徐州潘安湖英文小作文【一】
今天，爸爸妈妈带我去潘安湖游玩，我听后高兴地一蹦三尺高。
到了潘安湖，未进大门，我就看见了一排排高大挺拔的绿树，树上挂着许多像梨子似的木瓜，真是好看。我高兴的一蹦一跳地走进公园。这时，一股香气扑鼻而来，我靠着香气来找方向，走进一看，原来是桂花！我闻了闻，香气晕人，我都陶醉在香气中了。这时候我想起了一句词“金秋送爽、桂子飘香。”这多么形象！
我沿着公园的大道，欣赏着两旁的奇花异草，慢慢地向前走，一阵秋风吹来，感觉爽极了仿佛之身于仙境一般。突然，爸爸喊道：“快来看。”“呀！这不是潘安湖里的湖吗。”我不由自主的喊道。只见这里的水清澈见底碧波荡漾。湖中的荷叶还显得那么亭亭玉立。这里的假山、湖水、绿树、鲜花构成了一幅幅动人的画面，这真令人心旷神怡、流连忘返。
正看的入迷，爸爸喊我们去茱萸寺游玩，我依依不舍地离开了景色秀丽的潘安湖，期待着下次的到来。
徐州潘安湖英文小作文【二】
3.1 样本与分析方法
本文选取的五篇英文议论文样本如下：The Real Truth About Lies （Randy Fitzgerald，882 字，选自The World Of English，2001.6）; Education （ E.B. White，1021字，选自The Hill Reader，135-155）; The Art Of SmartGuessing （ Bryan W. Mattimore，1034 字，选自The World English，2001.2）; On The Art OfAdvertising （ Samuel Johnson功能语法，995 字，选自 The Hill Reader，453-455）; 以及 The Green Frog Skin（John Lame Deer，1166 字，选自The Hill Reader ，332-334）.
笔者依据物质，心理，关系，行为，言语和存在六个过程对每篇文章的分句进行了判定，并为进一步的量化分析计算出各分句所占比例。具体分布情况如下表所示：
物质
过程
心理
过程
关系
过程
行为
过程
言语
过程
存在
过程
总计
篇章1
26
13
32
1
25
4
101
篇章2
35
8
29
7
5
8
92
篇章3
26
9
35
2
1
14
87
篇章4
31
13
24
7
7
82
篇章5
42
13
46
10
7
3
121
总计
160
56
166
20
45
36
483
百分比
33%
11.6%
34.4%
4%
9%
7.5%
主句
16
16
40
2
16
7
97
百分比
16.5%
16.5%
41.2%
2%
16.5%
7.2%
附属从句与嵌入式从句
64
22
36
10
9
13
154
百分比
41.56%
14.3%
23.4%
6.5%
6%
8.4%
3.2 分析结果与探讨
从上表可以看出，韩礼德的六个过程模式在英文议论中呈现不均衡分布。从整体来看，物质过程和关系过程所占比例分别为33%和34.4%。这就意味着在英文议论文中，物质和关系过程占据主体地位，二者总体超过总数的三分之二，而其他四个过程仅占不到三分之一。单从主句来看，关系过程以41.2%的比例占据主导地位，同时，我们可以发现一个非常有趣的现象，即物质，心理，言语过程所占比例均为16.5%。在从句的过程分布比例中，物质过程占41.5%，非常接近关系过程在主句中所占的比重。其次是关系过程，所占百分比为23.4。存在过程在整体分句，主句及从句中的分布比例较为稳定。出现比例最小的为行为过程。
结合小句过程模式的分布比例和议论文的特点，笔者的分析如下：
第一，物质过程是摆事实，讲论据的最佳途径。作为质询和决策的方式之一，议论文应当提供充分有力的证据来引领读者挖掘事件的方方面面。论据通常包括常识，例证，事实，数据，引用等等。有效的论据必须能够清楚直接地证明论点cssci期刊目录。一般情况下，人的行为即为已经发生的无可改变的既成事实，而物质过程作为外部经验的表述恰好使其成为了提供论据最为常用的模式。在议论文中，从句通常扮演着为主句提供事实或数据的角色，由此不难解释为何物质过程在从句中占据绝对比例。例如，在复杂句“advertisements are now so numerous that theyare very negligently perused”中，其从句“they are verynegligently perused，”阐述了主句所引发的事实结果。相反地，主观意见和心理活动的论证说明力远不如事实，这也正是心理过程在议论文中所占比重较小的原因。
第二，关系过程在英文议论文中的显著地位源于其对逻辑关系的阐释。逻辑性对议论文至关重要功能语法，议论文的目的就是通过理性说明来赢得读者的认同，而读者对新观点的认同建立在其已认同的事实和原理的基础之上。因此，从本质上来说，议论文是通过良好的逻辑建立和加强共同与合作意识的过程。换言之，所有能够作为论据的事实和原理都必须相互并与结论有逻辑性地联系在一起，任何逻辑错误或推理失误都可能导致读者对整篇文章论点的怀疑。关系过程，表明一项经验与另一项经验之间的关系，恰好能够清楚地阐释读议论文中的逻辑关系。以代表句型“x is a”为例，x与a之间的逻辑关系并非唯一的。a既可作为某项特征表明x的特性，也可作为指代与x进行互换。简而言之，在关系过程中，主句通常是被从句归纳化或概念化的特征或指代。
第三，在英文议论中，看似表达主观观点与意愿的言语过程同样不可或缺。引用权威的语言，观点，评论或表达都常常作为强有力的事实支撑来赞同或反对某一观点，而无论是直接引用还是间接引用，都必须通过言语过程来体现。
第四，其他过程类型在英文议论文中同样占据一席之地并发挥着举足轻重的作用。对议论文而言，描述，叙述，阐释等写作手法的合理利用与相辅相成无疑是锦上添花。正因如此，六个过程在英文议论文中的不同分布比例恰好是议论文客观，有逻辑，严肃及某种程度上带有一定主观色彩的特点等要求的自然结果。
徐州潘安湖英文小作文【三】
今天的天气格外晴朗，白云姐姐朝我微微笑，太阳公公向我招招手，无论什么都显得格外的和谐。在这个美好的日子中，我们去潘安湖湿地公园春游啦！
我们来到了潘安湖湿地公园，一从从的郁金香扑入了我的眼帘，它们真是千姿百态：有的正在“幼年期”，它象个害羞的小姑娘一样躲藏在花苞里不肯出来，但又想看看外面的世界，就将花苞拨开一点儿往外面看。有的正在“成长期”，它贪婪地吮吸着春日的阳光使自己一点儿一点儿慢慢地长大。还有的正在“成年期”，它努力地将自己的身体张开，想让游客给它拍照，注意它……这些姿态不一，五彩缤纷的郁金香给潘安湖湿地公园增谈了几分美丽。
接着，我们走过了小桥，绕过了绿茵茵的草坪，来到了樱花林。瞧！樱花林多美啊！洁白如雪的花瓣包裹着金黄色的花蕊，美丽极了。一阵风吹来，樱花随风舞动，洒在绿茵茵的草坪上，洒在大树下，洒在小河里。美丽的樱花点缀着潘安湖湿地公园，使这个花香四溢的潘安湖湿地公园更加美丽！
我们游览完了这些景点后，挑了个地方野餐，然后又恋恋不舍的逛了一圈，在夜的帷幕下，我们背着潘安湖湿地公园渐行渐远。我不禁看了看被我抛弃在身后的潘安湖湿地公园，心想：潘安湖湿地公园这块风水宝地我以后一定还来！
徐州潘安湖英文小作文【四】
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徐州潘安湖英文小作文【五】
Today, our school students go to DAZONGHU play, still in the car, we will talk about Twitter in the industry, even in the most disciplined Yang Xin and we discuss it: "all sorts of gossip DAZONGHU lake is not beautiful?" "What's the great lake like?"...
