英语四级作文网购【一】
记得那时我们家的快递特别多，于是，我就想试试网购。那一天，妈妈在电脑前购物，后面妈妈接了个电话就出去了，我就赶紧跑到电脑前，一看，妈妈的网页还没关，这可把我乐坏了。
我就开始搜索，打了“短袖”两个字，结果一看，乱七八糟的，有男童的，有小童的，有女士的，有男士的，连大爷大妈的都出来了。我发现了问题，赶紧加了“女中童”三个字，这回儿就都正常了。
我挑呀挑，终于挑到了一件草绿色的.短袖，也有我的号码，可是我又不知道要怎么买，我找呀找，终于找到了购物车，把它加了进去。这时候，妈妈正好回来了，她一看我在捣鼓，就好奇凑过来问：“干嘛呢？”“在研究网购，”我回答，“但是，不知道怎么买。”“这你老妈可是不要太擅长啊，来来来，我帮你！”老妈一脸骄傲。
我点了一下我的购物车，妈妈点了我要买的短袖，按了一下结算，付完密码，东西就买好了。我给老妈点了个赞：“真厉害，我们现在是越来越方便了，科技的进步真好！”
这一次的网购经历虽然不是非常的怎么样，但是它是我记忆的一小部分，也是我许多第一次的一小部分，而正因为有了它们，我的生活才会如此多姿多彩！
英语四级作文网购【二】
记得马云刚推出淘宝软件时，妈妈许多步骤不会，还得靠我这个小帮手来助她“一臂之力”。有一次，我正在津津有味地看着电视，就在这时，从房间里又一次传来了妈妈的呼唤声：“儿子，赶紧过来，妈找到了一样好东西!”我对妈妈的求救已经是习以为常，可是听到了“好东西”这个词，我不禁也兴奋了起来，我来到了电脑房，只见电脑的屏幕上显示着衣服的示意图，衣服款式新颖别致，最为重要的是这件衣服的价格。“169元三件!”没有看错吧，在市场上买一件169元还差不多，现在算下来一件才差不多50多元，我立马也激动起来。可是刚看过新闻上播的网购“诈骗”的我立刻收起了刚才的激动之情，心里想到：这会不会也是那些骗子们设下的局呢?我便把想法告诉了妈妈。妈妈听完以后，开始也觉得有点不对劲，可是，很快妈妈抵不住这 “物美价廉”的诱惑。妈妈把页面往下拉，出现了买家的好评。妈妈看完以后立马又动心，分别挑选了三种颜色不同的款式，三下五除二地付了款。
等待在一天天中过去，到了第六天，衣服还没发货，妈妈开始抱怨商家发货慢，可又不知道怎么办?一想到物美价廉的衣服，妈妈只好耐心地等待。终于，在等到第12天，包裹到手了。妈妈迫不及待地打开包裹，里面的东西令我们大吃一惊，三件衣服的颜色与图片完全不同，材质也不怎么好。妈妈原先那喜悦的`心情早已消失，换来的是一肚子的不愉快，对商家强烈的不满。我们准备如实评价，可当我们点开店铺页面，网页却显示已经为店铺点了五星的好评，到这我才明白那些评论都不是顾客的真实意愿。
虽然经历了这一次失败的网购经历，但我和妈妈依然热衷于这便捷的购物方式。只是我们越来越谨慎，每次都会货比三家才付钱，真正成为了一名正宗的“网购达人”。
所以，在科技发达的今天，我想提醒各位亲：网购便捷，但要谨慎入手!
英语四级作文网购【三】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
英语四级作文网购【四】
那是我第一次网络购物。当时，我从电脑上看了一部电影，叫《哈利波特之魔法石》，马上被故事深深吸引住了。从那时起，我有了买《哈利波特》系列书的。
开始时，妈妈总以会耽误学习等理由拒绝。但最终抵挡不住我的软磨硬泡，同意给我买这套书，但是要我自己买。
“Oh Yeah——”我迫不及待地抢过妈妈递来的手机，轻车熟路地打开当当网。映入眼帘的首先是网站上的各类品牌广告，让人眼花缭乱。搜索《哈利波特》，网页上与《哈利波特》有关书籍有不少，因此，要挑一款买，可没那么简单了。销量，评论，价格……这些关键点必须达标，这是妈妈教给我的。
花了一个多小时的时间，我挑出了三四家店铺。还在比较时，妈妈等急了，她一把夺过手机，不满地说：“挑套书也要花那么长的时间，你还要不要眼睛啊?”见状，我连忙给妈妈赔笑脸:“妈妈，你最好啦，再给我点时间，马上就挑好了。”货比三家，我终于选出最满意的一套。然后由妈妈输入支付密码，完成支付。
接着，就开始漫长的`等待包裹的时间。那段时间里，我的状态用妈妈的话来讲就是“太神经质了!一天到晚念叨着快发货。”每天，我都向妈妈要手机。因为手机上可以查物流，只要点开“我的订单”就可以了解包裹已经到了什么地方。发货后，我一天要查物流四五次，盼星星盼月亮，就盼着包裹快点到。而且，妈妈的手机也进入了我的“听”线，只要电话铃响，我的第一句话就是“谁打的?”第二句则是“包裹快递吗?”而第三句则是妈妈的回答：“不是。”
等待快递的短短三天，对我来说无比漫长。第三天，妈妈终于接到快递电话，正在做作业的我“砰”地一声跳起来，先是发出一声喜悦的惊叫“啊!”，然后是一声惨叫“啊!”因为水壶被我碰到后掉下来，砸到我脚了。虽然出了点意外，但我还是一瘸一拐地跑着去拿包裹了。
那套我自己挑的书没有令我失望，我第一次网购也画上了一个完美的句号。
难忘的第一次网购经历，让我体验到了科技创新给人们生活带来的便利，足不出户就能买到比实体店价格更低，种类更多的商品，只有你想不到，没有你买不到的!科技改变人们的生活!
英语四级作文网购【五】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
英语四级作文网购【六】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
