中考英语作文责任心【一】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
中考英语作文责任心【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
中考英语作文责任心【三】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成\"总—分—总\"结构
中考英语作文责任心【四】
从一个人呱呱落地开始，即使是一个上着幼儿园的孩子，都应该承担起责任，都应该有一份必须的责任心。
看似矛盾的两个词语，从语言解释上两个词语有着差不多的意思，但是每个人对两者都有着不同的看法和认知。
责任是每个人应该承担做好的事情。上学的时候责任是好好学习，工作的时候责任是做好份内工作，有了家庭后就应该照顾好家人，努力奋斗，为着家人和自己努力拼搏着，应该有所担当。这也是不可推卸的本份事，不是想做就做不做就算的事情，这是应该做必须做的事，即使忙碌即使有任何可以用做借口的理由，面对责任时，千万不可拿出来用，因为这就是责任必须性。
责任心就和责任有所不同了。同是班上学生，今天不是我值日，但是有的人却本着一股强烈的责任心帮助他人，身为班集体中人，有义务做值日。他们往往不同于他人，因为他们有着一颗负责的心，那股强劲，无人可挡，他们时时刻刻把责任的重担扛在肩上，稳稳的走着，却总是不亦乐乎。同是一家人，兄弟姐妹同父母生，是分不开的骨肉之情。父母含辛茹苦的把他们拉扯大，但是照顾父母的责任偏重的压在了儿子身上，这是风俗习惯，各自成了家后，父母就住在儿子家，理所当然的儿子要照顾父母，父母病危，儿子的责任不只照顾父母，还要养家还要挣钱，姐妹们来帮忙照顾父母，就像负责一样，轮到照顾的时候就来了，他们认为这就是负了责任，其实也是，但有着一两个女儿本着这是我的父母，我应该时时刻刻来照顾，这就是责任心，那些认为负了责任的女儿们，不知道父母以前辛苦把他们带大多么不容易啊，他们那时怎么会想着这就是责任呢，如果这只是责任，那他们现在的.好生活怎么又得呢，难道不是父母栽培他们吗？这种风俗习惯不是束缚责任和责任心的理由，如果一个人是孝顺的，那他们更无须想这些烂借口，本着孝道做的，还有份外的他们更会做，因为这是孝，也是他们报答父母和对他们那股深深的尊敬和爱。
不要想着推卸不要想着悠闲，该负责的负责，尽力负责本着良心做一个负责人的人。
这是人生的大道理。
