四级作文开头通用模板【一】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
四级作文开头通用模板【二】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
四级作文开头通用模板【三】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
四级作文开头通用模板【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文开头通用模板【五】
最近《三十而已》这部剧在网上引起热议，听说了它讲述三十岁女性群体的野心和打造现代独立女性群像的噱头，我抱着好奇和期待的心理看完了电视剧和剧本，结果却令人大失所望。
首先，制作组想要表达的核心观点并不突出。剧中虽然有三十岁左右女性生活困境的展现，但并未有更深刻的探讨和表达。“三十岁也很精彩”的虚假泡沫背后仍然是老一套：女性的年龄焦虑、职场内卷化、浮夸的消费主义观念、精英主义和刻板无聊的人物塑造。导演虽然试图通过抓细节来提升内容质感，但显得很刻意。
剧的内核仍然是在营造种种焦虑和树立林有有这样脸谱化的角色当靶子当剧情爽点，细节和表面的东西再怎么变，也不改其本质。如同写着“打折：50元起”的商场售卖牌，上面小到可忽略不计的“起”字才是真实，虚假的价格不过是引人上钩的诱饵。在肥皂剧式的戏剧冲突前，观众期待看到的是“打脸小三”、“甩掉渣男”、“做人生赢家”，而大可能不会去思考和探索三十岁女性生活中更多真实的、本质的东西。它抓住了很多人的心理，因此热播，但徒有虚名，远远不值得8.0的高分。
作为一名二十岁出头，小康家庭出身的大学生，三十岁，对我来说仍是个遥远的数字。我还无需像《三十而已》中顾佳那样操劳家庭和工厂，也不用担心陈屿和钟晓芹那样冷漠割裂的婚姻关系，不用像王漫妮一样，不得不在有钱的另一阶级的客人中周旋，累到病倒也要忍着向家人报平安。看起来，除却挂科的忧虑外，愁云似乎还未笼罩我的山头，它们在很远的前方四处飘散。但事实真的如此吗？
比起他们随时随地斗智斗勇的，装着端着的生活，我的生活有时简单、无聊、甚至可以说是难以忍受的空虚，有时又充实而有趣。我可以独自旅游，可以打义工，可以学新的东西，可以无婚姻承诺无顾忌地谈恋爱，花大把时间看书、看电影、看音乐和戏剧演出……看起来能做的事很多，但我花着父母的钱，偶尔兼职赚赚零花也远不能支撑自己的生活费和学费。三十岁有三十岁的苦闷，二十岁有二十岁的忧愁。不同年龄面对的人和事不同，世界便大为不同。二十岁左右因苦恼学业、家庭、人际关系等等而出现心理问题甚至自的青年人不少。他们大多不像三十岁已经有工作的成年人，虽然辛苦，但有掌握自己生活的能力。在我看来，年龄并不能决定一切，它只是人生时间轴上的一点。如果说剧中三十岁的女性是婚姻、工作、父母的三明治馅，那么二十岁出头的青年们实际上也不过是家长、学校，社会的三明治馅。看上去生机勃勃，对未来一切都充满了希望，但因为自己赚钱，所以仍有选择的权利，而二十岁的学生群体，大多还不能够经济独立，大学只有短短四五年，在打破头的竞争中结束十几年的.素质教育，几天十几天内决定自己的未来，以为能够松口气了，又被与高中完全不同模式的大学所迷惑，还没搞懂社会究竟什么模样，就被投到人才市场，因为“饺子”下得太多太满，投进去时甚至没有声音。毕业时应聘，HR通常也更倾向要有几年工作经验的。但才毕业的学生哪来的经验呢？而更多更多没有考上一本，没有读大学甚至没有念到高中的“二十岁”们，也在努力打工糊口、赚钱养家，思考那灰暗的，看不清真实模样的未来道路，年龄真能代表一切吗？还是不过是列车临时停靠的站台，有着不同的风景和心情？我们要怎样长大，怎样平和地迎接衰老和亡，而不是一味掀起焦虑、增加压力、逼迫竞争，在我心中，这才是更重要的事。
