我的父亲英语作文五年级上【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我的父亲英语作文五年级上【二】
在期末考试中，我超常发挥，终于获得了名列前茅的优秀成绩。
回到家后，看到我的分数，父亲欣喜若狂。第二天，有人向父亲提起这件事，父亲自豪地挺起胸膛。这是父亲最自豪的\'事情。这时，我看到了父亲的自豪面。我的父亲像船帆一样，在无边无际的海上，任凭风吹雨打也不怕。记得那一次，是六一儿童节。虽然，我已经不是幼稚的小毛孩，但是父亲却还要给我庆祝。父亲答应我，下午下班时给我“肯德鸡”。我可开心了。我盼啊盼啊，叨啊叨啊，终于等到了父亲的下班时间。我欣喜若狂地跑到阳台前，抬起头。天哪，乌云密布，居然快要下雨了。真是“天有不测之风云”透过阴深深的天空，我失望地垂下了头，心里想：父亲现在回来，一定不会淋到雨，但却吃不了“肯德鸡”；父亲要是给我买“肯德鸡”，但会成了“落汤鸡”。
哎，父亲一定会因为下雨而着了慌，肯定把“肯德鸡”的事抛到九霄云外，我越想越气愤，生气我真倒霉，倒霉会碰到下雨天。哎，我大叹了一口气。在一旁收衣服的妈妈说：“呀呀呀，快要下雨了，你爸还不回家，真是的”啊，“哗哗哗……”下起了雨连妈妈都忘了，爸爸就别想了。“肯德鸡”——“泡汤”了。过了一会儿，门铃响了。我急匆匆地开门，只见父亲全身湿漉漉的，头上的水不时地往下掉，手上还提着2个袋子，我分明看到了袋子上写着“肯德鸡”和“新华书店”两个大字，却不敢相信。原来，父亲为了给我买节日礼物，被大雨淋到，我既兴奋又难过，父亲见我一幅呆楞楞的傻样子，轻轻地对我说：“孩子，节日快乐”。
我感动极了，忙接过袋子，拿来了毛巾，给……我知道，父亲为了我给我一些Happy，被雨淋成这个样子；我还知道为了借次机会来告诉我：“做人一定要诚实守信”是啊，当我想到这，就想到帆。父爱就是样，我相信你也有，只要你所想要的，父亲就一定会不惜一切代价，来完成你的愿望……父亲的肩是我们的天柱，父亲的臂腕是最安全的港湾！我爱你！
我的父亲英语作文五年级上【三】
我爸爸是一个认真工作，努力学习的爸爸。在工作中，他勤勤恳恳，一心希望公司能够成为知名的大企业，每天都忙到很晚，饭由“必修课”变成了“选修课”，原本应有3人用餐的餐桌上，缩减到2人。“儿子哦，老爸回来哩！”这句话在19点前听到几乎是“天方夜潭”。爸爸已经年过40了，但是他时时刻刻都不会忘记一个词----“学习”，去年我爸就拿到了硕士文凭。爸爸会为学到一个新知识而欢心鼓舞，一与我谈论值得议论的实事新闻他就眉开眼笑，妈妈还笑我们像“忘年交”。
在生活上，他也是个好爸爸。我不小心做错了是或者是犯了错误，他从来都不会骂我，“打”就更无从谈起了。我和爸爸还有一个共同的爱好，那就是体育，什么世乒赛啊，足球世界杯啊，都是我们两个合力从妈妈手中夺过遥控器才得以收看的。最让我记忆犹新的一次是在98年，半夜里，我爸把睡的.如猪一般的我叫了起来，为什么？正式因为电视上正在放98世界杯的8强赛，我和老爸看的不亦乐乎，老爸真够哥们的。
但是他对我在学习上的要求却很严格，也其他方面大相径庭。我一有懒惰的行为我爸就会说我不认真，还经常买辅导书，练习书给我，俨然一副严父的形象。我学习不是很好的时候，就是爸爸最苦恼的时候，他可以愁到茶饭不思，可以不睡觉为我想办法，也许他会像伍子婿那样“一夜愁白了头发”，我不能让爸爸多添白发，我会好好学习，让他多几分青春的色彩。
朋友，严父，榜样，爸爸就是这样的一个人，我爸爸是世界上最好的爸爸。
爸爸你永远来我心中都是最棒的。！
我的父亲英语作文五年级上【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
我的父亲英语作文五年级上【五】
Mr Gao lives in a town .When he was twenty-five ,his son was born .He calls him Gao Ling .The little boy is clever .He and his wife love him very much .
It’s September 1today .A few school year begins Gao Ling is happy and wears his most beautiful clothes .He’s going to school with his new bag .
“Let me take you to school ,dear ,”said Mrs Gao .
“Thank you ,mummy ,”said the boy .“The school isn’t far from here .I can go there myself .”
At school a teacher met the little boy and asked ,“What’s your name ,my little friend ?”
“Gao Ling ,sir ,”answered the boy .
“How old are you ?”
“Six ,sir .”
“What’s your father’s name ?”
“Gao Dalin ,sir .”
“How old is he ?”
“Oh ,”the teacher said in surprise .“Is he as old as you ?”
“Yes ,sir ,”said the boy .“He became a father only on that day when I was born .”
我和我的\'父亲一样老
高先生住在一个小镇上。他二十五岁时，他的儿子是天生的。他把他叫做高岭。这个小男孩很聪明。他和他的妻子非常爱他。
这是九月1今天。新学年开始高岭是快乐的，穿着最漂亮的衣服。他将背着他的新书包上学去。
“让我带你去学校，亲爱的，说：”高夫人。
“谢谢您，妈妈，”男孩说。“学校离这儿不远。我可以自己到那儿去的。”
在学校，老师遇到了小男孩问道，“你叫什么名字，我的小朋友?“
“高岭，先生，”男孩回答。
你多大了?“
“六，先生。”
你爸爸叫什么名字?“
“高大林，先生。”
他多大年纪了?“
“哦，”老师吃惊的说。“他和你一样大吗?“
“是的，先生，”男孩说。“他父亲只在那一天，当我是天生的。”
