兰州中考英语作文2023【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
兰州中考英语作文2023【二】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
兰州中考英语作文2023【三】
前天去了一趟兰州，在那儿呆了三天，看到我们甘肃的省会城市如此的雄伟壮观，我不禁感到了由衷的感叹和自豪！
——题记
火车坐到五点多，我们来到了兰州。兰州是我们甘肃省的省会城市，它十分大，也可以这样来形容，它大得有好几个清水县那样大，大得让人难以琢磨到它的位置，我刚开始还担心兰州会不会很热，但是这个假想立刻被胜于雄辩的事实所代替了。兰州很凉，就像兰州铁路局早上的广播主持人说的：“三伏天下雨还能把人的身体浇透，除了兰州也是没哪儿了。”我坐在火车上，看着窗外淅淅沥沥的小雨，想着兰州的温度，不禁忍俊不禁，笑了起来，思绪万千。
刚到兰州的时候，气温逐渐降低，由刚在火车上看见的牛毛细雨到了足以震天撼地的瓢泼大雨，虽在当头是艳阳高照但是那雨仍然像断了线的珠子似的飘飘洒洒的落下来，落下来再溅到地上，从地上又飞速的弹到人们的身上，只要遇见一辆很大的公共汽车，那么你就要遭殃，因为这些公共汽车会让你的身上全部都是水。
初至兰州，眼里全是新奇，想着我们甘肃省的省会城市到底是一座怎么样的城市，或大、或小、或威武、或雄壮、或凉、或热，面对这座未知的城市。我不禁感到了一丝丝的茫然无措，但是很快，这种心里就被那一丝丝的惊叹、快乐所代替了。
兰州里的\'美食很多，但是我最喜欢的还是兰州的牛肉面，兰州牛肉面不同于我们这儿的一样，他们是把牛肉面当做早餐，早上起来，吃一碗牛肉面神清气爽，再乘上一碗滚烫的面汤，难道不是人间一道独特的美味吗？
兰州的第一天就在还欢声笑语中度过了，好期待第二天的到来！
