高考英语作文高分句子朗读【一】
议论文写作总是为了解决某个问题，作文材料揭示的问题或来源于现实生活，或来源于自我困境。考生在提出自己的见解之际，结尾或强烈咏叹，或呼吁号召，以促使人们自我超越。这样的结尾，铿锵有力，能给人以激励和鼓舞，彰显文章的现实意义，极富感染力量。
【示例】
①我不怕黑，不怕疼，我愿意燃烧我的青春去闯去拼，去尝试去经历——让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧！（天津考生《痛而知之》）
②童心之贵，贵在其真、其柔、其善。人的成长会失去许多，却不应失去最本真最纯净的赤子之心。就像埃斯蒂斯所说的：“我们不是能拯救整个世界，但我们可以伸出手去挽救触手可及的部分。”我愿这赤子之心，长存你我周围，更长存于你我心间！（浙江考生《愿赤心长留》）
③莫让“双向的爱”缺失，让爱传递下去！（广东考生《让爱双向流动》）
【点评】例①用慷慨激昂充满智慧的语言表达自己对“痛”的理性思考，并大声呼告“让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧”,感情充沛，富有力度。例②重申“童心之贵”的内涵，并借埃斯蒂斯的话表达自己“愿赤心长留”的美好祝愿。例③作者提出了“让爱双向流动”的观点，结尾直抒胸臆，铿锵有力。
高考英语作文高分句子朗读【二】
It ______ ______ ______ the train will be late.
答案：is likely that
2. It is likely that the typhoon will sweep across the island.
The typhoon ______ ______ ______ ______ across the island.
答案：is likely to sweep
3. I think trying to stop the couple quarrelling will be of no use.
I think it's ______ ______ ______ to stop the couple quarrelling.
答案：no use trying
4. Every time I was in trouble, he had no hesitation in helping me.
Every time I was in trouble, he came to help me ______ ______.
答案：without hesitation
5. He never hesitates to help if I have any problem.
He always helps me ______ ______ if I have any problem.
答案：without hesitation
6. I crossed the street so as not to meet him, but he saw me and came running towards me.
I crossed the street to ______ ______ him, but he saw me and came running towards me.
答案：avoid seeing
7. It seems that the students in that class have all passed the qualified exam.
All of the students in that class ______ ______ ______ ______ the qualified exam.
答案：seem to have passed
8. It seems that the boys of the class are playing football on the playground.
The boys of the class ______ ______ ______ ______ football on the playground.
答案：seem to be playing
高考英语作文高分句子朗读【三】
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一简述
1. 当过去分词在句末时，不管有无逗号，都是就近修饰名词;
2.现在分词在句末时，无逗号是就近修饰的名词的定语；
3.当现在分词在句尾且前有逗号时,修饰邻近句子的'主语,做主语的伴随状语或做句子的伴随结果.因此不能用句尾现在分词修饰前面句尾的名词. 所以OG127说C选项:"the phrasehaving been assigned...is uncertain in reference,making the sentence unclear."-->就是说这个现在分词本来是应该修饰前面的employee的,却变成了修饰主语governments了. (另外在GMAT里,having been done的用法错误,应直接用done
避免上述错误的方法:所修饰的名词在句尾用定语从句修饰--OG127正确选项B (而不用加逗号的现在分词修饰.其实分词是定语从句的省略形式,在句中无逗号分词(注意是无逗号的,有逗号的在句中有歧义就比定语从句简洁还有 OG120也是同样道理:修饰句尾名词,正确选项A用定语从句.E选项的句尾现在分词错误.
4.当现在/过去分词在句中且前没有逗号,修饰前面紧邻名词;
5.当现在/过去分词在句中且前后都有逗号,有歧义:1修饰前面紧邻的名词,2向后修饰后面句子的主语.
