雅思大作文怎么展开【一】
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹，缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例：A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.（一项调查显示。。。）
"65%"让文章看起来有些假，有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
雅思大作文怎么展开【二】
此类段落不论字数多少，都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多，但仔细永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。
雅思大作文怎么展开【三】
我首先来到了第一展厅，里面大都是商代的铜器。在我看来，最精美的要属刻着鱼的盆子了，上面刻着一条条大小均匀鱼儿，而且都朝着一个方向游，还有波涛汹涌的江水，那鱼身上的鳞特别清楚，一条条鱼栩栩如生，我想那时的国家可能也是井井有条，象鱼儿一样有充地游吧！
接着，我们来到二楼参观了第二展厅，里面取引人注目的是一颗晶莹剔透的钻石，大约有1.8厘米宽，1厘米高，出土在平阴。这块钻石被一根很粗的透明塑料管撑了起来，在灯光的照射下闪闪发光，光耀极了。它共有57个切面，是古代人民的巧手一面面仔细切成的，是他们智慧的结晶。
我来到第三展厅，里面有大大小小的木制的罐子，仔细看看这个，原来上面清清楚楚地刻着《红楼梦》的故事，连姑娘们的头发也刻得丝丝分明，可真算得上巧夺天工啊！
这次展览不只展出的.是文物，而且展示了古代劳动人民的勤劳的双手和充满智慧的大脑，我希望我们国家的古代文明能一直发扬光大，不断激励着一代又一代的人们不断努力前进。
雅思大作文怎么展开【四】
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
