我的朋友中考英语作文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
我的朋友中考英语作文【二】
每个人都有自己的梦想,有人想当作家,有人想当飞行员,有人想当航天员,我呢想当人类的工程师-教师。有人也许会问我:“当教师有什么好的，工资低，工作又辛苦，还不被人重视”，“家有五斗粮，不当孩子王嘛”但是你们有没有想过，如果没有老师教的知识，那我们岂不是很愚昧，正因为有了老师教给我们的知识，我们人类才能越来越聪明，越来越发达，也正是因为老师赐给我们一叶扁舟，我们才能在知识的海洋里遨游。白天，老师站在三尺讲台为我们呕心沥的讲课;夜晚,月亮已经爬上了树梢,可老师还在那摇曳的灯光下辛勤的为我们作业本上打着道道鲜艳的红勾……也许当一个人被成功的喜悦包围时,他会忘记自己的亲人,但他决不会忘记自己的老师,因为他的成功也有老师的一份功劳。
我也一样，无论我长多大,走多远,我也不会忘记自己敬爱的老师,因为我是在老师的呵护,爱的沐浴下长大成才的,无论我走到天涯海角也不会忘记自己的老师,所以我向往老师这个职业。现在我还是个小学生,我以后一定要勤奋、努力地学习,勤学苦练,长大后才能走向梦想中的三尺讲台。
我的朋友中考英语作文【三】
每个人都有自己的梦想，一只只可爱的小动物也不例外。但每个人的梦都不一样，有的人想成为知识渊博的科学家;有的人想成为造福人类的发明家;还有的人想成为一名忠于职守的人民警察……我也有一个简单而普通的梦想，就是当一名人民教师。
我认为，教师是一项神圣而崇高的\'职业; 如果说我们是花朵，老师就是辛勤的园丁;我们是飞鸟，老师就是无边无际的天空;我们是鱼儿，老师就是宽阔的大海……从入学的第一天开始，我们每天都和老师朝夕相处，徜徉在知识的世界里。老师的教诲就像雨露一样滋润着我们，让知识的花朵在我们心中灿烂盛开。
我们班的两位老师经过一个学期的辛勤劳动，最后学生给他们带来的是累累硕果。这时，老师感觉一股暖流流□的心房，自豪感油然而生，心里美滋滋的。此时的我觉得做一名教师是非常伟大的。
我想，做一名光荣的老师，就能在三尺讲台上传授一生所学;就能天天看着自己的学生开心成长，那该是多么幸福令人向往呀!如果真的有一天，我成为一名人民教师。无论地位高低贵贱的学生，我都要把我的价值奉献给他们。但是，要想成为一名优秀的老师，我想就要从现在做起，从每一件小事做起。养成文雅、和气、宽容的良好习惯; 在平时的学习和生活中，严于律已，并且善于发现他人的优点，取长补短;时刻准备着为教育事业奋斗终生!
一个人没有了梦想，就没有了奋斗目标，没有了前进的动力，就看不见前方的道路，也看不到未来的光明。没有梦想，就像没有翅膀的小鸟，不能在天空自由翱翔。拥有梦想，让我们看见未来的希望。拥有梦想，就有了一半的成功。梦想要靠自己坚定的信念和执着，要付出艰辛的努力，才能梦想成真。因此，为了实现这个梦想，从现在开始，我要为梦想努力奋斗!
我的朋友中考英语作文【四】
Zeng Qiao is one of my friends. She is a beautiful, outgoingand good-tempered girl. She smiles frequently. I think it’s her smile that makes her beauty. We live in the same dormitory, so that we always stay together, no matter going to classroom or having dinners. At first, I don’t like her very much, because she is always talking. It seems that she can’t stop open her mouth. I am a little bit quiet and introverted, so I seldom talk to others. But gradually, I find that she can have influence on others by what she says. Zeng Qiao likes sharing interesting things with others. For example, she likes telling us her funny stories of her childhood or her former classmates. She always tells me that I should be more extroverted and learn to talk to others. Under the influence of her, I communicate with others more frequently and I find that it feels so great. I am so grateful that I can have such a good friend.
曾巧是我的一个朋友，她是个漂亮活泼，脾气又好的女孩子。她很喜欢笑，我觉得是她的笑容使她看上去漂亮。我们住同一间宿舍，因此不管是去教室还是吃饭都形影不离。之前我并不喜欢她，我认为她太喜欢说话了，总是停不住她的嘴。相反我性格内向，喜欢安静，很少跟别人说话。但是渐渐地，我发现她是个善于用言语影响别人的女孩子，她喜欢跟别人分享有趣的事，那些童年的故事或是以前同学的事情。她经常开导我要变得外向，多试着跟别人说话。在她的.影响下，我跟别人交流也更多了，并且发现这感觉非常好。我觉得有这样的朋友很幸运!
