呼和浩特英语中考作文关键词【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
呼和浩特英语中考作文关键词【二】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
呼和浩特英语中考作文关键词【三】
爷爷比我大65岁，每当我和爸爸去爷爷家时，爷爷总是安详的坐在椅子上，品着茶，手里拿着一份报纸，眯着眼睛晒太阳，那一缕缕金色的阳光把爷爷银丝般的头发照的发亮。爷爷说，他最喜欢看太阳从东方升起，每一次太阳升起，就代表着新一天的开始，这一定是最美好的。
打我记事起，爷爷就在那处处散发着花香的老屋里住着。老式的门窗上的油漆已经斑驳，爸爸屡次要求翻新，爷爷硬是不肯，说：“人老了，就喜欢住一辈子老房子，老房子住着舒服呢！”在我的记忆里，爷爷家就像个百鸟园，各式各样的鸟儿都来此“观赏”，我想它们也是被这迷人的香气所吸引了吧！
爷爷最疼的.就是我，但凡有一点好吃的，爷爷总夹到我的碗里，说：“宝宝，你多吃！”每当这个时候，我总会歪着头看爷爷，边毫不客气地迅速吃光，一点也没意识到谦让老人。唉，现在想想，爷爷那么爱我，而我只是肆意的挥霍着爷爷那早已被加上期限的爱。
爷爷家的花，可真叫一个绝！有大的小的，红的黄的，茂密的稀疏的，无不展现出那多目的光彩。在形形色色花的中间，摆放着一盆强壮的植物，似树不是树，似花不像花，强壮的枝干上载满了金灿灿的果实，仿佛是太阳的专属，看着那一颗颗硕大的果实，嘴馋的我不禁伸手去摘一颗，在一连串噼哩啪啦的响声后，我饱食这水果的梦也随之打破了。我愣了一下，也不知是什么驱使我把那棵小金桔树给藏了起来，我心里明白，那棵小树因为要很久才会结果，所以成了爷爷的最爱，它不仅有美丽的花可以欣赏，还有丰硕的果实可以供人食用。这样一盆好东西竟然毁于我手，我真不敢相信！就这样，我怀着忐忑不安的心情睡了一夜，本想第二天跟爷爷说明原因的，谁知刚睁开朦胧睡眼的我，便发现在床头上有一袋金桔，虽然袋子很厚，但里面的东西依然清晰可见。黄灿灿的东西不禁使我的心震动了一下，眼眶不禁湿润了……我拿起一颗塞进嘴里，生怕它再掉了。轻咬一口，那甜蜜的汁液一下子渗进了肺腑，浓浓的爱意也流进了心里……“好吃吗？”我点点头，这才发现是爷爷在问。我连忙用手擦掉了那溢出嘴的汁，冲爷爷笑了一下，爷爷的眉眼里堆满了笑，那一刻，仿佛他是世界上最幸福的人。
流水般的水月一晃而过，我进入了初中，初中的生活使我变得更加忙碌了，与爷爷的联系也越来越少了。在一个寒冷的雨天，我意外的接到一个电话，电话那头是一个沧老的声音——是爷爷打来的。他叮嘱我要多穿衣服，注意身体。当他问起我学习成绩是，我羞愧万分，因为这次期中考没考好，我没敢对爷爷说，只是随便搪塞了几句话，爷爷是乎也听出了一点，便也没往下问了。就在要挂电话时，爷爷突然说了一句很想我，很久没见到我了的话，我愣了一下，泪水顺着脸颊滴了下来，不仅打湿了衣襟，也浸湿了我枯干的心灵。我想，那就是幸福的结晶吧！在结束与爷爷的通话后，我沉默了一会，此时的我思绪万千，脑海里像有理不清的细丝。学习的紧张使我无暇顾及爷爷那微弱的爱，摆在我面前的只是一大堆的作业和考不完的试卷，我只有努力学习，我想爷爷也希望我这样吧！
望了望窗外那阴沉沉的天空，听了听拍打在雨披上稀疏的雨水声，我知道，这风雨过后一定是生机盎然的春了，爷爷的花不仅开在满了花园，伴着浓浓的情开进了我的心里！
我依然不会忘那人。那花。那老屋。
呼和浩特英语中考作文关键词【四】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
呼和浩特英语中考作文关键词【五】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
呼和浩特英语中考作文关键词【六】
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微弱灯骤下，尖锐的钢笔细细触碰着婆娑的薄纸。灵感如同雪雾森林的冰融之水，涓涓流淌向东奔去。生命一瞬，释放本真的魅力，创作由此开始，创新弹指之间;转身，浪迹天涯。
手握一笔，握住
创作本乃创新，创作如此，创新亦然。每一次从心的创作，都是一次伟大的创新，让
轻拂薄纸，拂走迷惘，拂去不甘。记录由此开始，岁悠梦换，唯留文字不变轻风。墨汁浸入缝隙，墨汁浸入内心，一圈一圈，涟漪澜澜。不褪色的是记忆，被风干的是人生，细雨轻风，润入诗心，灵魂深处的感怀，记录着风雨更迭。
那些黑夜，那些黑夜执笔的人，必是孤独从心。窗外有浪漫的.烟火，窗外有闪耀的大厦，窗外有奔腾的车水。于己心，独守一湖，望月够梦。烟火一瞬，大厦短筑，车水马龙，尘世嘈杂甚此，怎奈心却依静。喧嚣不属于我，我有我的宁静。创作，静守澈湖，不动浮心。
懂得创新是一个
作家路遥曾在书中说道：“若是内心烦躁，毫无灵感的时候，我就会去沙漠走一遭，看看太阳，看看远方，一望无际的沙漠就是我的伴侣，我内心的荒土一下子变得肥沃。”他是一位文字刚硬却不失细腻的作家，他的经历引领着自身默默前行。因为他知道内心有孤单才会有创作，有创作才会有创新，所以他选择去寻觅，寻觅孤独。
创新本身是一个清苦的历程，越是伟大的人越懂得营造如何释放自我的氛围。伟人与常人的区别仅在于心有多大舞台就有多大，静默的存在，孤独的生活，就是创新的一切可能。
当世界喧嚣，还有纸笔，足矣;当世界沉寂，握紧纸笔，思矣。创作，是一个人心中孤独的狂欢;创新，是一个人生命里静默的尽头。将
一个人的生命或长或短，一个人的
呼和浩特英语中考作文关键词【七】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