这种结构在GMAT肯定错,如果修饰某句主语,则避免将该分词置于以名词结尾的句后.避免方式:1用定语从句/介词短语明确修饰对象.2可将分词提到句首,所修饰主语及所在句子紧跟其后-->形成句首分词修饰句子主语.见OG179
6.在前面有多个名词如名词1+介词+名词2结构,而要用分词修饰名词1时,为避免歧义要重复名词1即用同位语结构:名词1+介词+名词2,名词1+分词.见OG208
二．
1、doing/done,SVO 注意分词的逻辑主语与S一致
2、介词/连词+doing/done,SVO 也要注意分词逻辑主语与S一致
3、S,doing/done,V 分词作定语修饰主语（前后一对逗号隔开，相当于定语从句）
注意：如果出现: “名词,doing,名词”，则会有分词前后的修饰歧义，如179DE，245E
4、SVO doing 分词作定语修饰主语，如 96AC，121C，146E，222A，234B，237E
5、SVO,doing
A、分词优先作状语
1）修饰主语（与分词在句首一样，注意逻辑主语），如 33B，39C，44B，120E，163D，256B
2）修饰主句动作，如 78BD，119B，154A，259A
B、其次作定语，但没有定语从句清晰，会有修饰歧义，如 253DE，（“，including”除外 249）
6、SVO done 分词作定语修饰O（同4）
7、SVO,done
A、分词作状语修饰S，如 大全558
B、分词作定语修饰O，如 127A（分词相当于形容词 253A）
some people base on sth是绝对错误的。但是有sb. base sth. on sth.的用法. 三．
1.SVO+doing,无逗号的情况下doing是针对宾语的动作,96AC(OG says : assuring针对主语有问题，121C，146E，222A(OG says: enabling很好的修饰了宾语，234B，237E -------以上证明了ets的偏好,svo+doing修饰主语是模糊的,修饰宾语是清晰的
2.SVO, doing有逗号,33B，39C(Og says:protecting很好的
解释了主语的行为，44B，120E(Og says:错误选项有可能混淆的指代主语而不是逻辑上正确的宾语，163D(Og says:sleeping正确的修饰了主语，256B --------以上证明了在Og中svo,doing的doing多指代主语
3.svo,doing有逗号,78BD(doing指代了前面整个句子的行为，119B(同前，154A(*，259A(同前------------以上证明了Og中svo,doing的doing多指代前面的整个句子
四．例子
产生participle phrases原点是为了to reduce wordiness by replacing longer adverbial or relative clauses，另外要强调的重要讯息不会写成participle phrases，因为分词修饰语属于次等地位(The
modifier is subordinate to the main clause。也就是说A….and B…(A与B一样重要，如果A…V..,B...Ving (就重要性而言A>B
简单一句：分词构句是主要句子的意义延伸。
目前我看到有几种句意：
1. 因果(★★★★★
2. 补述：解释某事(★★★、描述状态并列或伴随(★★、纯举例
participle
phrases如此具困扰性是因为可以改写的来源多
1.由adj. clauses (如who, which开头可改写成分词词组。考题中可分形容词子句限制性、非限制性改分词的考法。
2. 副词子句(有连接词开头的也可改分词词组，所以有因果关系或时间关系，单纯就时间关系看，可以有先后或同时，会有动作是伴随或是并列关系。
3.当三个以上的动词用and相连时，后面的部分也改写成分词(V, Ving... and Ving...。
我看过的说法中，觉得Manhatan GMAT备考网站，里面指导员所讲的分词概念不错，但是他的目的在卖书，所以讲的真的不多。
1.当分词构句放句首，修饰后面句子的主词。前几天看到有人发帖的整理，讲到分词在句首，表示此动作先于主要句子的动作，讲的真好。
2.当分词构句不放在句首时:
if
there's NO COMMA before a participle, then the participle creates an adjective phrase that modifies the noun immediately
preceding.
if
there's a COMMA before a participle, then the participle creates an adverb phrase that modifies the action of the preceding
clause.
PS：逗号的产生可能是插入语，遇到插入语可以跳过不看，不代表分词修饰这个插入语。
判断上抓前句的动词与主词，如果用中文想就是「此主体这个动作的行为导致或表示.....」(to modify the action of。而且不可以只有思考主词或动词。 如果遇到前句有数个动词，以找最近的动词为主，譬如V1 to V2，分词构句修饰V2
3.
participle (V-ing after the comma can not modify the subject of the preceding clause's
noun.
