风景五年级英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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风景五年级英语作文【二】
我们已经来到桂林一天了，我们在龙洞口正准备坐小船进去，突然，我们看到了一个渔民横举着一根竹竿，竹竿两头各站着两只鸬鹚，只要十块就可以和两只鸬鹚照相了，我们随便也照了几张照片。接着就坐着小船进龙洞去了。
刚进龙洞，里面一片漆黑，简直就是伸手不见五指。幸好有手电筒，不然一进去就东碰碰，西撞撞了。船慢慢划动着，突然，我眼前一亮，五颜六色的灯光照耀下来，真是不进不知道，一进吓一跳，你看，人山人海，上面弯弯曲曲的，活像一条龙在追一只老虎。听舅妈说：这个洞冬暖夏凉，一进来，比空调还爽呢！
走到龙洞内部看到了一个巨大的石头冰棒，看得我真想伸出舌头舔一舔，可惜它是石头，唉！真悲惨呀！我们还看到一个大寿桃，那个大，真是没法说。最后还有一条龙，含着一颗珠子，我还摸了摸呢！还有童子拜观音。接着坐船绕了一圈……
到了外面，我还想再玩一次呢！！！
风景五年级英语作文【三】
早就听说花果山风景美丽，今天我终于如愿以偿，和爸爸妈妈一起来到了桐柏县城边的花果山风景区。
进了风景区的大门，一座秀美的山峰出现在我的眼前。我们刚走进大山，就看到了许多千姿百态的小石猴，有的在翻跟斗，有的在吃桃子，有的在妈妈怀抱里吃奶，最有趣的是，有一个小猴子还在练倒立呢！
过了一会儿，我们来到了水帘洞。一股水流好似从天上飞落下来，像一支支银色的箭头，争先恐后地直指谷底的岩石，发出悦耳、动听的响声。绕过瀑布，我们来到了水帘洞内，洞内有一座孙悟空的雕像，看起来像真的一样，非常威猛。旁边还有两只小猴子呢，好像他的两个小卫兵。
时间过的真快呀，太阳偏西了，我们该回家了。这次花果山旅游真有趣！
风景五年级英语作文【四】
今天下午，我和爸爸、奶奶一起乘车去桂林。我们坐的车是２号车有４５座。我和奶奶坐在最前排，爸爸坐在最后排。我们车上的小朋友比１号车上的小朋友还多些呢。
车上有又小又可爱的李哲宇弟弟，比我大的亲亲姐姐，我们的刘校长和她的女儿妍妍姐姐，还有调皮的白宇，胖胖的易明睿弟弟，扎着马尾辫的小与儿。
我们在车上唱啊跳啊真开心。坐了５个小时的车到了兴安吃晚饭。吃完晚饭，我们又坐了１个小时的车到了桂林参观了日月双塔，还照了一张相。 然后坐车到宾馆睡觉去了。今天坐车真辛苦。
风景五年级英语作文【五】
桂林山水甲天下，原来的梦想今年“十一”长假得以实现。
出去游玩当然少不了约上三五好友一起，因为黄金旅游期，我们的随团出行的时间安排到了3——7日，五日游。行程已定，剩下的时间就是准备和等待了，等待期间我们兴奋不已，大人们每天至少要联系3次，小孩们则不停的问啥时间出发，我们的心早已飞到遥远的桂林了。
我们坐的是3号晚上21：00整1805次火车，在4日晚上21。04经过24个小时的长途跋涉终于到达了目的地——桂林。桂林是一个典型的旅游城市，有旅游业带动的餐饮业服务业十分多，沿街两旁全是大大小小的餐馆和宾馆。
我们首先到的景点是——美丽的漓江。漓江的山就一字“秀”。它没有泰山的高大雄伟，气势磅礴，有的只是小家碧玉般的娇小玲珑。漓江的水清澈见底，一览无余，沁人心肺，没有大海的博大神秘，就是一个“清”字。蓝天青山碧水，好一副美丽的中国山水泼墨画啊！
