五年级第一学期牛津英语必考作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级第一学期牛津英语必考作文【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级第一学期牛津英语必考作文【三】
暑假天气炎热，我们来到了磐安，虽然比义乌凉快，但大太阳还是毫不留情的照射了下来。知了也拼命的叫着，“好热啊，好热啊。
外面这么热又不能出去玩，好无聊啊，这时爸爸提议：“我们和你的朋友去漂流吧。“好耶!好耶!我顿时高兴的手舞足蹈。
我们一行人坐着车，翻山越岭来到了龙溪漂流区，那里人来人往，好不热闹。山顶上的`云朵如同仙境一般，太阳照射在水面，像在和细细的波浪挑逗。水边，放着许多皮划艇，一旁古木苍天，树顶上晃晃悠悠的绿流了下来，像几条充满生机与希望的瀑布，一直流到石头缝里。
我们穿好了救生衣，坐着游览车，到了漂流的起点，这里有一条溪，一直往下流。我和爸爸和两个好朋友坐一条皮划艇，每条皮划艇配两支船桨。我们刚坐上皮划艇，就顺着水流开走了，没想到，一开始就有一条小水瀑。“唰——一下，我们差点飞出去，皮划艇把水花翻起，形成了一道水帘。“哗——水花过去后，我们已经全身湿了。稍稍平稳了以后，这时轮到我们用桨划了，我和爸爸划起了船，可船不是转圈就是歪歪扭扭的前进。
顺着水流的方向，我们的船向河流中间的几块石头冲去。不好，要撞上了，爸爸使劲调转方向，终于才没有被撞上石头。这时我们迎面而来的又是一条很陡的水瀑，我和同伴如同见了猫的老鼠，尖叫起来。这条水瀑大约有两米多高，我抓住一根竹子，想把船拉回来，可是来不及了，我们连同竹子一起冲了下去。更可怕的事情发生了，我们前面是一块巨石，我们又尖叫起来，但我们的船撞上了巨石爸爸的帽子，被这突如其来的撞击给震了下去，我们赶快划出这块岩石区域去抓爸爸的帽子，帽子却像个顽皮的小孩，忽上忽下，我们也不甘示弱，特别是爸爸生龙活虎，差点跳下水去抓帽子了。我们看见爸爸的帽子就在眼前了，我们几个小孩都伸手去抓都没抓到，最后还是爸爸用船桨把帽子给勾了回来。一路漂流下来，遇到了好多险境，都被我们一一化解。
最后我们是团队中第二个到达终点的，总路程3500米，我们用了近两个小时，这也是一个不错的成绩好了。第一次漂流的感受就是——刺激，特别刺激。
五年级第一学期牛津英语必考作文【四】
This is my first week in ** Senior Middle School.Everything here is new for me.Our school is an old school but it`s very beautiful.I have 50 new classmates in my class.They`re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little sad.Because I`m too common.But come to think of it,it`s a very good thing.I believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent classmates.I didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of study.But I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my ability.All I can do is do my best in the future.I am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very kind.It`s a pleasure to work and study with them.I`m really very happy.I`m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like others.I believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.
五年级第一学期牛津英语必考作文【五】
1.Iam___________________________________(四班班长。
2.I________________(上学lateyesterday.
3.Three______________________________(足球运动员arethere.
4.Tom_______________________________(给我写信everyweek.
5.Myfather___________________(努力工作.
6.She______________________(起床atseven.
7.Therearealotof______________________(景点inShanghai.
8.LastyearIwanttoBeijingandmetJoe.We_____________________(成为朋友.
9.Heis_____________________(寻找hispen.
10.Mylittledog______________________(洗澡everyday.
11._____________________(从前，therewasafarmer_________________(住在山腰withhisson.
12._____________________(那时.I____________(是agirlofeight.
13.Wemust_______________________(保持健康.
14.Mygrandmais_______________(如此重soshecannotwalkfast.
15.Lastnightthey_____________________(回家late.