這個考「什么情况下不可以改成分词构句?」除了需要有对等连接词的句子，不可改分词构句，因为句意重要性会被改变外，
打逗号的Ving分词，无法修饰逗号之前的名词，所以非限制的形容词子句最好不要改分词Ving构句(有7個考題，但是Ved分词例外(有两个考题。
高考英语作文高分句子朗读【四】
议论文要在全篇彰显文采，难度较大，稍微处理不当，就可能将议论文写成了抒情散文，背离了文体规范。但是在结尾处有意识地借助某种修辞手法，亮一亮自己的闪光点，在文末给读者留下文采飞扬的印象，展示自己深厚的阅读积淀及开阔的备考视野，不失为一个好的选择。或以比喻、排比、拟人、设问、反问、对偶等作结，或引经据典，借精彩助阵，创造自我的精彩，或引用流行歌词作结，收束如歌，旋律悠长。
【示例】
①多宽容一点，发生在你身上的是非就会少一些；多宽容一点，你的内心将更加的宁静；多宽容一点，人生路上的风景你看到的就会不一样。（黑龙江考生《宽容，一生的原则》）
②心态平衡，则生活平衡；生活平衡，则人生幸福；人生幸福，则永无大憾。（四川考生《平衡人生》）
③信念让沙石熬过蚌肉的蹂躏，蜕变成璀璨的珍珠；信念让天空忍住暴风雨的阴霾，奉献了迷人的彩虹；信念让花种不惧严寒的摧残，书写出春天的芬芳；信念让你我不惧艰难，不断前行，乐享人生的精彩。（湖南考生《精彩人生要坚守信念》）
④是呵，蝶失不是偶然。我们何时才能如梭罗一般，坐在时间的溪水里垂钓天上的星星，看大地寒来暑往，四季消长分明；看种子播撒信念，古树支起苍穹？（江苏考生《蝶失》）
⑤诗曰：咬定青山不放松，立根原在破岩中。(千磨万击还坚劲，任尔东西南北风。（福建考生《把根留住》）
⑥司汤达说：“我从地狱来，要到天堂去，正路过人间。”人间风云变幻，世事无常。然而，风物长宜放眼量，只要无愧于内心，一生，安矣！叩问心灵，“我愿意”!（湖南考生《叩问心灵》）
⑦很喜欢陆放翁一句词：“沙鸥相对不惊飞。”这固然是说人要少机心，但人若能对环境毫无机心，不事窥看，自然想必也可与人安然相对不惊飞了。（江苏考生《安然相对不惊飞》）
⑧我很喜欢一段诗，如今只依稀记得最后一段了：少年/让阳光照进你/你要明媚的笑/等我满身风雨后/回来认取。勿忘初心，且行且珍惜。（浙江考生《勿忘初心》）
【点评】例①运用排比，富有气势；例②运用顶针，回环往复；例③运用拟人，生动形象；例④运用反问，引人深思。例⑤——⑧都直接引用或化用诗文名句，借精彩来助阵，达成了自我的精彩，显示出高超的语言驾驭能力，在显眼处巧妙地向阅卷老师展示自己丰厚的阅读积淀，具有较强的视觉冲击力。
高考英语作文高分句子朗读【五】
好的文章，总是既重视思想与文采，又重视结构的匀称和谐。结尾如果能巧妙照应开头，一呼一应，首尾圆合，便能使文章读来气韵流畅，既能体现视觉上的和谐对称，又能体现思维上的起承转合。可直击标题，点题点旨，使文题有落脚之处，也可照应论据，一材多用，让所用论据充分燃烧。
【示例】
①生活就是供给与需求的一种平衡关系，尽管在很多人的生活当中，并不平衡，但这毕竟只是一种趋近于平衡的一种趋势。通过这些看似毫无意义的简单分析，我们其实不妨用经济学的眼光来看待我们的整个生活，其意义可想而知。（四川考生《过一个平衡的生活》）
②还是那句话，手机像魔鬼，千万莫沉迷；千万别让我们的生活，被手机所操控；千万不要让我们的灵魂，沦为手机的奴隶。（北京考生《手机像魔鬼，千万莫沉迷》）
③莱特兄弟、周恩来、迈克尔……他们的故事昭示着这样一个真理：满怀憧憬，让心中的梦想播种；翘首企盼，让梦想的种子发芽；辛勤浇灌，梦想之花就会绚丽斑斓。（湖南考生《梦想在开花》）
【点评】例①文章开头提出“生活是什么？”这一论题，结尾与开头呼应，结合材料对这一论题作了个性化的解读。例②结尾直击标题，并提出“不要让我们的灵魂沦为手机的奴隶”这一宏旨，警策人心。例③从人要有梦想生发开去，运用三个因为梦想而成就精彩人生的经典事例，结尾回扣前面的论据，点明中心，结构谨严。
高考英语作文高分句子朗读【六】
非谓语动词系列训练（二）
一：在句子意思不变的情况下用分词或不定式改写下列句子：
1.When he saw from the top of the mountain, he viewed a beautiful city.
-----___________from the top of the mountain, he viewed a beautiful city.(用分词
2．When it was seen from the of the mountain, the city looks like a garden. (用分词 ------_____________from the of the mountain, the city looks like a garden. city. (用分词
3.When he was asked why he went there, he said he was sent there to be trained for a space flight.
-------When ________ why he went there, he said he was sent there to be trained for a space flight. (用分词
4. Do you know the boy who knows Japanese?
----- Do you know the boy ___________ Japanese? (用分词
5. Do you know the boy who is called Tom.
---- Do you know the boy ________Tom.- (用分词
6. This is the man who organized the activity.
This is the man________________ the activity. (用分词
7. He followed his students and came in.
------ He came in, ____________ his students(用分词
8. He came in and was followed by his students
----- He came in ,____________by his students(用分词
