四级作文写的快可以往下写吗【一】
过年了，小伙伴们兴高采烈的相约出来放鞭炮，而我却静静地坐在家中，一直没碰鞭炮。平时十分活波的我，最喜欢放鞭炮的我怎么不放鞭炮了呢?这都是因为那次沉重的教训。
放寒假的我回到了爷爷的身边，在那里比在爸爸妈妈身旁好玩又自由许多!想怎么玩就怎么玩，爷爷也不约束我，我就像下山的顽猴上蹿下跳，这不闲来无事就来到了楼下的小广场放鞭炮。我放的是一种三响炮，可以一支响三下，而且声音特别大，比起普通的单响炮好玩有趣多了。“砰砰砰”，“砰砰砰”真过瘾啊!我乐得都忘了回家。渐渐地，我开始不满足于一种玩法，于是我变着法子玩，做“手榴弹”来炸水，炸土，炸树根……欢笑的声音一阵比一阵高，可是一场灾难正在悄悄发生。
我带了十盒炮，玩着玩着只剩下一盒了!我打开这一盒，用打火机点燃一支，可是刚一点燃还没甩出去，外圈红色的引子就蹦了出来，燃烧的引子通红通红的，就像一个小火球扑向我的脸。“啊!好痛，好烫，好像有只身上着火的蚂蚁在爬!我用手捂住了脸可伤口更疼了!打火机也随之掉在了地上，炮也被我甩在脚下“砰砰砰”的炸开了，顿时，我整个人被吓傻了，剩下的东西也乱扔在了地上，脸颊仍旧火辣辣的疼。过了好一会儿，整个人才醒过来，地上落的东西也不管不顾了，拼命的往爷爷家跑。回到家里，眼睛里还有泪水，急忙跑到卫生间，对着镜子左看右看，这伤口就在眼睛下面，我以后会不会什么也看不见了，或者从此再也摘不下眼镜了!这放炮太危险了。爷爷看到我连忙给我抹上了药膏，可还是留下了伤痕，更留下了个沉重的教训。
唉，放鞭炮一定要注意啊!不然就会重演我的悲剧!
四级作文写的快可以往下写吗【二】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
四级作文写的快可以往下写吗【三】
花开花落，岁月如梭，窗前的那棵小树苗已长成了一棵参天大树;冬去春来，时光消逝，现在的我已经不同以往了......就让我来告诉你，现在这个不同以往的我有什么变化吧!
我现在呢，已经完全不是以前的那个我了，记得小学的时候，我的成绩没考好，只考了第七名，我的心里就很愧疚，自从那次考试之后，有许许多多的.事情缠着我，我是天天头疼啊，到学校里也有点事令我烦恼，我这是天天受罪啊，不久就有许许多多的烦恼找上门来，我是怎么甩也甩不掉它们。但是现在的我呢，不会因为这一点小事而烦恼，这次失败了，不代表下一次就失败，都说：“失败乃成功之母”，难道不是吗?现在的我，每天脸上都会挂着笑容，以后呢，有再多的烦恼来找上门来我都不怕，我会把它们抛到十万八千里之外去。从这件事的对比是不是觉得我和以前很不一样呢?这就是不同以往的我。
通过这件事的对比，我觉得我再也不是那个烦恼多的人了，以后我会把烦恼一一都抛在脑后，把不好的事情通通忘掉，留下一些开心的事情来做最美好的回忆，这就是不同以往的我。
四级作文写的快可以往下写吗【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文写的快可以往下写吗【五】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
