铜陵中考英语作文范文【一】
玩，小朋友们都喜欢，但是，你们有没有去铜陵市天井湖公园玩过水上气球呢？我刚刚玩过，非常的好玩，即惊险又刺激。
星期六的下午，爸爸妈妈带我到天井湖游玩，刚进公园，我就遇见了我的同学周田澍、崔灿和龙龙，玩过游乐场后。走在景色如画的天井湖堤岸上，妈妈说：“想不想要一顶用柳树枝做成的花环呢？”“嗯”我立即回答到。于是，妈妈悄悄的为我折了几根柳树枝，帮我做了一顶漂亮的花环，戴上花环，我高兴极了，让爸爸帮我照了好几张照片。
随后，爸爸妈妈又带我来到了水上游乐场所，看到许多小朋友在五彩缤纷的大气球中欢快的玩着。我对妈妈说：我也想玩！于是，我和一位不认识的大姐姐配对，共同钻进一个粉红色的大气球内，进入球内后，我立即和那位大姐姐共同用力踩动，努力使气球朝湖中滚动，在我俩的配合下，大气球左右摇晃着向湖中“游去”，岸边不时的传来爸爸妈妈的加油声。不一会儿，我俩就玩的汗流浃背了！可是非常的开心。在玩的过程中，我还和那位姐姐相互介绍了自己，成为了好朋友！
铜陵中考英语作文范文【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
铜陵中考英语作文范文【三】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
铜陵中考英语作文范文【四】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
铜陵中考英语作文范文【五】
今天是六一节，我和同学王宗航，一起去了盼望已久的天井湖公园。
一进门，两排松树就跃入我们的眼帘，随后还有一片美丽而鲜艳的花映入眼帘，有黄的、紫的、白的、蓝的、红的……，非常好看。
我们首先来到了租船的地方，我们租了一条船，荡漾在天井湖上。天井湖的水真静啊，静的让你感觉不到它在流动；天井湖的水真清啊，清的可以看见江底的沙石；天井湖的水真绿啊，绿的仿佛一块无暇的翡翠。船桨激起的微波扩散出一道道水纹，才让你感觉到穿在前进，岸在后移。我们在船上唱起了歌：“让我们荡起双桨，小船儿推开波浪…… ”我们不一会儿就到了天井，据说天井上通天，下通地，永远都不会流光，我们往下一看，哇！天井好深啊！我们不禁倒吸了一口冷汗。
游完天井，理所当然的要去儿童乐园大玩一通，我们首先来到了体能乐园
，我们准备比赛一场，于是向“爬雪山”跑去，“爬雪山”，顾名思义就是往上面爬，然后再滑下来，我一马当先，爬了上去，没想到这样做很消耗体力，连四分之一都没有爬到就筋疲力尽了，我只能慢慢地往上爬，而王宗航却很聪明，只是慢慢的爬，我竟然追不上他！过了一会儿，他拼尽全身的力气往前冲，冲到转弯处，纵身一拐，就滑了下去，我懊悔不已，早知道刚开始就不跑那么快了！王宗航到了终点，哈哈大笑起来，我更加懊悔不已。
随后第二项比赛又开始了：罗汉桥，这项比赛就没有原来那么简单了，这次还可以扰对手，我们的目标是：没有蛀牙！不是的啦，开个玩笑而已，实际上是到达对方刚开始的位置，就算获胜了。我们刚开始的时候，双方都只是斗来斗去，都没有走，我突然来了一个“出其不意攻其不备”，以迅雷不及掩耳之势跑到了对面，王宗航刚走一步，只能认输。
接下来，最后一次比赛开始了：“大渡河”，我向前冲，不想竟然摔了下去，大概是由于我太胖的缘故吧，我不甘心，可是光爬上来就用了一分钟，之后我虽然慢慢的走，但还是摔了一跤，最后用了四分33,王宗航走路轻盈如飞，不一会儿就到了终点，只用了1分56秒，我服了！还是我太胖了！
之后，我们又玩了几个项目，就回家了。
铜陵中考英语作文范文【六】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
