邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【一】
Dear Ms.Smith,
I'm Li Hua,Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School,which is close to your university.I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature".We hope that you will accpet our invitation if it is convenient for you.please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes,
Li Hua
邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【二】
要准确规范，忌前后不一
有一指令性通知的初稿，提出了三点要求：
1.明晰责任、齐抓共管。2.分流管理、分级负责;3.查改并举，重在治理。
这段中，第一点、第二点的前半句用的都是顿号，而第三点前半句用的却是逗号，前后不一致。还有，第一点的结尾用的是句号，而第二点的结尾用的却是分号，也是前后不一致。这些都应该统一起来，才显得对称。公文的标点符号使用不能马虎，要注意顿号、逗号、分号、句号等点号表示的是不同层次的停顿，使用得当，句子就能形成起伏均匀的节奏感。后来，这段修改为：
1.明晰责任，齐抓共管。2.分流管理，分级负责。3.查改并举，重在治理。
这样，通过标点的规范使用，可以表明"三点要求"相互之间的平等、平行关系。
邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【三】
Dear Professor Wang,
亲爱的王老师：
On behalf of the Student Union of the English Department, I'm writing to invite you to give us a speech on Chinese History.
我代表学生会和英语角写信给你邀请你给我们做一个关于中国历史的`演讲。
We're going to have such a speech at 2:30 p.m. this Tuesday afternoon in the Meeting Room 401. It would be great honor if you can join in our activity
我们打算在401会议室星期二下午2:30开这个演讲。如果你能来参加我们的活动将是我们莫大的荣幸
Please inform us whether you could come. We're looking forward to favorable answer.
请告知我们你是否会来。我们期待肯定的答复
Sincerely yours,
Jimmy
吉米
邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【四】
Dear Mr Pan:
It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.
It's my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.
You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didn't mean you are old, you're young at heart. Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. You've got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.
I've got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, I'd like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?
Happy new year.
With every good wish.
Yours sincerely
Dali Wang
XXXX.X.X
邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【五】
Jiefang Road
Oct. 16， 2003
Dear Mike，
I'm going to the cinema next Sunday morning to see “ A Dream of Red ” ， and I have two tickets. Would you like to come?
