英语作文问路篇六年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文问路篇六年级【二】
一天早上，小猪吃完早饭就到森林里玩。这里，高大的树木郁郁葱葱，小草长得青翠茂密，小猪玩着玩着就迷路了。这时小熊正好从旁边经过，小猪大声叫道：“喂!狗熊，你快告诉我怎么走出森林。”小熊生气地看了它一眼，转身就走了。小猪大声叫道：“喂喂喂，你还没告诉我怎么走呢!”小熊头也没回，继续向前走。
这时从草丛里爬来一只乌龟，小猪又跳过去大叫：“喂!老乌龟，你来告诉我怎么走出森林。”乌龟看着它，叹了一口气，也走了。小猪莫名其妙地抓抓脑袋：“它们为什么都对我不理不睬呢?”
小猪一直到晚上也没有走出森林，它急得哇哇大哭起来，又害怕又饥饿。这时一只乌鸦从天上飞过，乌鸦看见小猪就问：“请问你怎么到现在也不回家呢?”小猪回答：“我不知道怎么走出森林。”并把刚才问路的事情告诉了乌鸦。乌鸦自告奋勇道：“我来带你回家吧。”
到家后，乌鸦告诉小猪：“你要懂礼貌，不然人家是不会告诉你的。”“谢谢你，我下次一定会礼貌待人。”小猪诚心诚意地向乌鸦道谢。
英语作文问路篇六年级【三】
小猪嘟嘟今天打扮的十分的帅气，原来嘟嘟是要去参加小兔贝贝的生日Party。嘟嘟可没去过贝贝家呀！
嘟嘟走到一个十字路口迷了路，正着急呢！忽然看见一只乌龟正慢悠悠的走了过来，嘟嘟连忙上前非常有礼貌的说：“乌龟弟弟，你知道去蘑菇村怎么走吗？……”“叫我什么，都180岁了，太没礼貌了。”还没等嘟嘟把话说完呢，这位乌龟爷爷便生气的走开了
嘟嘟纳闷的看着还没走远的乌龟爷爷“有事需要帮忙吗？” 哦，是一条长着胡须，但看上去很绅士的牧羊犬，嘟嘟还是很有礼貌的说：“狗爷爷，您知道去蘑菇村怎么走吗？”“不，我看上去有那么老吗？今年可只有10岁啊！真是岂有此理。”他看上去比乌龟爷爷更加生气。
嘟嘟无可奈何的继续往前走，迎面走来一头大象，嘟嘟想：这庞然大物的家伙年纪一定不小了，肯定得叫爷爷。嘟嘟仍然非常有礼貌的问：“象爷爷，你知道去蘑菇村怎么走吗？”小象先是一楞，马上又哈哈大笑起来：“你叫我爷爷，可我才两岁呢！”嘟嘟的脸刷的红了，摸着头非常难为情的说：“对不起，小象弟弟知道去蘑菇村怎么走吗？”“带去吧！”小象愉快的说。………
英语作文问路篇六年级【四】
寒假里的一天，闲来无事，我决定一个人骑车回老家家转转。我将耳机塞进耳朵里，听着时而激昂时而平和音乐，但一段时间后我的心却被遥远路途消磨了情感，胳膊在空中如同静止一般，时间将它悄悄麻木着，手指早已僵硬在了车把上。眼中只有远处那耀眼的车灯和擦身而过的.车辆，我继续前行着。
我机械的望了望四周，想要分析周围的环境是否和大脑中的记忆一致，糟了，眼前的一切怎么如此陌生，我迷路了。
一家人缓缓向我走来，我们萌发了问路的念头，但那家人看了我一眼后，便匆匆离去，丝毫没有与我交谈的意思。问路的心顿时沉寂了下去。
时间在流逝，我却前路渺茫，当我再次看到一个孩子时，那颗没落的心终于又重新跳动了起来，而且因为时间的紧迫而跳动的更加激烈。我整了整自己凌乱的头发，并努力露出八颗牙齿，尽量让自己看起来更好亲近一些。
我迎上去对着小孩笑了笑，一脸温和地问道：“小朋友，请问张留村怎么走？”孩子似是被这突如其来的问话给吓到了，呆滞了一会儿才反应过来，已到嘴边的地址，却被一个冷漠又刺耳的声音制止：“谁让你跟陌生人说话的！我们不知道怎么走……走，跟妈回家。”看着小孩被胖女人拉着，一位老大爷抽着老式的烟袋慢悠悠地出了我要的地址，还没等我道谢，他便转身走开了。
新年的炮竹声在耳边响起，我领着小侄子走向村里的小卖部，一进门，我竟然又看到了那个女人和孩子，我猛地站住了，小侄子还没有反应过来，便被我拉着走开了。
我真想问问那位妇女，你知不知道只有你自己心里清楚，就算别人再怎么问，如果你骗自己，那谁也不知道答案。
