五篇英语作文四年级【一】
今天，我又读完了一本书，叫《狗来了》。讲述的是狗的孩子们都成家立业了，老伴也去世多年，狗走啊走，准备干些什么。狗会木匠，还能出色地用口哨吹出九首歌曲，它还会嫁接植物，还是位有证书的游泳救生员和消防员，它还会做鸡蛋面、疙瘩汤、土豆烧牛肉、香草布丁，总之，狗在很多场合都能派得上用场。
他走到了一家叫强悍的海因里希，狗进了这家店，点了许多好吃的，店长说：强悍的海因里希是我去的爹，我叫温顺的海因里希!温顺的.海因里希想让狗到他们的店里当保卫，专门把不规矩的顾客扔到店堂外，狗答应了。过了一会儿，来了一头猪，温顺的海因里希让狗把猪赶走。狗不明白，那头猪经常来，它好赌博，迟早会把你的口袋掏光!玩牌时，它会作弊，反正你是赢不了的!了。狗不信，结果是猪真的把狗口袋里的钱赢光了。餐厅里的人都说了一定要把猪关进监牢，但狗还是相信猪，就准备和猪一起去周游世界。
后来，狗又进了剧院，猪与狗一起演王子寻福记，猪在舞台上捣乱，狗按耐不住，只好自己走了。狗又去当老师，又帮猫照看三十只小猫，狗住院了。
世界总是多姿多彩。什么样的人都有，需要自己去交朋友。
五篇英语作文四年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五篇英语作文四年级【三】
我认识了一条狗，它温顺可亲，乐于助人，这只狗就是奥地利的克里斯蒂娜·涅斯特林格笔下的主角。内容讲得是一条狗离开家，想到外面的世界去看看，去闯闯。故事从这条狗先遇到了作弊的猪开始的，最终狗帮猪实现了当明星的愿望;狗还当上了学校里的教师……这都是写狗在外闯荡时发生的事情。
我觉得狗很善良，因为通过它在海因里希的酒店里当保安就能看出这一点。有一次，一只小花狗在抢一只老猫盘里的鱼，老猫气得直叫唤，狗连忙把小花狗按到地上，看着很像自己儿子的小花狗，就和善地对它说：孩子，别再胡闹了!这样做太不值得了。狗又小心意意地把小花狗放在酒店外面，对它说：你早就应该上床睡觉了，你妈妈正在为你担心呢!
这是一本好书，也是我最喜欢的一本书，里面有很多小故事，每一个故事都很引人入胜，希望你们也前来观看!
五篇英语作文四年级【四】
在这个暑假里，我看见过《风吹小号的天鹅》、《安徒生童话》……但我最喜欢《狗来了》这本书。
这本书主要写了：狗的孩子都长大成人了，老伴也去世多年，狗决定离开家，到辽阔的世界去。
我最喜欢这本书的狗因为它喜欢帮助别人，一天，狗进了医院以后，有一只猫，它生病了，它有三十只小猫，小猫的妈妈不看他们，他们的爸爸进了医院，没人照顾他们，狗已经好了，它说：我已经好了，我去吧!你的家在哪里?左伯阁胡同七号，住在四楼，也可以说成是阁楼，但他们从那出不去，最后他们到了熊的嫂子的家，熊的嫂子去旅游了。他们把小猫送到了它爸爸那里。
读过了《狗来了》我明白了：帮助别人，快乐自己。帮助别人就是帮助自己。
五篇英语作文四年级【五】
今天我读完了《狗来了》这本书的第二章——狗进了剧院。
这一章主要写得是狗帮助猪成为了一名远近闻名的演员。猪是一个既贪婪又懒惰的人，我刚开始觉得猪的愿望有点太不现实了，像猪这样说话声音都嘟囔不清的人，肯定当不上演员。但没有想到在狗无私、友好的帮助下，猪最后成为了一位著名的演员，真是不可思议。
这篇文章让我懂得了一个人，只要他有理想，只要努力，就一定有机会实现。我们要像狗一样真心对待朋友，给予别人无私的帮助，我们也会得到开心和快乐。
