英语书信作文扣分标准【一】
Dear Paul,
How was I to know that you were watching me sleep? I awoke to see you laying there and just then, you smiled and said hi and that just melted me. I wish with all of my heart that I could wake to your beautiful eyes for the rest of my life.I hated to leave but as I have told you, I left a big part of me with you.
It is yours now so, take care and tread lightly. I wish that I could be with you now as you face so many struggles, but know that I am there in spirit and am praying for everything to work out for you. No matter where this life takes us, together or not, know that you and your girls will always be in my heart and "my favorite." Love always,Amanda
英语书信作文扣分标准【二】
尊敬的江苏援建者：
你们好！
我是你们支援的富新学校的一名学生，经过地震的洗礼，灾后的富新学校在江苏省徐州市及社会各界爱心人士的倾力援建下，在全校师生的共同努力下，如自豪的凤凰，浴火重生。今天，绿树成荫，大楼拔地而起，全校师生正以饱满的热情，感恩奋进用爱与理想书写着富新教育的新篇章。
自愿者来了，解放军来了，无数国内好心人士千里救援还有一些海外同胞写信为我们加油鼓劲。地震后，虽然让我们失去了很多，可是也让我懂得了许多得到了许多。正是因为有你们的鼓励，才让我们在困难面前挺起胸膛，在灾难面前无所畏惧，将痛苦化为力量成为我们前进和努力学习的动力。
在我们最危急的时刻得到了来自全国人民的温暖和关爱，江苏徐州人民在短短的一年之内，为我们修建了结实的学校。学校的容貌焕然一新。让我们有了宽敞的教室为我们创造了好的学习条件和学习环境，让我们能在明亮的教室力安心学习。让我们感谢所有帮助我们关心我们的人民感谢江苏人民。
大灾显大爱，当我们成长在爱的摇篮里，安坐室内读书，不要忘记，是谁用点点滴滴的爱来建造我们今天美好的家园。
我要把你们给予我们的今天，折成一艘记忆的小船，载着我这颗感恩的心，飘啊飘，飘向那美丽而又遥远的地方。
受人滴水之恩，当涌泉相报。努力吧，回报江苏人民的支援，从我做起，从现在做起，从生活中点点滴滴的小事做起，江苏人民无私的大爱已经深深刻在我的脑海里，使我不断努力，不断前进。
祝：
江苏人民身体健康！幸福快乐！
英语书信作文扣分标准【三】
英语书信作文扣分标准【四】
Dear Cindy
There are many rules at my home,but I like these rules.Because they are good for me.Every morning I have to get up at half past six.And I must do exercise before breakfast.Then I go to school.At5:40pm,I get home.I cant play with my friends becauseI must do my homework first.I can watch TV,but I must finish my homework.and I have to go to bed before 9:30om.Im busy.but very happy.
Yours Zhao Liang
英语书信作文扣分标准【五】
Dear Mr Cooper,
I work at the Friendship Bookstore on Dongfang Road where you often come to buy books.The other day when you bought a dictionary at our bookstore I made a mistake abut the price.You looked at two different editions of the same dictionary,one costing 30 yuan and the other 21 yuan.You took the 21-yuan but I accepted 30 yuan from you.I didn't find out my mistake until you had left.Will you please come to the bookstore to get your change or to return your dictionary and get a 30-yuan edition instead? I apologize for whatever trouble this is causing you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
