪是结合不同学科，不同产业的世纪。现代社会和现代企业不仅仅要在某个专业领域有造诣，还要知道相关的专业和领域，结合它们，有效地解决问题。
Finally,the IQ, EQ, SQ issue. When we define one man is successful or not, we do notlook into his academic record or intelligence quotient (IQ, but the balance developmentof intelligence quotient, emotional quotient and spiritual quotient.
最后，IQ，EQ，SQ的问题。当我们定义一个人成功与否，我们不仅仅看他学科成绩和智商，二世要看智商，情商，灵商的均衡发展。
Tosum up, if we want to survive in this competitive society, we need a comprehensivedevelopment to adapt to the requirement of the modern enterprise, or we willeliminated by the society.
总之，如果我们要在这竞争激烈的社会中生存，我们需要全面地发展去适应现代企业的要求，不然我们就会被社会淘汰。
英语作文改错高中【二】
I like to travel so much. When holiday comes, I will make travel plans. My friends like travel, too. So we make up the group. Travel means a lot to me. On the one hand, I can broaden my vision. Every city has its own feature and lifestyle, so I can experience different lifestyles. Books can provide us theorical knowledge, but if we go to the place to witness the real scenery, then what we learn from the book will be useful. On the other hand, travel can bring me the new mood. If I live in the same place for a long time and do the same thing every day, my life will be boring. But travel can help me to refresh my mood. When I come back, I am full of energy again.
我喜欢旅游。一到假期，我就会制定旅游计划。我的朋友也喜欢旅游，所以我们会组队一起去玩。旅行对我来说有很大的意义。一方面，我可以拓宽我的视野。每个城市都有自己的特点和生活方式，我可以体验不同的生活方式。书本可以给我们提供理论知识，但是如果我们去那些地方见证真正的风景，我们从书本上学习到的才是真正有用的。另一方面，旅游可以给我带来新心情。如果我很长一段时间一直住在同一个地方，每天做着同样的事情，我的生活就会很无聊。但是旅行能帮我重塑好心情。当我回来时，我就又充满活力了。
英语作文改错高中【三】
Time flies like an arrow before we realize it .It is known that nothing is more precious than time. The good old proverb "time is money" reminds us that time is valuable. When time goes by, it will never return. However, it is a pity that some people don't make full use of their time .They spend a lot of time in sleeping, chatting, playing computer games or other unmeaning matters. . They don't realize that wasting time is actually equal to killing themselves. They always regret not having made great achievements. One of the reasons may be they do not make good use of time. Therefore, in order to be successful, they should first get into the habit of being on time. It’s a sign of cherishing time. Don't put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Being lazy will eventually lead to failure. Don't wait, because you don't know how long it will take when you put off your plan.
英语作文改错高中【四】
一天，老虎大王让小动物去开会，可是一连十天都没有一个小动物来，老虎大王发怒了，它说：“我一定要找它们算算账。”
于是它出门，它看见了小马，背着很多东西走过来，忙问：“小马，你怎么不去开会?”小马立刻跑过来说：“虎大王，您没有说什么时候去，而且你可知道我很忙的'，白天背，晚上抬。”虎大王听了点了点头，说：“好吧，这次放过你。”
虎王见到了小猴在树上玩，火冒三丈说：“小猴，你为什么不去参加我的大会?胆子真大，看我不吃了你!”小猴吓了一跳，说：“虎大王，别吃，别吃，我也很冤枉啊我，真想去的，可是我和松鼠正在玩捉迷藏，我正想下去开会，小松鼠一下子出来说‘捉到了’，就把我给推了下去，我骨折了，今天才好了一点，我现在腿还有点痛呢。”说着走给虎大王看，虎大王见了说：“好吧，这次放了你，下一个，我绝不轻饶。”
虎大王来到了小猪的房子，看见门关着，就上前咚咚咚咚的推门。过了好一会儿，小猪才把眼睛揉揉，开了门，虎大王说：“你干嘛不去开会?”小猪说：“对不起，您没说让谁去，我还以为我又脏又胖，还有一股臭味，您不会让我去的，如果要去，我还是把我洗得香喷喷的再去。”老虎大王说：“好吧，我放了你。”
老虎大王又来到小兔家，看见小兔提着萝卜，老虎大王说：“你为什么不去开会?”小兔吓了一跳，把篮子往边上一放，蹦蹦跳跳地来了：“我不知道去什么地方开会，我还跑了一大圈，竟然没一个人开会，所以还以为我听错了呢，你让我怎么去呢?还有我也不知道什么时候去呀，我连续五天跑来跑去，就是没见到你和别的小动物，我也是冤枉的呀。”老虎说：“好吧，看来是我出错了，我一定要重写一个开会通知。”一到家，它就写起来了：
请所有动物明天上午7点到我家来开会，共同商讨如何阻止人类破坏森林的大事。
那天所有的小动物都来开会了，老虎非常满意!
英语作文改错高中【五】
At the coming of the new year, it is also the time for one of the biggest tennis matches, the Australian Open. Since Li Na won her second grand slam here, more Chinese people fall in love with tennis. One of the popular male players, Roger Federer, who is more than 30, but he is still in the top level. The fans hope their hero can enjoy the match and they didn’t expect the next grand slam. But Roger made it happen again. He defeated his great rival, Nadal and won Australian Open. The world was cheering for him, and they witnessed this great man to make his career successful at the old age. If we have dreams, it is never too late to pursue. People always take the age as the excuse, actually, they lack of persistence, which differs them from successful men.
在新年到来之时，也是最盛大网球比赛之一的澳大利亚网球公开赛的时间。自从李娜赢得了她的第二个大满贯，越来越多的中国人爱上了网球。其中受欢迎的男球员，罗杰费德勒，虽然他已经年过30岁了，但他仍在顶尖水平。球迷们希望他们的英雄享受比赛就好了，不敢奢望下一个大满贯。但是罗杰做到了，他击败了他的对手，纳达尔，赢得澳大利亚公开赛。世界都为他欢呼，他们见证了这个伟大的英雄在晚年再次取得事业的成功。如果我们有梦想，永远都不会太迟。人们总是以年龄为借口，实际上，他们只是缺乏坚持，这就是他们和成功人士的区别。