9.The woman who was dressed in a blue skirt delivered a speech to us.
---- The woman _____________ in a blue skirt delivered a speech to us. (用分词
10. Because he is a physicist, he could well explained how to do the research.
---- _______ a physicist, he could well explained how to do the research. (用分词
11. He was born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, and he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.
----- ____________on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, and he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. (用分词
12. The flowers his friend gave him will die unless it is watered every day.
---The flowers his friend gave him will die unless ____________ every day. (用分词
13．When we were walking dogs, we came across a famous professor.
------ When ____________ dogs, we came across a famous professor. (用分词
14. He donated over 10 billion dollars in order that he could sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in the earth-stricken area.
----- He donated over 10 billion dollars _____________education, culture, sports, and public welfare in the earth-stricken area.(用不定式
15 After he had finished his homework, he played the piano.
----- ____________ his homework, he played the piano.
16. After the bridge had been completed, it went through a hard time because of the bad weather.
----______________________, it went through a hard time because of the bad weather.
17 It is said that Bell invented the telephone.
18. Bell is said __________ the telephone. (用不定式
19. I don’t decide what I should do.
I don’t decide what__________(用不定式
20. It happened that he had been invited
---- He happened _____________
21.He was so young that he could not go to school. He was too young __________ to school.
22. When the test was finished, we began our holiday.
----- The test __________, we began our holiday.(用独立主格结构
23. As time goes by ,he becoms aware of it.
With time ________ by, he becomes aware of the significant of it.
24. The moon, which travels round the earth once every month, is a natural satellite of the earth.
---- The moon, ___________ round the earth once every month, is a natural satellite of the earth.
25. Though he had been told several times, he didn’t understand me.
-----_______ several times, he didn’t understand me.
26. After the problem was solved,he took a rest.
----With the problem ____________, he took a rest.
27. If time permits, we will
28．He lay there, his hand clenched, his eyes looking straight up.
---He lay there, his hand_______, his eyes looking straight up
29.I once read a book called Man, Woman and Child, which enabled me to understand the love in a family.
