四年级英语作文autumn【一】
春雨后阳台的小石缝里，时常趴着几只灰黄的蜗牛。每当阳光洒在长满青苔的方砖时，它们就一只只缓缓爬出来，伴着朝露径直向墙沿上爬去，渴望在最高点多沐浴些阳光。
清晨，一夜的雨停了，阳光透过水滴把阳台照得亮晶晶的。墙面上倾刻问充满了生机，一只只小蜗牛好奇地探出头，慢慢地向着有阳光的墙沿爬去，在墙面上留下了一道道透亮的痕迹。小小蜗牛细心编织着它们重重的壳下那大大的梦想在少有生机的阳台，这是一处极有活力的景致。 对蜗牛的回忆很少，只想起孩提时候住在乡村的老石屋里。每到春雨过后，墙角缝中总会有一只蜗牛背着另一只蜗牛在墙壁上爬，找个洞钻进去。再一次的雨后，便多了许多小蜗牛。这时，我总会同玩伴们到长满许多青苔的老墙根下翻开那些久未挪动的石头，提几只漂亮的小蜗牛放到
筷子上，看谁的蜗牛爬得最快。可渐渐长大后，也便渐渐忘了这个游戏。
生活中再也没有蜗牛，只有成绩了。
想到这里，心中忽然涌上几丝无奈与怀旧。这时，那几只渴望阳光的蜗牛已爬到了半墙腰上，似乎都有些累了，丧失了先前的热情，有几只开始往下爬，有的索性缩回了壳里，不再往上了。 仅有只极小的蜗牛仍有点顽固地向阳光靠近，继续着这有趣而艰辛的旅程。
我叹了口气，开始为那些无心向上的蜗牛们惋惜，嘲笑那几只回头的蜗牛不如把回头的精力用在坚持的信念上，都只差着一半啊。但那口气听来更像是叹息自己。
曾几何时，自己不也在为自己没有坚持努力而无法考好中考而叹着相同的那口气么?偶然回过神。发现那只小蜗牛已爬上了墙沿，与我一同沐浴着雨后清晨的阳光。它尽情地把弱小的身体从壳内向壳外尽力舒展，算是自己成功的仪式。 蜗牛实现了它渺小而简单的梦想，重重的壳里裹着轻轻的仰望。我们一同在此刻呼吸每一缕阳光的味道和泥土的气息。眼前恬静的青山，远处清晰的平房，虽不迷人，但极和谐地罗列在水灵灵的乡城里。
心中一阵莫名感动。或许，蜗牛就像我一样的无奈但充满希望；更或许，我就是一只努力爬向高处，渴望阳光的蜗牛，驮着重重的壳一步步往上爬，幻想乘着那片叫理想的叶子往前飞，寻找属于自己的蓝天。
晨风吹干了蜗牛流过的泪和汗，在墙上化成那道透亮的痕迹，在阳光下闪闪发光。
四年级英语作文autumn【二】
同学们，你们养过小动物吗？我曾经养过一只小狗，他的名字叫“多多”。
多多是一只博美狗，一身雪白的毛配上头上戴的蝴蝶结，真是可爱极了！
他吃东西的时候不像其他小狗那样狼吞虎咽，总是满满的吃，吃的.时候，左手打右手，真高雅，而且不浪费粮食。他睡觉的姿势也非常优美，把前腿往后一伸，把前爪往前一放，然后头夹在两只前爪之间，不过一会儿，就睡着了。
别以为人才会看眼色行事，其实狗狗们也会。如果他看你心情好，便跳到沙发上，依偎在你的怀里，马上让自己成为你的“宠儿”。如果他看你心情不好，便会回到窝里，不来烦你，等你心情好了再陪你玩儿。
我非常喜欢多多，可惜他已经被送到了小姨家。再多多被送走后，小姨经常在看我的时候把他带上，现在，他已经生了六只小狗了，全部成了警犬。
我真想念我们家的多多。
四年级英语作文autumn【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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四年级英语作文autumn【四】
我家养了两头小白猪。它们全身雪白，一对大耳朵像两把有力的扇子，忽上忽下不停地扇动;鼻子长长的，一对圆圆的鼻孔，像两个小山洞;鼻子下面藏着个大嘴巴，不仔细看，真不会发现鼻子下面还有张嘴;鼻子上面有一双让人捉摸不透的小眼睛，满脸的皱纹，实在不怎么好看。
农忙时，妈妈下地干活，让我在家喂它们。我把猪圈门打开，把调好的食料放在猪圈门口，馋嘴的小猪鼻子尖极了，香味早被它们嗅到了，还没等我把猪食倒在食盆里，它们就一拥而上，把满满的一盆猪食给拱洒了。猪食溅到我脸上、裤腿儿上、褂子上，气得我顺手拿起棍子想揍它们。可刚举起棍子，它们就“嗷嗷”地叫起来，似乎在向我求饶。看着它们那可怜的样子，我又不忍心让棍子落下去了。
小白猪渐渐长大了，更暴露出了它们的本性--贪吃、贪睡。每当妈妈喂它们时，它们便狼吞虎咽，大口大口地吃起来，还不停地发出哼哼声。