After a while, the car came to the countryside, the countryside was real, the air was fresh, and the big longitudinal lake was just ahead. It must be more beautiful. This increased our sense of mystery towards the great lake. At this time, all the questions you had solved were solved, as long as you follow me, you will know.
Just entering the door, you will see a large green circular pond in front of you. In the middle of the pond, there is a small pavilion. The lotus leaves in the pond are green and green, and some are a little bit yellow, like a dead leaf butterfly on the lotus leaf.
Then we went forward. A reed boat showed us that we boarded the boat and looked down. A big goldfish who couldn't name was swimming happily in the water. Turn my head to the right, a very high statue of Buddha Ying in front of us, his side also has a seven storey pagoda.
We did not know how long to walk again, and we suddenly saw the tuft of beauty coke. It was already autumn. It was a miracle to see the beauty of beauty in the fall. The flowers beside a few red lanterns, the few red lanterns in the flowers, flowers reminds me of a little red this sentence.
We are going to go. Oh, I really can't walk, but I can't do it. I have to take a few photos to record it.
徐州潘安湖英文小作文【六】
DAZONGHU own magnificent scenery, light clouds, merged into a lake, and different seasons, to spring, clear water, green spring breeze, Hu Tian Wei, Ariel roll, summer, autumn in October, the Netherlands in the shadow of Fubo, reed lianyue. Shujiu winter snow.
Today, the teacher took us to visit the great longitudinal lake, and we witnessed the beautiful scenery of the great longitudinal lake.
When we came to the grand longitudinal Lake Resort, a very large ancient boat was first seen. It was made of reed with special products from Tai Lake, which is said to be used for fishing. This ship is not only a sign of the great longitudinal lake, but also the craft of removing the ancient working people's shipbuilding.
On the road, I continue to enjoy the beautiful scenery, the road on both sides of the oleander, exudes the fragrance of the road on both sides of gladdening the heart and refreshing the mind, there are many famous flowers and trees, they silently dotted with large vertical lake.
We came to the tower of the magnificent Lake Xing, heard that there is a legend: The Legend of a snake living at the bottom of the lake, often out of trouble, damaging crops, local residents The people are destitute. Later the celestial show, let the skilled craftsmen to build the tower. The snake was awakened by the sound of construction and found the tower on the top of the head. It knew it was the fairy who pointed out the people to suppress it. So it along the water to escape to the East, the way it is on the back of the fish belly Mandarin Sword Pierced, python died, then the residents lived a good life. Xing Hu tower has seven floors, each floor has a statue of Buddha, who DAZONGHU the people did not go to a plethora of tourist. Thanks to a Dubai in your Buddha, pray for peace. I climbed to the top of the "I", I can not help a watch tower in Lake scenery, it is at a glance. Ludang maze like gossip, it is said that there are thirty-three Ludang maze Chakou, sixty-six channel, in early 2000, Shanghai was the world headquarters of Guinness called "the most in the world"
The scenery of DAZONGHU the way we visited beyond count, "Liu Bao Cun" stone "water guanyin". These charming scenery, open our eyes, edify our sentiment.
Time passed quickly, a little while, in the afternoon, we were reluctant to leave the great lake.