The film starts at 9：00. Maybe we can meet at the gateway of the department store and have breakfast before the film starts.
Please give me a call if you can come. I'm at home in the evening.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Love，
Li Lei
邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【六】
初冬的时候，未寒气逼人，只有微微寒冷。
星期天，我和爸爸妈妈一起去探望我在荆州的姨婆婆。
经过两个小时的长途跋涉，终于拐进了那条小路，路口有个推着自行车，穿着玫红外衣的女孩——我的妹妹贝贝。
她示意我们的车向左拐，我早就迫不及待的下了车，我骑着她的自行车，驰向了姨婆婆家。
房前“父老乡亲”们站在一起迎接我们，互相打着招呼后，我们开始吃午饭。
午饭很丰盛：有红薯、甜丸子、腰花、菠菜粉丝汤、玉米、火腿肠……我吃了不少，这可是一顿极品的农家饭哦！
饭后，我和贝贝妹妹、航航哥哥一起上楼看电视，看了许多动画片，楼下忽然传来了爸爸的`声音：“廖嫣然！快下来拔萝卜！”我不知脑袋里在想什么，竟对贝贝、航航这些经常收割的孩子摇了摇手，“快点！拔萝卜去！”谁知？他们听了也兴致勃勃地跑了下来。
我三步并作两步地冲进田中去拔萝卜。我使出吃奶的劲，使劲往上拔，哪知我这个菜鸟把脆脆的白萝卜给拔断了，姨婆婆告诉我，要先把土刨开一些才行，我抓住萝卜左摇右摆终于收割了我第一个战利品，后来我还拔了胡萝卜，刨了姜，摘了大白菜。
在这里，用方言说就是地盘大，几乎没有任何机动车，所以我骑上贝贝的自行车大展身手，我骑得如闪电般快，心里暗暗得意，不料龙头一歪，连人带车地摔了个“嘴啃泥”，还险些掉进河里。后来航航哥哥骑上自行车，我才知道什么叫技术！他还可以带一个人呢！我坐在后面，清风拂过我的脸颊，鼻腔里满是清新的空气，心想：农村真好！
邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【七】
每年五一假期，我都要到老家小住几日。
我的老家有一栋三层楼房。爷爷总爱在墙角搭起棚架，种上丝瓜或葫芦。春末夏初，那些手掌型的叶子，绿得青翠，或浓或淡。长长的藤顺着竹架，蜿蜒地向上爬，一直到二楼阳台，真是俏皮。风儿徐徐，瓜叶伴着轻轻的风声，有节奏的舞蹈。瓜架上那些青青的瓜虽然还是那么小个，但已孕育着丰收的喜悦。青绿的叶，弯曲的藤，可爱的瓜，给房子镶上了没有雕琢过的天然花边。这样的装饰可比城市中高楼门前的石狮子亲切、质朴多了。
离老家不远处，有一条小河。阳光下的小河，显得格外清澈，一阵微风拂过，水面上泛起了层层涟漪，波光粼粼。有几只鸭子欢快地嬉戏着，时不时地把头伸进水里觅食，或是与同伴们嬉闹，“嘎嘎——嘎嘎——”的叫声在水上回荡。即使旁边有人在洗衣，它们依然毫不顾忌地我行我素，小河是它们自由生活的乐园。夏日里，我和小伙伴们常在河边举办属于我们的那别具一格的“泼水节”。掬起一捧水，向空中扬起。阳光下，晶莹剔透的水珍珠闪烁着，不一会滴答滴答地滴落河中，漾起圈圈波纹。我们乐此不疲地泼洒着。趁伙伴们一不留神，来个突然袭击，水花顿时在小伙伴身边溅开，偷袭成功了！成就感写满了我们幸福的脸庞。
往西行走500米左右，就是大片大片的田地了。田边的小草伸伸懒腰，仰起带着小露珠的脸蛋，甜甜地微笑。勤劳的农家人总爱在地里或种上新鲜水灵的蔬菜，或种上各种树苗。一畦畦，一垄垄，是那样绿意盎然。走在田间的小路上，空气是那样甜润，置身于大自然的怀抱，顿觉心旷神怡
每每回到老家总能找到一份优雅的宁静，呼吸一份自然清香的空气，享受一份独特迷人的乡村风光，那感觉真美！
邀请外教修改申请书作文英语【八】
要全面考虑，忌失之于偏
有一《关于命名表彰上海市双拥模范区县和爱国拥军模范街道(乡镇的决定》初稿，在决定命名16个区县为"上海市双拥模范区县"、146个街道(乡镇为"上海市爱国拥军模范街道(乡镇"后提出：
希望上述受到表彰的.区县和街道(乡镇再接再厉，不断创新，继续努力，开拓进取，进一步做好双拥工作，进一步巩固和发展军政军民团结的大好局面，推动上海双拥工作再上新台阶。
这段中，只是要求受到表彰的区县、街道(乡镇"进一步巩固和发展军政军民团结的大好局面，推动上海双拥工作再上新台阶"是不够的，本市各单位和驻沪各部队都要这样做。同时，表彰性的《决定》最后写"希望"时，希望的对象一般包括两个：一个是受到表彰的单位(个人，希望他们再接再厉，另一个是其他单位(个人，希望他们向受到表彰的单位(个人学习。公文中，特别是提出的希望和要求，要全面考虑，兼顾各方，反映出整体思维。
后来，这段修改为：
希望上述被命名的区县和街道(乡镇再接再厉，不断进取，争取双拥工作再上新台阶。
并在其后补充了一段：
希望全市各级党政组织和驻沪各部队向上述被命名的区县和街道(乡镇学习，进一步做好双拥工作，巩固发展军政军民团结的大好局面，推动上海双拥工作再上新台阶。
这样，"希望"的对象比较周全，所提的要求也比较切合实际。