------I once read a book called Man, Woman and Child, ______________ me to understand the love in a family. (用分词
30.There are many places of interest, among which is the Yunji mountain,whose scenery is very beautiful, which attracts lots of tourists from different places every year.
------There are many places of interest, among which is the Yunji mountain,whose scenery is very beautiful, ____________ lots of tourists from different places every year. (用分词
二：非谓语动词完成句子练习
there was no doctor available. (only
, playing cards at home or taking a walk in the park? (spend
. (think
包括三名儿童）. (child
5. 根据他的话判断）, he did well in his exam. (judge
the Tang Dynasty. (date
7. This is an article （由五部分组成）five parts. (consist
five parts.(make
as soon as possible. (solve
bored a lot of fans to death. (concern
, l cannot object to your marriage. (concern
子）at school? （keep）
（躲在木箱里）behind the door. (hide
,we had to walk home last night. (be.
in the broad daylight yesterday. (rob
（满是脚印）. (mark
（石油价格上涨）, the economy of that country is slowing down. (go
18. When the national flag is being hoisted, all the students stand at attention, . (fix
him, I decided to write again. (hear
20. He doesn’t seem to mind by others. (make
next week is of great importance. (hold
is very important. (hold
is of great importance. (hold
the Third World. (belong
（致力于研究）, the professor paid little attention to his surroundings. (devote
in the morning. (come
（为了确保那孩子尽快康复），five doctors took turns looking after him day and night. (ensure
，the old man struggled to his feet. (help
, the parents were taken to the dining room. （show）
（.support）
. （drop）
, I am not familiar with this kill. (tell
（为了不被注意）by others . (notice
三：合并下列句子
1. The annual school sports meeting was held yesterday. It presented a marvelous opening ceremony.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. After the opening ceremony, we sat in the base of our class. We waited patiently for the beginning of the race.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. Some of my classmates work very hard, and they hope to fulfill their dream. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4..My friend Christine took part in the 800-meter race. She had received training many times, so she kept calm before the race. After 400 meters, though she looked tired, she still tried her best to run. We screamed and beat the drum when we saw she passed by. She won the medal, and we were proud of it. (把短文中的从句或并列句改成非谓语动词
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四：语篇填空 用所给动词的适当形式填空。(一）
Freud was one of the first scientists [1]_________（make）serious research of the mind. The mind is the collection of activities [2]_________（base） in the brain that involve how we act, think, feel and reason. He used long talks with patients and the study of dreams [3]___________（search） for the causes of mental and emotional problems. He also tried hypnosis(催眠. He wanted to see if [4]________（put）patients into a sleep-like condition would help ease
[5]________（trouble） minds. In most cases he found the effects only temporary. Freud worked hard, although what he did might sound easy. His method involved [6]________ (sit with his patients and [7]________（listen）to them talk. He had them [8]________（talk）about whatever they were thinking. All ideas, thoughts and anything that entered their mind had to
[9]___________（express）. There could be no[10]________（hold）back because of fear or guilt. 基础写作 :最近，你就读的学校——广东实验中学高中部将举办开放日。 你将作为学校的
学生代表向前来参观的英语老师介绍高中校区的基本情况，请准备好你的解说词，文章的开头和结尾已为你写好。(学会用非谓语动词表达）
?位置交通：位于广州市西部，荔湾区；出行便利，步行到地铁站约10分钟。 ?学校历史：逾120年的悠久历史；现高中校区于2004年 竣工并投入使用。 ?校园环境：占地面积约125,000平方米；植物繁茂，绿树成荫，环境优美。 ?校园设施：课室宽敞明亮，配备齐全；拥有标准运动 设施，
其中综合体育馆可用于举办比赛、会议和典礼。
?师生情况：目前学生约3000人，教师约200人；全体师生正在
为学校更美好的明天共同奋斗。
?【写作要求】
?只能用5个句子表达全部内容。?【评分标准】 ?句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Good morning, teachers! Welcome to Guangdong Experimental High School!.....
