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雅思大作文中间段模板(雅思大作文模板四段式)

雅思大作文中间段模板(雅思大作文模板四段式)

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雅思大作文中间段模板(雅思大作文模板四段式)

雅思大作文中间段模板【一】

这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。

在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。

引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....

引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..

【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.

【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...

雅思大作文中间段模板【二】

在这个句子中,我们先选择advertisements,influences, people这三个词汇,然后开始准备扩句。

雅思大作文中间段模板【三】

虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

举例的常见表达方式:

for example,/for instance,(后加句子)

Such as/ like      (后加词组)

Take... as an example,

A case in point is that......

其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。

1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。

改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)

2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。

改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)

3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。

“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe

【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.

雅思大作文中间段模板【四】

您好!我是一个五年级的小学生,在晋江实验一小学读书。时间,是谁在你面前说:逝者如斯夫,不舍昼夜;是谁在你面前感叹:人行犹可复,岁月哪可追;是谁望着你讲:光阴似箭,日月如梭。时间你知道吗?每个人都是你的奴隶。我们无时无刻不在为你忙碌着,忙着接受,忙着认知,忙着收藏,忙着给予,忙着实现自己所谓的价值。可是,在一次次的忙碌中,我为什么没感觉到快乐,好像被什么给着实玩弄一番,我猜这就是你的魔力,我们都臣服于在你的脚下,越是去追求那些所谓的价值,越是感到时间的怪诞。

时间呀时间,请原谅我没好好的去珍惜你,举得你好漫长,一日一日的虚度你。只是一下子才发现你已经从我的.指缝里溜走了这么多,才发现原来你一直都给了我抓住你的机会。时间,你的用心良苦又有几个人能够明白呢?但你能无悔地向人们奉献着,你是值得我们有所尊敬的!一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴这是人类对你的赞美。也许在我写这封信时,你就已经从我身边悄悄走过了,希望这封信能随着我的心从蓝天,穿过白云,到达你手里。时间,愿你得到更多人珍惜。

学生:陈妤莹

雅思大作文中间段模板【五】

雅思考试有条写作指令叫做:Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法(exemplification。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非,然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。

雅思大作文中间段模板【六】

所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:

雅思大作文中间段模板【七】

时间状语和地点状语,都是你的扩句好朋友,不信我们来看:

Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(时间状语

Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名词状语

Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名词状语

即使是状语,也可以通过叠加将句子变得更加丰满。有能力的烤鸭当然可以通过状语从句定语从句等等来让句子更不一样。