学生批改作文的方法框架【一】
（1） 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ）
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows： in the first place， ___原因一_______.Furthermore， in the second place， ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People， however， differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view， on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand， ____原因二_____. Therefore， there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned， I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________， but also because _________. The more _______， the more ________.
（2）利弊型的`议论文
Nowadays， there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）___作文题目
______. In fact， there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking， it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly， ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes， "every coin has two sides"， __讨论议题______ is no exception， and in another word， it still has negative aspects. To begin with， ___缺点一______. In addition， ____ 缺点二______.
To sum up， we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play， and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case， we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
（3）答题性议论文
Currently， there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result， we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all， __途径一______. In addition， anotheer way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all， to solve the problem of ___作文题目______， we should find a
number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned， I would prefer to solve the problem in this way， that is to say， ____方法_____.
（4） 谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb： " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. （ also theoretically ）
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore， it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二_.
Itis not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
（2）利弊型的议论文
目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题
_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspJust As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides",is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with,To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题
into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.
( 3 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this pr______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concern
( 4 谚语警句性议论文
语 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our stu. ( also theoretically
______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____ With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语
_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..
★★★图表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the _____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases,significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to
show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned,
I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
学生批改作文的方法框架【二】
1、文章选材新颖，这件事，乡村生活气息浓郁，富有儿童情趣。读后令人身心愉悦，舒畅。
2。文章不仅表达了作者对父亲的爱，更多的是思念，不露雕琢痕迹而颇有情韵，描写生动，特别是词语和语句方面都很恰当，语言与风格：富有浪漫主义色彩，引起读者的阅读兴趣。
3、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强。以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分。
4、本文以……为线索，使用权文章连贯，流畅，衔接自然，同时，通过前后具体事例的对比。文章语言生动丰富，可读性强。
5、能过合理的想象，反映出意味深长的哲理，行文流畅，简洁，充分发挥了自己的想像力，文章清逸婉丽，流畅连贯，尤其人物语言幽默风趣，再加上一些精妙词语的使用，无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。
6、文章真实生动，情真意切，特别是……使用权文章极具感染力，发人深思。
7、叙述事情条理清晰，能正确地使用动词，运用比喻贴切，生动。献计献策读后能从中受到教育。
8、朴实自然的童心体现在文中，使文章散发着清新活泼的气息。
9、这篇文章以具体的事例，生动优美的语言，新颖别致的写法，表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞。
10、本文主要优点有三：
（1）本文能紧扣题目要求，完整地写了……的过程。
（2）结构严谨，重点突出。
（3）语言朴实，简洁，流畅，开头和结尾都很自然，准确。
11、开头简洁自然，结构清晰，心理描写真实，体现出作者良好的语言驾驭能力。
12、这篇短文的特点可概括为亲切，温馨，隽永。
13、文中描绘的……清新活泼，欢快明朗。字里行间跳动着的童心，使文章也有了生命力。
14、文章凭着丰富的想象，凭着多彩的`语言，将……呈现读者面前。
15、文章简洁明了，语言平淡朴实。
16、外貌描写形神兼备，人物形象突出。可贵的是曲笔入题，引起读者的阅读兴趣。
17、对……生动而详细的叙述，是本文的一天特色，也体现了作者观察的敏锐与细致。这是文章成功的一大要素。
18、文章来源于生活，小作者很会在生活中捕捉素材，是啊，如果没有清洁工，我们的环境将会变得不堪入目。文章语言朴实，人物的言行符合各自的身份特点，生活气息浓厚。
19、本文是一篇较为成熟的叙事明理之作，文章以准确流畅的语言，展示了实验的全过程，跌宕起伏，妙趣横生。小作者观察仔细，叙述时井然有序，对人物的描写，能切中要害，详尽而全面。文章读来饶有兴味。
20、文章开头交待得分清楚，起到总领全文的作用。结尾处寥寥数语，显示了作者探索科学奥秘的远大理想和坚定信心，催人奋进。
学生批改作文的方法框架【三】
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
