good friends in my eyes的作文【一】
1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。
2、字数在100字以内。
good friends in my eyes的作文【二】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
good friends in my eyes的作文【三】
我读六年级了，担任过我的班主任的老师一共有三位，这里我要写的是陈老师。
陈老师，她那两道弯弯的眉毛下长着宝石般发亮的眼睛。鼻梁上架着一副眼镜，看起来既有学问又特别有精神。她平时讲话细声细语的，那柔柔的\'声音传来，似微风般不停地吹去我们心灵上的灰尘。一句话，陈老师在我心目中是一个美丽而又温柔的人，不然我们女生怎么会给她一个“good老师”的美名呢！
陈老师总是那么和蔼可亲。当我们听话时，她会笑眯眯地和我们谈话。即使我们做错了事，也不会骂我们，只会耐心地帮助我们改正错误。
前段时间，我的同桌陈浩楠又在外教课上捣蛋了。当时外教老师可谓是火冒三丈，气得直叫“魔鬼，魔鬼！”于是，那节课的课堂纪律分得了有史以来令人瞠目结舌的最低分——零分。当陈老师知道了这事后，我看见她的眼里有了泪花，我知道那时陈老师真的伤心了。接下来的那节课，陈老师含着泪极其耐心给我们讲道理，让我们明白课堂纪律的重要性。在那次以后，我们在外教课上就表现得很棒，尤其是陈浩楠，他也得到了外教老师的表扬。
“春蚕到丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。”陈老师啊，您整天就像蜜蜂那样，辛勤采花，精心酿蜜。日复一日，年复一年，多辛苦呀！您更像那辛勤的园丁，用自己的汗水浇灌这美丽的我们这些花朵，使我们绚丽绽放。
六年级:贾梅琪
good friends in my eyes的作文【四】
This afternoon I went to the park which was built recently near my home.In the park,I saw many beautiful flowers and trees.The air was quite fresh and brids sang happyly.All the people there were singing,dancing and playing games.What a lovely place!
今天是五天。我去公园与我的家人庆祝这个节日。那里是许多人在公园里。他们中的一些人被拍照，别人是去观光。多么幸福地看着他们。
今天下午我去最近建成的我家附近的公园。在公园里，我看见许多漂亮的`花和树。空气很新鲜，鸟儿地歌唱。所有的人那里是唱歌，跳舞和玩游戏。多可爱的地方！
good friends in my eyes的作文【五】
写记叙文要按照事物发展的\'客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
good friends in my eyes的作文【六】
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
