英语小作文高中15分【一】
When I was a freshman in college I watched the film Gua Sha Treatment for the first time, now I am a junior student and I come back to review the movie from a multicultural aspect, I have many different feelings after watching the film again.
At the beginning of the film, XuDatong is given an award and later he delivers a speech. What makes me impressed most is in his speech he says “one day I will become one of you, a truly successful American, today this award proved that America is a true land of opportunity and I am the living proof of that.” At that moment Xu thinks he has realized his American Dream totally with his lovingly wife and adorable son. However, I think it is ironical that to make a speech like that and I assume it is made on purpose to hind a clue for the story\'s development. How many non—American people have such a beautiful American dream? One of my classmate studies in American now and before he went aboard he told me his American dream is he can stand at the top of the New York. To be honest, I also dream that one day I can get the Green Card living there happily and successfully maybe working at the Wall Street. When Xu gets the award he thinks he entirely melted in the melting pot neglecting the multicultural obstruct, later the plot goes against the way he thinks. And later Quinlan asked Xu\'why you be the scapegoat of your father?\' Xu answers \'because he is Chinese.\' Then maybe Xu knows that there is always a wide gap between Chinese and American cultures.
The second scene is Xu hit his son Denis because Denis hit the son of xu\'s boss, at the middle of the film xu tells his boss that he hit his own son is only to show his respect to his boss John Quinlan, that time Quinlan feels puzzled “what a Chinese logic”,yes, American can never understand such a logic full of Chinese characteristic, because they respect everyone including the children, they won\'t beat a child to please the boss, and there is no such a conception of degree between employee and employer, they feel everyone is equal, which is quite different from china.
Connected to the second scene, the third difference I want to analyze is the care for the children. In America, people pay more attention to the right of children which can be seen from the law—leaving children alone at home is illegal, while in China it is so common that almost everyone may experience such loneliness. And Children Welfare Agency does work in America which shows the importance Americans attach to children\'s right. What\'s more, I remember a line \'No one won the case, especially the child.\' In my opinion, it also manifests the universal concern from the American public to the children.
The fourth aspect is following the procedure, in the film, more than there times, the people focus on the rule, the law, the procedure. At the Christmas Eve Xu wants to return back to his home pretending as a Santa Claus, what a pity, the security recognizes him and persuades \'you are always a good tenement, never causes troubles for me.\' And another scene is at the end of the film , the judge says \'I have to follow the procedure.\' However, in China people always have to ask for a favor to do something, and later you have to pay back the favor,for myself, I prefer the American style, strict to the procedure.
The fifth and the last point is the humors, Quinlan says \'you can\'t fall, your health security is the company paid.\' \'Datong, welcome home, maybe next time, you can come from the front door.\' \'dady, why you come from the window\' \' because we don\'t have a chimney.\' I really adore this distinguished American humor, especially in dangerous situations, which is quite rare in China.
That\'s my whole reaction to Gua Sha Treatment.
英语小作文高中15分【二】
您好！我是绩溪县龙川小学六年级的学生胡俊懋。自从学了课文《彩色的翅膀》后，我就非常敬佩您。您为了让宝石岛上的西瓜开花能结瓜，探亲回家从黑龙江带回蝴蝶，让昆虫为西瓜授粉。
岛上的自然环境十分恶劣，没有土地，没有蔬菜，没有昆虫。两年前，你们来到宝石岛，在岩石下、小路旁，垒出一块块“海岛田”，把西瓜籽种下土地，瓜苗出土了，瓜秧拖蔓了，开了一朵朵小黄花。可是一个瓜也没结。有些战士灰心了，而一位雷达兵懂得农业知识，知道西瓜开花要授粉，而岛上没有昆虫授粉。第二年瓜秧开花，战士们给每朵雌花进行人工授粉，果然结了不少小瓜。谁料一阵暴雨过后，巨浪扑上小岛，岛上只剩下了一个小瓜。你们像抚养婴儿似的照看小瓜。奇迹出现了，这个岛上成熟了第一个西瓜。你们是多么喜悦、激动、自豪，你们付出的汗水换来了甘甜的.西瓜。如果你们当初放弃了，就不会有岛上第一个西瓜，也就尝不到甘甜的西瓜。
学了这篇课文，我很受启发。在我的生活中也有类似的事情。记得五年级的时候，老师选我参加汉字录入。老师要我先背五笔打字的口诀，背了几天才把口诀背下。背了口诀还要学会拆字。那时，我几乎要放弃了，心想：拆字可真难啊！我还是放弃吧！可是，老师鼓励我们说：“要记住五笔口诀，多练习五笔打字，就会有感觉了。”我坚持不懈地练习，白天早上，到老师办公室去练习打字，晚上放学以后，老师让我们到电脑室练习。功夫不负有心人，我参加宣城市汉字录入比赛，获得了一等奖。
学过课文《彩色的翅膀》，我明白只要坚持就会有收获。我佩服您，佩服岛上热爱祖国的战士们。在这里我祝福你们身体健康，工作顺利！
此致
敬礼！
英语小作文高中15分【三】
单向思维、单层论证、感情用事，这样的描述从字面上就可以看出带有批评的色彩，但有意思的是，当教师将这样的陈述说与学生时，学生即使会接受，对其议论文的写作也不会有质的改变。一个重要的原因，就是学生不知道自己如此作文背后的原因是什么。笔者以为，从时序的角度来看，这其中有两个原因：
一是历史原因。学生在进入高中之前，已经有过议论文的学习经历，虽然真正动笔写议论文的情形不多，但自媒体时代的网络写作（腾讯空间的“说说”或者“微博”）中，已经含有大量的议论文性质的只言片语，凡与学生为网络好友者，应当皆知此事。这样的前置性阅读与写作经验，使得学生在进入高中之后的议论文写作中，充满着叶文所批评的三点表现。
二是学生原因。这里所说的学生原因主要是指学生的判断力与逻辑思维的能力。议论文是为“说理”而来，而“分析”实际上是逻辑思维能力的表现，因此学生的“分析说理能力不足”，实际上就是不会分析，不会说理。根据笔者的观察，即使高中学生在面对一个观点时，常常表现为盲从的状态，即丧失自我判断的状态。尤其是对网络上的一些让人“眼前一亮”的观点，这种情形之下更多的是附和，这就是叶文所说的“单向思维”；而对于不同观点，又容易极端反击。这就是叶文所说的“感情用事”；而无论是在课堂上的议论文写作中，还是在网络写作中，为了说明自己的某个观点，自然会引用对自己有利的证据来论述，这就是“单层论证”。
当我们将历史原因与学生角度的判断与逻辑思维原因结合起来时，就发现学生出现“分析说理能力不足”及其三个表现是有因可循的了。