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非谓语动词练习答案
1．Seeing 2.Seen (原句有误，请改成When it was seen from the top of the mountain,the city is beautiful (用分词 3. asked 4. knowing 5. called 6. organizing 7. following 8. followed 9. dressed 10. Being 11. Born 12. watered 13. walking 14. to sponsor 15. Having finished 16. Having been completed 17 18.. to have invented
19.to do 20. to have been invited 21. to go 22 finished 23. going 24. travelling 25. Having been toldTold 26. solved 27.permitting 28. clenched 29.enabling 30. attracting
二：非谓语动词完成句子练习
Keys:
1. only to be told (that 2. to spend your spare/free time
3. thinking about 4. including three children/ three children included
5. Judging from / by his words/what he said
6. dating back to/from (which dates back to/from
7. consisting of / which consists of
8. made up of/which is made up of 9. to solve the problem
10. concerning the football match 11. As/So far as I am concerned
12. (in keeping five children 13. hidden in a wooden box
14. There being no bus 15. to have been robbed
16. Seen from the top of 17. Seeing from the top of
18. To see 19. marked with footprints
20. the price of oil going up 21. fixed on/upon the national flag
22. with (both his hands tied 23. Not having heard from
24. (his being made fun of 25. to be held
高考英语作文高分句子朗读【七】
这本书花了我300元。
I spent 300 yuan on the book.
I paid 300 yuan for the book.
The price of the book is 300 yuan.
It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.
我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。
I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.
I know no more English than Li Ming does.
I know as little English as Li Ming does.
一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。
On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
高考英语作文高分句子朗读【八】
什么是朋友？你一定会回答：朋友，就是朋友呀！那么，什么是真正的朋友，你知道吗？有人会说是狗，也有人会说是那种说话算数的人……想听听我的意见吗？那就请听我慢慢道来吧！
朋友，顾名思义，即陪伴你的友人。朋友当然也有好坏之分。好朋友，将会带领你进入一个品德高尚的生活境界；而坏朋友，则会带领你进入一个恶劣、下流的地方。
曾经，有一好友，名叫郑心羽。她是一个成绩优秀、品德高尚、多才多艺的女孩。有一次，我忘了怎样做寒假作业，严格说，我忘了寒假作业的格式，便打电话问她。她一次又一次地耐心告诉我，使我很快完成了作业，也十分感谢她。
曾经，与她同桌一年，她总是在看一些我怎么也看不懂的书，还看得特别认真。有一次，她还对我说：“你也多看看这些书吧！从这些书中，我知道了很多知识，很多道理哦！”我随手翻了翻书，瞧见封面上的那些字，竟是巴金、朱自清、老舍等著名作家写的散文书。那时，我们才三年级。
最令我难忘的，还是在小学五年级时发生的一件小事。
那时，我和我当时的同桌吵得很凶，连老师也帮不上什么忙。当时的同桌名叫马佳倩，是一个自信、活泼，同时自尊性很强、嘴不饶人的女孩。我们吵着，谁也不让谁，上课小组讨论，讨论着也会吵起来。鸡毛蒜皮的小事更是吵得不可开交。心羽却一直在旁边看着，没有说一句话，只是静静地看着。只有当我们快吵完了，都吵哭了，她才开口说：“两个人不要再吵了，这么点小事吵什么吵，俗话说，退一步海阔天空吗！你们都让对方一步，不就什么事都解决了吗？”说完，还给了我们每人一张餐巾纸，让我们擦擦眼泪。
这虽然只是一件小事，却让我久久不能忘怀。并不是那一张纸巾的问题，而是心羽的话和她处事、待人的态度。对啊！退一步海阔天空。多么简单的道理！两人吵架时，不管帮任何一人，都是对另一人的伤害！只有公正待人，公正处事，从第三方角度去看待事物，这样才能不伤害到任何人。多么深奥的言论！可为什么心羽懂而我们不懂呢？哦，是那些课外书。
真正的朋友是什么？是一个能带给你正确方向，给你做指路人的人！
