烟台英语中考作文2023【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
烟台英语中考作文2023【二】
如果说暑假是童年的一首歌谣，那么出游就是一段最动人的旋律；如果说大海是孕育生命的摇篮，那么赶海踏浪便是我心中五彩的梦。
今年暑假，宁波持续高温，滚滚热浪把我困在家中。眼看就要开学了，我央求妈妈：“妈妈，我想去看看大海。”于是，妈妈便策划了一次短途旅行——山东烟台长岛之旅。
带着对大海无限的憧憬，我们乘坐的天蓝色飞机冲上云霄，载着我们一家三口，飞向美丽的渤海湾。
一转眼，飞机便在烟台机场着陆了，我们又乘坐大巴、轮渡，终于到达了目的地——长岛。
长岛不及宁波繁华，但无论是居民还是游客，都悠闲自在。天格外蓝，阳光明媚却不强烈，凉爽的海风沁人心脾，仿佛置身于秋天！
我迫不及待地奔向大海，大海用一浪高过一浪的潮水欢迎我们的到来。我光着脚丫，在沙滩上捡拾散落的贝壳。有的像小扇子，有的像一只鸟，有的光彩夺目，有的黯淡无奇……但它们在我的眼里都是无比华美的珍宝。
我一步步走进大海，任凭海浪打来，没过我的脚踝、小腿，直到大腿，再和着细细的沙子退去。忽然，我看到海水中有小鱼在游，还有披甲的小螃蟹。我一巴掌拍下去，一不留神小螃蟹钻进了窟窿里。我气不打一处来，下决心要捉住它。于是，我直接用手把它的巢穴翻了个底朝天，小螃蟹仓皇逃窜，我瞅准方向，悄无声息地用两只手拢住了它。不一会儿，小桶里的战利品越来越多，我心中说不出的满足！
夕阳西下，天边的晚霞护送出海的渔船回到了港湾。听当地人说，这片海湾原来是候鸟的迁徙地，可随着人类的不断入侵，如今再也看不到它们美丽的踪影，只能在“鸟阁”里看到冷冰冰的标本。现在我们越来越意识到环境保护的重要性，正在拆除风力发电机，希望候鸟早日归来。
随后几天，我们还游玩了鲸鲨海洋公园、蓬莱阁……收获非常丰富。我依依不舍地离开了烟台，可我不会和大海说再见。
烟台英语中考作文2023【三】
金阳暖暖，投射出一室静谧，轻启窗帘，钻进屋里的'风儿，携来幽幽粽香，又是一年端午节!不由得勾起我的绵绵思绪，似青烟般随风远去，飘向那个粽香淡淡，节味浓浓的午后。
经过一个多小时的辗转跋涉，父母和我终于来到了位于旅顺的奶奶家。新月高悬，天色已晚。一进大门，扑鼻的饭香直冲鼻腔，顿时让早已饥肠辘辘的我精神一振。例行公事地和迎在门前的爷爷打了声招呼，我便奔向餐桌，操起筷子，迫不及待地大快朵颐起来。
狼吞虎咽了好一阵子，吃得我油光满面。当我把目光从各色美食中“拔”出来时，恰巧瞥见被我忽视了很久的奶奶正满头大汗地在厨房中煮着粽子。
升腾的水蒸气带着灼热的温度扑向她的面颊，额头上、鼻尖上那细密的水珠也不知是水还是汗，颗颗若钻石般晶莹璀璨，在阳光的映衬下，分外耀眼，纵使有厨房拉门的彩色玻璃的阻隔，仍能刺痛我的双眼。她的一头白发如银似雪，发着柔柔的光。那光，应是她对儿孙堪比清泉般细腻、无私又源远流长的爱吧!她满脸的皱纹是无情岁月留下的痕迹，她微微颤抖的双手布满了老茧。原来奶奶已经这般苍老，可她现在这般辛苦又是为了谁呢?
想到此，我的双眸不觉泪光涟涟。忽然，眼前出现一个盛着还冒着热气的粽子的白瓷盘，托着它的是一双瘦削的手。回头，眸光流转，竟见奶奶的脸。她慈祥的目光中盈满无尽的爱意，微笑着说：“尝尝吧，奶奶自己包的，烫哈，小点儿口吃!”
我微微颔首，见她枯瘦的手灵巧地剥开粽叶，将莹白如玉的粽子放入我碗中。霎那间，幽幽粽香沁人心脾。夹下一小块，再蘸点儿糖，放入口中，淡雅的清香与浅浅的甜蜜萦绕心头，弥久不散……
“奶奶又捎来粽子了，快来吃呀!”妈妈的召唤将我从回忆中惊醒。望着桌子上一个个翠衣紧裹的粽子，嗅着渐渐氤氲开的淡淡粽香，想象着咬上一口后唇齿间化不开的香，我不禁抿嘴一笑。这般清香甜美、回味悠长的味道，若没有浸透奶奶满满的爱，怎能酿出如此令人难忘的节日的味道呢?
我终于明白：节日的味道，其实是亲情的味道;节日的味道，是无论走到哪里也忘不了的家的味道!
烟台英语中考作文2023【四】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
烟台英语中考作文2023【五】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
