战争主题的英语中考作文【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
战争主题的英语中考作文【二】
20XX年8月28日，日本侵略者轰炸上海火车南站。
“轰”的一声巨响，火车站的候车室瞬间倒塌了。车站里那成千上万的人们惊惶失措，逃的逃，叫的叫，哭的哭，乱成一片。顿然间，硝烟滚滚，肉横飞。
这时，从被炸的候车室的废墟和碎片中传来一个幼儿的哭声，闻声过去，一个三、四岁的男孩正坐在废墟里，他的周围都是肉模糊的尸体，他身上也都溅满了。那男孩显然已被周围发生的一切吓怕了，他一脸惊慌，眼睛瞪得大大的，满脸都是灰尘，还张着大嘴拼命地哇哇啼哭着，连脖子、脸上的青筋都露出来了。这个可怜的孩子是在用他那拼命的哭声找寻自己的爸爸妈妈，找寻自己熟识的亲人。然而，这凄惨的哭声没有惊动他的爸爸妈妈，没有惊动他的亲人。唯一的答案，就是这些亲人已被日本侵略者的炸弹夺去了生命。
头顶上敌人的轰炸机还在盘旋着，一枚枚炸弹继续攻击着，地上的人们的，伤的伤，小河里流成河悲惨得难以想像。就在这时，他听到他旁边的废墟里，传来一个微弱的声音，他知道，这是他妈妈的声音。于是，他拼命爬过去，手上、脚上都被碎片划破了一道道口子，鲜在流，可他全然不顾，一个三四岁的孩子一下子仿佛成了一个懂事的小大人，因为他有一个希望，一定要看看妈妈，一定要把妈妈救活。终于，小男孩爬到了妈妈身边，看到妈妈一脸的鲜，小男孩赶紧伸手去帮妈妈擦，妈妈从牙缝里挤出两面个字“孩子”就断了气。就这样，本来一个幸福的家庭由于日本侵略者的轰炸，这个孩子成了孤儿。
这个孤独、可怜的孩子，他以后的生活又会如何？相信他会记住这段历史，发奋读书，为振兴中华而不懈努力。
战争主题的英语中考作文【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
战争主题的英语中考作文【四】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
战争主题的英语中考作文【五】
我家的邻居养了两条黄色和黑色的狗，它们相处的很不友好。黄狗的耳朵短，腿特长，像一个长跑冠军。黑狗的眼睛很黑，活像两黑宝石，并长着一对毛茸茸的大耳朵。
有一次，那两只狗竟然为了一根骨头而“大打出手”。正巧，被我看见了，我心里暗想：今天可有好戏看了，赶忙搬来椅子“看戏”。只见黄狗把黑狗一下按倒在地上，而那只黑狗也毫不示弱一个翻身又把黄狗按在地上咬它的脖子，没想到黄狗来了个“鲤鱼打挺”又站起来了，黄狗扑向黑狗乱咬，黑狗疼得“汪汪”直叫。它们两个凶狠的瞪着对方，那凶恶的眼神好像恨不得把对方给咬。就在这千钧一发的时刻，黄狗竟向黑狗扑去，而黑狗从下面一钻，躲过去了，黄狗重重摔在了地上。黑狗抓住机会准备乘胜追击的时候，突然“嗷嗷”得叫起来。原来黑狗的旧伤又发作了，说是迟那时快，黄狗向黑狗扑了过去，我心里暗想：黄狗这家伙真够乘人之危的呀！竟然为了根骨头而不择手段。黑狗看黄狗扑向自己却无力抵抗，只有灰溜溜的逃走了。黄狗高傲的叼起自己的“战利品”趾高气扬的回家了。
这场争“骨头”大战真精彩呀！
战争主题的英语中考作文【六】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
战争主题的英语中考作文【七】
是老师用力将戒尺敲向讲台。“注意听讲”他响亮地强调着，却仍听到后排同学们满不在乎的窃窃私语。
“啪”又是一下敲下去。老师愤怒地举起手里厚厚的一叠试卷抖动着：“都考得很好！因此就不听讲解了吗？老班将一叠试卷猛地一掀：“就是九十九分……九十七分……你们的成绩确实个个不错。但是，这是你们的真实的成绩吗？”他气愤地摊开他的笔记本：“有人拿走了老师的答案！”
笔记本上，刺目的一行纸张撕下后忙乱的锯齿。
我的眼皮猛的一跳，便心虚地低下头来——那张纸在测验时曾传到我手上。我利用了它，便将那张写满答案的纸继续往前传去，这下麻烦了！
老班的气愤地声音刺耳地响起“参与作弊的，全部起立！”
话音落下的第一秒——
班里一片静默，我埋着头翻动书页，却清晰地听到左心房内猛烈地撞击跳动。这下怎么办？我急促的呼吸着，满脑子的问号和感叹号。天哪，东窗事发了吗？我心虚地环顾四周，都是个怀鬼胎的表情心态。一片心跳声中，没有人起立。
第二秒——“哐啷”有人乒乒乓乓地挪开课桌站了起来。现实一个，然后便稀稀拉拉地将近十个。桌子摩擦着地面刺耳地充刺着耳鼓。我该起立吗？我犹豫地直了直身子，却用眼光瞥见周围同学的一脸荡然。我便又弯下腰身，若无其事地翻看课文。手脚微颤地将课本抓的很皱。
第三秒——陆续又有人在心跳声中起立，我仍是关注着周围同学的动作。同桌轻轻地哼着小调可她的手指却慌乱地搅在一起。那么，我能起立吗？老师会因此撤销我的班干部吗？我踌躇着。我期望所有身边的人都站起来。那样我就起立，我安慰着胸口中叫喊的良心。
第四秒——没有人再起立，我已是受不了心脏的抗议，我退了退椅子，双手撑住桌面，准备起立。我的心跳因这个决定再次加速起来。
第五秒——同桌扯住我的衣袖：“你真要起立吗？快坐下！”她的嘴唇快速扇动着，再次使我犹豫。“老师会怎么看你？你的.班委还当不当了？”她凑近我小声而严肃地说着。我便又缩回了脚步。
第六秒——刺耳沙哑的铃声打破了沉寂，再也没有人站起来。
老班什么也没有说，他只是长长地叹了口气。
这口长长的叹息，猛地又抓住了我刚刚舒缓的心，他在叹什么？他为什么叹气？
我隐隐有些害怕，那话音刚落后的第七秒。我的心因不安而再次剧烈的运动。
第八秒，周围又响起了同学的嬉笑声。
第九秒我忽然发现了什么。
第十秒，我也长长地叹了口气。
这十秒的战争，我输了。
我的对手，叫做诚信。
